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New Year’s Day. It’s early morning. I glance out my office window, noting a thin layer of frost has coated the cars, trees, grass, and plants. I pause, for in the distance I hear gentle reverberations of a soft tingling bell. The tingle echoes of the past as I recall my grandmothers’ tale of the “bell of translucent ice.” "The bell of translucent ice is suspended in mid-air,” she said in her silvery voice followed with her carefully constructed words. “It rings to announce endings and beginnings. It tolls because there is fresh promise and wonder in the skies. Its clear tones can only be heard in the calm silence of a winter day, and echo long into the silver-blue serenity of night. The bell is generally only heard at the turning of the year when the days wind down into nothing. If you are fortunate enough to hear the bell, listen. Be grateful. It’s your immortal inspiration calling.” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
from afar, a chime softly rings a gentle sound that on the wind it clings distant and sweet, a melody fine in this chime, a memory divine the sound travels over hill and dale in its journey a whispering tale softly ringing, a call serene in this chime, a scene unseen the distant chime in its flight through the wintry air, a sound so light a song of inspiration from far it climbs in the morning breeze, the distant chimes

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Date: 1/5/2024 2:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/5/2024 3:14:00 PM
thank you, Terry! I appreciate your visit and your congratulatory words. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara
Date: 1/3/2024 6:21:00 PM
Dear Sara, the "translucent bell" is so lovingly recalled and poetically extolled upon. Your exquisite poem is so delicate, ethereal and intimate. You deftly capture the elusive airy essence and gentle emotional resonance of the wind chime's song with charming finesse. Oh, and "a scene unseen" is a such wonderful word combo! I enjoyed your endearing poet's note too. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, soulful poetess. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/4/2024 4:25:00 AM
thank you, kind Susan! I appreciate your visit and thoughtful comments. I'm grateful the poem seemed to resonate with you. Thanks, too, for your congratulatory comments. Wishing you a day of creativity, all my best, Sara
Date: 1/2/2024 3:51:00 PM
This is beautiful Sara!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 5:41:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 1/2/2024 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 5:43:00 PM
thank you, Silent One. I'm delighted!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 5:41:00 PM
thank you, Silent One. I'm delighted!
Date: 1/2/2024 4:42:00 AM
The story told by your grandma is embedded so deep in your mind that with every winter you hear the chime of the bell. You have so delicately recorded the soft chime of the bells and its eerie charm. The poet's notes and your poem are equally captivating. Your entry into the New Year is made auspicious with this sweet poem. The soft chime echoes into the blue serenity of the night and into our hearts. All the Best Dear !
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 5:43:00 PM
thanks, Valsa, for stopping by. I'm grateful you found my poem captivating. You're right, every new year I think of my grandmother's words. She was a special kind of woman. Have a splendid new year filled with hope & creativity, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 7:09:00 PM
Awwn, "bell of translucent ice" that's so gorgeous!! Your descriptions here are the definition of ethereal beauty, flowing stunningly with a soft cadence and synchronization, creating a perfectly soft melody for the heart..Gosh, I love the snowy scenes you've created and expressed how the silken sound of the chime, reached your soul.."The bell of translucent ice is suspended in mid-air,” she said in her silvery voice", "a song of inspiration from far it climbs" This piece is another FAV from you
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 5:44:00 PM
I do so appreciate your insightful comments, Hiya. Your comments are such a delight to read, for you see the hidden beauty in the words and message. You're gifted that way. Thanks for the fav. I'm humbly grateful. Have a great week, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 6:49:00 PM
It deserves a FAV, although I'm not allowed to FAV your poetry. :-( Beautifully written introduction and a lovely, eloquent poem, Sara. We are so blessed to receive your gift of writing and your vibrant poetry. Good luck in the contest ... this poem should do well.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 5:45:00 PM
thank you, dear hubby, for your undying support of my writing. I wouldn't be where I am were it not for you. hugs from me to you.
Date: 1/1/2024 5:07:00 PM
A poem of reflection as the bell tolls, and being grateful to hear it, as endless possibilities lie ahead, It has the feel of a haibun, Very nicely penned, best wishes
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/1/2024 6:24:00 PM
thank you, Joseph! Your comments were meaningful and encouraging. Have a great new year, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 3:22:00 PM
Ah this is so beautiful- and beautiful too of the metaphor of a chime as inspiration. So much loveliness, and you captured my weakness...a fav!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/1/2024 4:56:00 PM
awww...thank you for your motivational comments and for the fav. I'm humbly grateful, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 2:00:00 PM
Lovely poetry, Sara; chimes in and throughout your divine poetry. Blessings.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/1/2024 4:56:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Joe, and for your thoughtful comments. Have a blessed New Year, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 1:02:00 PM
A lovely 2024 write. I love the sound bells make, so heavenly. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away in 24...............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/1/2024 4:57:00 PM
thanks, Paula, for visiting..I like the sound of bells as well. I imagine heaven will be full of them. Good luck with the contest as well. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 6:13:00 AM
My dear friend, Your poem beautifully captures the delicate essence of a distant chime and the emotions it evokes.. Painting a serene picture of a distant chime, bringing a sense of tranquillity and peacefulness. The gentle sound and the imagery of a melody fine create a soothing atmosphere...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/1/2024 4:58:00 PM
thanks, Silent One, for you mindful comments. I'm glad you found the poem evocative and serene. I always appreciate your visits and insights. Have a great new year, Sara
Date: 1/1/2024 5:20:00 AM
Such beautiful words, my friend. Let us hope we hear this bell of translucent ice ringing out to mark each year.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/1/2024 4:59:00 PM
thanks, Jerry. I agree...I'm all for that bell of translucent ice ringing. Have a pleasant week, Sara

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