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A Moment In Time

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                                       warm summer evening
                                 bright, lovers moon smiles fully ~
                                       gray sky, downy clouds

                                         gazing at the moon
                              sweethearts share moments in time ~
                                        soft, doting embrace

                                       distance sounds of ships
                                 warm water splashes on rocks ~
                                       ocean sings and rolls


                                       written on 4/10/2022
                                  Brian Stand Premiere Choice 
                                     Sponsor: Brian Stand

Copyright © Debra L Brown | Year Posted 2022

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/30/2024 11:14:00 AM Hello Debra Brown, This poem to me seems to be be romantic. As a couple being by the water would be romantic on a moon lit evening. Enjoy your day m y frikend. /Darlene/ Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 1/1/2023 5:16:00 AM Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Login to Reply

Mpho Kgaswane Date: 11/27/2022 10:01:00 AM Hi Debra this is an interesting poem and caption. Login to Reply

Lynn D. Date: 10/8/2022 2:39:00 PM Nice! Good imagery! We'll done! Login to Reply

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 9/10/2022 1:34:00 AM A lovely moony poem with fine imagery painted in words. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too. Login to Reply

Nancy Kaufman Date: 9/8/2022 7:04:00 AM this is such a beautiful write. Enjoyed it so much Deb. Not sure where you are in the contest but best of luck. Nancy Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 9/4/2022 2:07:00 PM Simply beautiful, real poetry Deb. Good luck in the contest! (My caption code was Deb) no wonder why? ~Anaya Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 7/16/2022 3:29:00 PM What a lovely write and such a beautiful picture of the Sunlit moon. This one is a favorite Debra when will you start posting again we miss your writing? God bless and hope to see you soon... Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 6/25/2022 1:47:00 PM Just beautiful Debra . I was transported immediately to the scene with sights and sounds and ocean air! Blessings, Susan :) Login to Reply

Swetha Vangaveti Date: 6/6/2022 8:04:00 PM This is such a beautiful poem! This took me to the moments of the past!!! Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 5/30/2022 2:26:00 PM Beautiful lines make this a very pleasant read. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/26/2022 12:38:00 PM A lovely write/picture. Love This One. Wish I was on your beach. I also wish you would write more. Have a great/blessed day writing away................. Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 5/24/2022 10:49:00 AM Time to wake up and write more! Aloha! Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 4/30/2022 3:12:00 PM Lovely, romantic evening on the beach. I enjoyed this poem, Debra. Thanks for sharing, Bill Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/27/2022 9:31:00 AM How more perfect can it be, in love, heads resting on each other, moonlight hitting the lapping waves, clouds gathering letting the moon peep through now and then, and further out where the big ships are, the 'ocean sings and rolls', magic time for lovers. Breathtaking write Debra. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/21/2022 8:18:00 PM Excellent, Debra, 3 especially. Login to Reply

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 4/21/2022 2:48:00 AM Debra, this is so sweet, such a lovely romantic and beautiful poem <3 God bless you my friend ~BJ Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 4/18/2022 10:50:00 PM My sister in Jesus Christ, where are u? We knowvyoubgave a family ... Just praying you all are well. We need post-hokuday poems ... Shalom shalom in Jesus Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 4/16/2022 11:45:00 AM Definitely a special romantic moment in time, Debra, accompanied by the song of the sea. ~ have a lovely weekend! // paul Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 4/12/2022 2:24:00 PM Hi Debra, Your photo and strings of haikus are a perfect fit. I enjoyed this very much. Well done. Have a nice day;-) Alexis Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/12/2022 12:22:00 PM Sounds perfect! God bless you, Debra! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/12/2022 5:14:00 AM Love the haikus and the fitting picture, Debra, awesome:) and my captcha is AWE:):) Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 4/12/2022 4:28:00 AM Paradise! A beach...a lover...nothing more needed. I have been blessed to know such perfect moments in time. Thank you for the reminder. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/11/2022 7:29:00 PM The 'downy clouds' and 'the soft doting embrace' sweep me away, Debra. Lovely penned, Gershon Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 4/11/2022 9:07:00 AM So very lovely, Debra. Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 4/11/2022 11:44:00 AM Thank you, Ann, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

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