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A Child's Summer

A child needs a place where he can run unhindered by some wooden fence or wire. He needs a spot beneath the summer sun, a peaceful breeze to soothe him should he tire. He understands the time to pause in play; to rest upon a hill and thus renew; to study clouds that fleck the azure skyway until they rearrange and pass from view. A child wants to laugh and taste and see; to hear a rushing stream; to twirl and leap; to dip bare feet in mud; hide in a tree and greet the stars before he has to sleep. A child sheltered from the sun's caress grows pale and little knows of happiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/5/2020 9:40:00 AM
This sure describes my childhood! Long, unstructured summer days in the sun and shade, refreshed by a breeze or a drink from the garden hose, soaring on bikes from one adventure to the next, gazing at clouds and stars, going to bed exhausted but happy. A fave for me ~ John
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Date: 11/3/2016 5:02:00 AM
Very valuable lesson conveyed in this beautiful sonnet, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Lainey
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Date: 2/10/2015 2:41:00 PM
Absolutely charming, it is however coincidental that you didn't even know me yet and you still wrote a poem about me.
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Date: 9/18/2012 12:48:00 PM
Going a way back, but I still can't find one I haven't read. This is sweet, sensitive and beautifully written. I wonder about children today. I see them plodding home with a ton of books. Hey! Let's make little adults of them, seems to be the idea. I totally disagree. Love, daver
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Date: 7/16/2011 7:01:00 PM
This is so true my friend. The city is no place for a kid. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/6/2011 2:09:00 PM
Some good sentiments nicely expressed. A child does indeed need such things. A child needs to be allowed to be...a child. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/6/2011 2:08:00 PM
Some good sentiments nicely expressed. A child does indeed need such things. A child needs to be allowed to be...a child. Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:15:00 PM
that is truly beautiful :) thanks for sharing that with the world check out mine about " beautiful child"
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Date: 6/11/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, love it ~ always *skat wyps
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in this contest..a wonderful write and this is definitely how kids should grow.love, gautami
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:59:00 PM
Great Win and poem Andrea, i can see the child at play, eyes wide with wonderment, jumping around today. xo Don
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:15:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Andrea
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:03:00 AM
That is so true you have to experience all these little things to truly live and enjoy nature. Wonderful poem. Now I have to go and cut Al's hair. Yes, I cut his hair because I got tired of hair dressers doing a terrible job. I do a fine job so now I cut it myself, beginning to be jack of all trades. ha ha. love phyl
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:57:00 PM
Oh Andie so well written such pathos, I bet you were thinking of your grandchildren! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Beautiful piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/8/2011 12:27:00 PM
congratulations for this well-deserved win ( as I predicted, your name is two/three centimetres above mine L O L )....phrases which i especially liked were "fleck the azure skyway" and "greet the stars" . As a personal feeling, the last couplet somewhat detracted from the whole ( please don't feel offended at the opinion of a rank amateur novice)....best wishes ...... Syd
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:40:00 AM
I love this one - Many congrats to you, Andrea : )
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:03:00 AM
congrats Andrea on your great win with this delightful write my friend.. enjoy another super one..
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:56:00 AM
congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:41:00 AM
OOPS! LOL- I started talking about my girl, I said First...Now second, I loved that you didn't go all clitche on us...your bare feet were in mud, not sand and instead of using 'good-night' he 'greets' the stars. Nice turn around. Good writing...anyhoo....lovely read, take care, Cyndi (note to self comment on poem first and on my daughter second, next time :-) )
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Barefoot"contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:31:00 AM
Loved his one, Andrea. First, the subject hits me close to home. My girl has had a lot of colds and yet I do not want to hide her away from other kids. Well, she went to a play group and (predictably) 3 days later was sick. Hubby says to me,"That's it, she is never, ever going back there! We're abusing her!" I understand him, but I said, "Keeping her away from all the things she adores, what is that?" Sigh...the conflict of protecting and letting be..I'm livin' it :) Cyndi PERFECT POEM!
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:20:00 AM
congrats on your fourth place win in the contest Andrea, just beautiful
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Date: 6/8/2011 6:41:00 AM
The freedom spirit of a child or children has been captured splendidly in your Sonnet Andrea. It's delightful to read, good luck in Francine's contest :)
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:27:00 PM
Wow! I can see my granddaughters in your poem. Do I live in a Bahay Kubo? Not yet. But I found a sand dunes close to the sea. I want my Bahay Kubo made in that place when I retire. It will be a getaway. Actually there are ready made Bahay Kubo in the Phillipines. Thanks for reading my poems. Dalila
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