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The sun remains hidden behind a blanket of gray on this snowy winter afternoon. It doesn't matter. Gone for now are the playful sailors who dart about Salt Fork lake in better weather. The blackbirds caw from atop the old oaks that inhabit this place, their pleas echoing in the still and silence that surrounds us. Hawks circle high above in hopes of spotting prey, riding thermals like the leaves that softly ride the chilling wind. The cold feels invigorating and lets us know we are fully alive. Love is a celebration to be held during all of the four seasons, the seasons of the years of our lives. Time whooshes by and yet slows to a crawl when we are here, our respite from the storms of life. Today, and every day, we bow to our Maker and give thanks for the snippets of peace that make life tolerable, even enjoyable for a time. We are here. We are alive. We are in love. And the world is a little better place than it was yesterday.

living in the moment
watching the sparrows in peace
time stands still for two

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Date: 8/31/2025 5:15:00 PM
Congrats Tom -- in the moment is where to be. Excellent piece. PS - I will be entering a Haibun in Mark's contest, its my one and only. Meanwhile, keep up the pace!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/1/2025 6:09:00 PM
I'll look for it
Date: 8/25/2025 7:17:00 AM
Time out from all the madness in the world in a place that lets you breathe and reflect on life's true wonders. I can understand fullly how cold can be invigorating just by reading your words. A lovely haibun Tom. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/25/2025 9:30:00 AM
Thx G
Date: 8/20/2025 11:47:00 AM
Dear Tom, a simply splendid Haibun; a quiet celebration of love, nature and faith so poetically expressed. Your crisp atmospheric imagery brings me to the center of the serene scene to feel both the winter chill and the hearts' warmth. Congratulations for your shining trophy win in Mark's contest! Well-deserved my poet friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Suze
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 2:39:00 PM
Way cool thx
Date: 8/19/2025 10:46:00 PM
"Love is a celebration to be held during all of the four seasons, the seasons of the years of our lives.{" It is on the axis of love that the world rotates. When love is there, even the storms of life will pass on without causing us serious damage. Back to your haibun with Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 4:42:00 AM
Much thx Valsa
Date: 8/19/2025 9:52:00 PM
This is beautifully written! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 4:42:00 AM
Good to see you in my space Jaz
Date: 8/19/2025 7:25:00 PM
Captivating from first line to last Thomas!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 4:42:00 AM
Hey thx nuch
Date: 8/19/2025 7:20:00 PM
Tom, thank you for sharing your beautiful moment with us, and for giving credit where credit is due. Congratulations on your first place finish on Mile 8 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 9 has already started.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 4:41:00 AM
Thx Mark. This one's in the anthology
Date: 8/19/2025 7:14:00 PM
Congrats to Two for making Time stand still for Mom Nature, Sparrows & Gold, Sir T. Long live Duality in the One.x.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 5:03:00 AM
Long live it! Thx
Date: 5/23/2025 10:05:00 PM
Yeah. That Is Nice. Thanks In The Future. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/24/2025 6:09:00 AM
Plenty of acorns at Salt Fork. Thx
Date: 5/23/2025 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured on soup!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/23/2025 4:00:00 PM
Thx Karen
Date: 5/23/2025 8:20:00 AM
This is featured on the week homepage, I remember how this made me feel a warmth. Congrats on an awesome haibun!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/23/2025 8:40:00 AM
Thx. Let me know what you think of my latest
Date: 11/29/2024 1:02:00 AM
Beautifully written, Tom. Sounds like heaven to me :) Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving! Charlie
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/29/2024 5:36:00 AM
It's our getaway spot. Thx. Much
Date: 11/26/2024 3:32:00 PM
Captivating and so tenderly sweet! Xo
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/26/2024 3:42:00 PM
Thx. This one is in the new anthology
Date: 4/24/2024 5:27:00 AM
Tomszy, you have such deep blue eyes! I wish i had blue eyes, haha random! I know but thought of reading something that i havent seen here before, and wanted to comment, your wify looks beautiful too! And the poem i think iv read on insta before but it deserves another comment for how seamlessly Youv written this! You do this form so well. I love the haiku too. Bless peace and love that you both share. Pleasure reading this!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/24/2024 5:42:00 AM
Thx inky. So busy with work but will try to post something new soon. Grateful for your support
Date: 9/25/2023 1:23:00 PM
i've found one i haven't read before! the title reminds me of a beatles song..you're good at writing these tranquil literary cameos (nice pic btw)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2023 1:26:00 PM
And yes, that song influenced the title
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2023 1:25:00 PM
Thank you. I think haibun fits my writing style best. Straightforward storytelling
Date: 9/3/2023 9:01:00 AM
This is such a lovely write inspiring positivity of life Tom.. Thank you for your visit to my page, sorry I have not been much on here... God bless... ~ Ani
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/3/2023 9:29:00 AM
Much thx Anitha
Date: 8/19/2023 11:00:00 AM
I love that you have written this in the present moment. It is so relatable and reiterates for me how much nature is a solace for us. Sharing with a loved one multiplies the joy. I have often wanted to try this form. You are very good with it. Blessings, SuZ
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/19/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thx. A true haibun, as I understand it, should be written in the present, a moment or snippet of reflection while in nature.
Date: 8/15/2023 5:58:00 AM
Ahh!! A very inviting work. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/15/2023 6:01:00 AM
Thx Sara. I find my poetry getting more bio oriented of late. A new experience for me since I've always preferred writing fiction
Date: 8/13/2023 2:55:00 AM
I love the description and the nice twist at the end of the prose part. A nature poem turns into a love poem, love and nature shared. There's also such great optimism.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/13/2023 6:03:00 AM
Yes, some of our best moments are spent in nature's isolation. Thx Mike
Date: 8/12/2023 4:58:00 AM
So glad you are back with us all Tom, it must be kike coming back to see all your extended family. Enjoy your poetry down to earth and responsible sensible and hugely creative, wish you and your partner blessings always. Jennifer
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 5:14:00 AM
Thx Jen. Yeah I don't write with fancy words I'm just a simple storyteller at heart. Yes, she's a cutie
Date: 8/11/2023 3:29:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Hello. I very much like how you begin with darkness and then show us the light. That was a nice and comforting thought and expression because you leave us readers with hope and inspiration. Thank you for sharing with us. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Take care (smile)
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/11/2023 5:24:00 AM
You have a nice weekend as well Lisa
Date: 8/10/2023 5:24:00 AM
Beautiful written poem Tom,love the picture as well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/10/2023 6:00:00 AM
Much thx
Date: 8/9/2023 10:27:00 PM
I'm touched by your awesome words, I'm so happy for you both. Living a dream! If winter is that special, you must tell all about your summers escapades. God bless! Love the beautiful photo of you two! How lucky
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/10/2023 6:01:00 AM
Actually, I have a haibun about our time spent on a mountain top. I'll post soon. Thx Anaya
Date: 8/9/2023 7:43:00 PM
wonderful write and you and your wife just perfect. Romios, Panagiota wrote a poem for you ... the Knight
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/10/2023 6:01:00 AM
Appreciated Eve. I looked at it. Not sure it was for me?
Date: 8/8/2023 8:41:00 PM
Beautifully written. Life is not all joy, but there are 'snippets of peace' that make life joyful and peaceful ! With a thankful heart let us stay in love. Beautiful picture and a beautiful haibun, Tom !
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/9/2023 4:53:00 AM
Yes, we all need them. Thx Valsa for stopping by
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