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From my window, I watch children at play, their color blindness encourages me. They do not let skin shades stand in their way playing there together, where all can see. I hear laughter with no sarcastic sting, there are no racial slurs used to degrade. I observe as these fledgling birds take wing, and worries for their futures slowly fade. A culturally closed society bleeds like a wound in need of a suture. It festers with hate and anxiety, and yet, these children can change that future. Watching these kids play, I don't feel sorrow; I feel hope for a better tomorrow.

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Date: 11/22/2023 6:28:00 AM
As long as innocence lasts. Enjoyed your musings, Emile, very relevant topic. Warmest congratulations on your top win
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Date: 11/22/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Unseeking, as always, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2023 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on first place! Well done, my friend!
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Date: 11/21/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Kim, as always, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2023 12:56:00 PM
So true Emile, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win,
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Date: 11/21/2023 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, as always, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2023 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet on innocent children playing. Great win.
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Date: 11/21/2023 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Jay, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2021 2:30:00 PM
Back again with another big congratulations Emile - well done my friend! Linda
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Date: 1/4/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Linda, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2021 10:47:00 AM
That all would be "color" blind Emile! Our children teach us such important lessons with their innocent wisdom. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 1/4/2021 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Sam, we can learn both humility and harmony from our children, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2021 8:44:00 AM
Well said Emile, loved this one even more second time around, it's message of hope truly resonates especially now! Congrats on another great win!
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Date: 1/4/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thanks John, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/29/2020 4:50:00 AM
well said! Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 9/29/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2020 7:11:00 PM
Soo lovely! Yes children have the magic of driving away our sorrow. Ani
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Date: 9/28/2020 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Ani, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2020 11:58:00 AM
Truly lovely, Emile! Sometimes children seem to know more than their parents. Your poem really inspires hope! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, you have brought a smile to my lips my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2020 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Emile :)
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Date: 9/28/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
Congrats Emile on a great write, exactly what I was hoping for, very worthy winner!
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Date: 9/28/2020 12:38:00 PM
Thanks so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2020 6:17:00 AM
Beautifully penned Emile. Congratulations on a well-deserved top win! Linda
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Date: 9/28/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2020 12:41:00 AM
Beautiful in content and style, Emile:) congratulations on your top win:)
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Date: 9/28/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/27/2020 11:32:00 PM
Congratulations Emile, a well deserved first place win. If all people saw the world through children’s eyes and were colour blind, the planet would be much safer and kind. Belle
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Date: 9/28/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Belle, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2020 10:43:00 AM
Sure to top the winners list, dear Emile. Hate is not innate in humans...it is taught.
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Date: 9/15/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Elaine, I agree hate is taught, in fact it's taught so well it becomes a tradition, Emile.
Date: 9/6/2020 11:20:00 AM
I see the majority of people this way. If we start talking of peace and love in all communities perhaps we can have a better life as the human race.
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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