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A Nocturnal Adventure

The sun descended slowly
Behind the purple hills, sending
Long shadows behind her.
Night enveloped the vista.
I walked barefoot on the beach.
Did I hear sirens singing?
Their alluring song invited.
Come to us, paradise was there.
But I know of their tricks.
Ulysses tied himself fast to a mast
To escape their cannibalistic taste.

I moved on and walked on the sand.
Leaving deep footprints behind me.
Only one pair.  Where were the others?  
The haggard moon barely showed
What lay ahead.  Did I see a small cabin?
The smell of pancakes and coffee
Filled the breezeless air.
I entered and felt elated. For there she was
Ready to meet me and greet me.
Happiness at seeing her so lovely
My love now was filled to the brim.


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I am sure everyone knows the story from ancient Greece about Ulysses and his wanderings.
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Kiser Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 1:50 PM
This has wonderful flow, very enjoyable.
Hawkins Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 12:28 AM
Beautiful poem, Victor. Your poetry is full of true love and romance that paints pictures and awe for the reader. Take care, Shirley
Edmonds  Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 11:15 PM
A lovely story/poem, the sirens singing has to be ignored. Pancakes, coffee and a lovely lady, what a beautiful ending… Belle
Kitchin Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Victor, well penned, enjoyed this one and love the ending.
M  Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 2:59 AM
Lovely poem Victor! Touching ending! Cuddles….Debx
George Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 8:17 PM
After your rambling through the beach, hearing the alluring song of the waves, you entered a small cabin where not only pancakes and hot tea awaited you, but your beautiful lady love too. Very romantic and highly inmaginative...
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 7:26 PM
You've recreated that picture in my mind of Ulysses tied to the mast so he wouldn't go crazy over the sirens songs. Great write..
Poet Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 12:58 PM
I must express my deep admiration for your poetic masterpiece, which showcases the remarkable artistry of metaphors, Victor. The captivating essence of breakfast's fragrant allure never fails to elevate the spirit. Moreover, the journey embarked upon within your verses is nothing short of a thrilling escapade! Finally, the concluding twist exudes an air of profound romance, leaving an indelible impression on the reader's heart. A fave for me
Buehler Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 11:31 AM
An enchanting tale. The ending is picture perfect. :)
Anaya Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 9:16 AM
Ulysses a cunning trickster himself, I must read more about the Grecian literature. Thank you, Victor for a dramatic and romantic verse.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Touching imagery and fulfillment. The scent of breakfast always a lift. Hugs ~ Kim
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 5:30 AM
And what an adventure it was! The turn in the ending, highly romantic!
Gentile Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Victor, you have so beautifully crafted a poem of breathtaking imagery! So well done! Happy Friday !
Ricci Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Good Morning Victor. Yes you know how to melt a reader's heart. This is excellent with imagery and the emotive factor as well. Just Beautiful. Love and Blessings now and always (smile)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 3:21 AM
Y am on the mend. Soon I'll be fit as a fiddle but without strings, God willing. Hugs.
Seeker Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 2:28 AM
You are incorrigible! A delightfully romantic poem, Victor. We await the sequel
Buhagiar Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 3:22 AM
Censored :)
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 1:45 AM
- A wonderful poem, Victor ... dreamy and love-filled poem :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 3:45 AM
You poetry is always top class. Hugs.
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