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Our last family picture. I believe this was a year before Dale died. He is last one on the right, just finishing up law school.(killed by a drunk driver while merely standing on a deserted Houston sidewalk around 1 am. What are the odds?)

      BEST BROTHER EVER

        Aug. 16, 1953 - Dec. 16, 1984

 

My dear good older brother, you have to know your friends and family all miss you so If I could have just one more day with you the things you liked are things that we would do! But first, we’d talk, of course. I’d really love to know what you’ve been doing up above! I think God needed you for something great beyond the veil while we’ve all had to wait We wait to one day know the answer why God took you when you were so young to die! I want to know if you’ve looked down to see what’s going on with us, your family. I’d get us all together once again. We could chat and laugh, remembering when. And as we talked, I’d pop our favorite snack - hot buttered popcorn for your welcome back. You loved the movies just as much as me. I’d catch you up on new shows on TV! We’d talk about our kids you’ve never met and all those new things like the internet! You loved fun music, so I would put on the greatest hits I’ve heard since you’ve been gone You loved your friends; your best ones I would call to join us. Life’s a party after all! To see you dance again would be a treat. For sure, we’d dance were we once more to meet! I’d want you to myself, but well I know this want of mine would be best to forego Your soul was always large. That was your way! So if you should come back for just a day. . . I’d be alone with you, but not for long. With all of us, dear brother, you belong!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/22/2015 5:43:00 PM
Hello Andrea... wonderful tribute Andrea, and with the photos and preamble I could feel your loss before reading your poem - Lindsay
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Date: 12/16/2015 8:53:00 AM
The beauty and wonders of your lines are becoming as popular as your soup profile in this site. Here is yet another magnificient piece from the magic of your mind. A great 7 dear poet.
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Date: 12/16/2015 12:30:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:51:00 AM
How sad. My Brother, Bill, was also killed by a drunk driver. Strangely he had just got off the bottle which he drank of plentifully for many years. Love, daver
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Date: 12/15/2015 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations! Very well written tribute... this got me. So sorry for your loss. Excellent poem.
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Date: 12/14/2015 7:27:00 PM
What a lucky woman you were to have loved your brother as much as you did. You know that he knew your love for him and that is a great memory to cherish Beautifully written Blessings Edith
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Date: 12/14/2015 7:26:00 PM
Wow, make me cry. Yes, it would be nice to have him back, not for just one day but forever. Beautifully written sis.
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Date: 12/14/2015 11:02:00 AM
What a beautiful but very sad tribute to the memory of your beloved brother! Congratulations on your top placement, Andie! Please accept my heartfelt regrets for your loss. Pandita
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Date: 12/14/2015 6:53:00 AM
Oh, Andrea, you've mentioned Dale to me before. He sounds like a great guy, and you've written a wonderful poem about him.
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Date: 12/14/2015 5:54:00 AM
I felt as though I was in a time machine when I saw your family photo.... Emotional verses you've written down. Well, congrats for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/13/2015 11:50:00 PM
What beautiful photos and memories you have Andrea. Your poem is so sad, written from the heart. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 12/13/2015 11:18:00 PM
Andrea, oh how sad and beautifully penned, congrats on your wonderful win and its a 7 ~
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Date: 12/13/2015 9:04:00 PM
This was extremely heartfelt, my tears I couldn't control. I am so sorry for your loss.. Your love for your brother Dale is shown and felt here Andrea. I don't know how you could write such an emotional write Andrea.
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Date: 12/13/2015 8:06:00 PM
Andrea. I found it difficult to write about my deceased brother as you must have.Congrats on the placement.Blessings always. Curtis.
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Date: 12/13/2015 8:04:00 PM
Lovely! Thankyou for sharing such a touching write. I do love your work
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Date: 12/13/2015 6:47:00 PM
A very moving emotional write Andrea...Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/13/2015 5:26:00 PM
Congrats Andrea so sad the story, but all too familiar. 30 years have past pain never goes away completely. Maybe you would like mine called four gone conclusion, drunk driver killed 4 people near Toronto in September trial is ongoing now. people are so selfish sometimes.
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:49:00 PM
Beautifully written, congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, I enjoyed this piece very much. So sorry for your loss.
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:31:00 PM
I almost broke at '...kids you've never met..', but I held on. This is a heartfelt emotional jerk to the reader, its realness is palatable and a strong force. I am so sorry for such an unnecessary loss, I know it will always be with you. Congrats on your deserved win ... Love the poem ... CayCay
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:20:00 PM
Andrea such wonderful memories you shared with us all.....Thank you...Seren
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:19:00 PM
So very sad, Andrea. Such a heartfelt and beautiful poem as a tribute to your dear brother. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:35:00 PM
well done, Andrea...congratulations.
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:33:00 PM
This is certainly a wonderful remembrance and thank you for sharing it with all of us.
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx
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