Debra L Brown Poet Haiku

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A Moment In Time

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                                       warm summer evening
                                 bright, lovers moon smiles fully ~
                                       gray sky, downy clouds

                                         gazing at the moon
                              sweethearts share moments in time ~
                                        soft, doting embrace

                                       distance sounds of ships
                                 warm water splashes on rocks ~
                                       ocean sings and rolls


                                       written on 4/10/2022
                                  Brian Stand Premiere Choice 
                                     Sponsor: Brian Stand

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Darlene De Beaulieu July 30, 2024 at 11:14 AM Hello Debra Brown, This poem to me seems to be be romantic. As a couple being by the water would be romantic on a moon lit evening. Enjoy your day m y frikend. /Darlene/

Beata Agustin January 1, 2023 at 5:16 AM Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Mpho Kgaswane November 27, 2022 at 10:01 AM Hi Debra this is an interesting poem and caption.

Lynn D. October 8, 2022 at 2:39 PM Nice! Good imagery! We'll done!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri September 10, 2022 at 1:34 AM A lovely moony poem with fine imagery painted in words. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Nancy Kaufman September 8, 2022 at 7:04 AM this is such a beautiful write. Enjoyed it so much Deb. Not sure where you are in the contest but best of luck. Nancy

I Am Anaya September 4, 2022 at 2:07 PM Simply beautiful, real poetry Deb. Good luck in the contest! (My caption code was Deb) no wonder why? ~Anaya

Michael Tor July 16, 2022 at 3:29 PM What a lovely write and such a beautiful picture of the Sunlit moon. This one is a favorite Debra when will you start posting again we miss your writing? God bless and hope to see you soon...

Susan Lawrence June 25, 2022 at 1:47 PM Just beautiful Debra . I was transported immediately to the scene with sights and sounds and ocean air! Blessings, Susan :)

Swetha Vangaveti June 6, 2022 at 8:04 PM This is such a beautiful poem! This took me to the moments of the past!!!

M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 2:26 PM Beautiful lines make this a very pleasant read.

Paula Goldsmith May 26, 2022 at 12:38 PM A lovely write/picture. Love This One. Wish I was on your beach. I also wish you would write more. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................

Rico Leffanta May 24, 2022 at 10:49 AM Time to wake up and write more! Aloha!

Bill Baker April 30, 2022 at 3:12 PM Lovely, romantic evening on the beach. I enjoyed this poem, Debra. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Jennifer Proxenos April 27, 2022 at 9:31 AM How more perfect can it be, in love, heads resting on each other, moonlight hitting the lapping waves, clouds gathering letting the moon peep through now and then, and further out where the big ships are, the 'ocean sings and rolls', magic time for lovers. Breathtaking write Debra. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman April 21, 2022 at 8:18 PM Excellent, Debra, 3 especially.

Bj Legros Kelley April 21, 2022 at 2:48 AM Debra, this is so sweet, such a lovely romantic and beautiful poem <3 God bless you my friend ~BJ

Anil Deo April 18, 2022 at 10:50 PM My sister in Jesus Christ, where are u? We knowvyoubgave a family ... Just praying you all are well. We need post-hokuday poems ... Shalom shalom in Jesus

Paul Callus April 16, 2022 at 11:45 AM Definitely a special romantic moment in time, Debra, accompanied by the song of the sea. ~ have a lovely weekend! // paul

Alexis Y. April 12, 2022 at 2:24 PM Hi Debra, Your photo and strings of haikus are a perfect fit. I enjoyed this very much. Well done. Have a nice day;-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2022 at 12:22 PM Sounds perfect! God bless you, Debra!

Joanna Daniel April 12, 2022 at 5:14 AM Love the haikus and the fitting picture, Debra, awesome:) and my captcha is AWE:):)

Joseph P. DiMino April 12, 2022 at 4:28 AM Paradise! A beach...a lover...nothing more needed. I have been blessed to know such perfect moments in time. Thank you for the reminder.

Gershon Wolf April 11, 2022 at 7:29 PM The 'downy clouds' and 'the soft doting embrace' sweep me away, Debra. Lovely penned, Gershon

Ann Peck April 11, 2022 at 9:07 AM So very lovely, Debra. Debra L Brown April 11, 2022 at 11:44 AM Thank you, Ann, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

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