A Better Tomorrow

From my balcony, I watch children play: their color blindness encourages me. They do not let skin shades stand in their way; playing games together, for all to see. I hear laughter, with no sarcastic sting: there are no racial slurs slung to degrade. As I observe these fledgling birds take wing: my worries for our future slowly fade. A culturally closed society is like a wound, in need of a suture. It bleeds out, pressured by anxiety, and yet, these children can change their future. Watching these kids play, I don't feel sorrow; I feel hope for a better tomorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Seeker Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 6:28 AM
As long as innocence lasts. Enjoyed your musings, Emile, very relevant topic. Warmest congratulations on your top win
Pinet Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thanks Unseeking, as always, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on first place! Well done, my friend!
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Kim, as always, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 12:56 PM
So true Emile, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win,
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 6:14 PM
Thanks Joseph, as always, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Narain Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Beautiful sonnet on innocent children playing. Great win.
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Thanks Jay, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Back again with another big congratulations Emile - well done my friend! Linda
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Thanks Linda, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 10:47 AM
That all would be "color" blind Emile! Our children teach us such important lessons with their innocent wisdom. Congratulations on your first place win!
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Thanks Sam, we can learn both humility and harmony from our children, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Well said Emile, loved this one even more second time around, it's message of hope truly resonates especially now! Congrats on another great win!
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Thanks John, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Koplin Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 4:50 AM
well said! Congrats on your top win!
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Jayasankar Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Soo lovely! Yes children have the magic of driving away our sorrow. Ani
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 8:16 PM
Thanks Ani, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Devonshire Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Truly lovely, Emile! Sometimes children seem to know more than their parents. Your poem really inspires hope! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Hugs, Carolyn
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, you have brought a smile to my lips my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations for your win Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Congrats Emile on a great write, exactly what I was hoping for, very worthy winner!
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Thanks so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 6:17 AM
Beautifully penned Emile. Congratulations on a well-deserved top win! Linda
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 12:41 AM
Beautiful in content and style, Emile:) congratulations on your top win:)
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 6:05 AM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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September 27, 2020 at 11:32 PM
Congratulations Emile, a well deserved first place win. If all people saw the world through children’s eyes and were colour blind, the planet would be much safer and kind. Belle
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 6:05 AM
Thanks Belle, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
George   Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Sure to top the winners list, dear Emile. Hate is not innate in humans...it is taught.
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Thanks Elaine, I agree hate is taught, in fact it's taught so well it becomes a tradition, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 11:20 AM
I see the majority of people this way. If we start talking of peace and love in all communities perhaps we can have a better life as the human race.
Pinet Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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