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**** Her name is Miss Pitty Patter. She's the concrete goose outside. She's quite a fashion statement. as she adorn the stoop with pride Although she doesn't say anything, She greets you with a smile. She's quite the talk of the neighborhood. as she sports the latest styles. The other day, a flock of geese flew by. One dropped into say hello He honked and fluffed his feathers, "Howdy there! little lady, My name is Joe." . "Honk"--"Shall we go for a walk?" "Honk"-- "I really like your style." Miss Pitty, Let's sit down and we'll talk. He did a little dance, and she gave him a smile. Miss Pitty, "You are quite a handsome looker, But your heart is made of stone. " "I believe this relationship is over," as he flew off all alone. Miss Pitty Patter frowned. Written 11-10-21

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Date: 2/19/2022 4:08:00 PM
Hello Debra ... I guess you could say the gander was well and truly goosed. An enjoyable and light hearted poem from your pen Debra - Lindsay
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Debra L Brown
Date: 2/19/2022 7:19:00 PM
Ha Ha! Your comment was a delight. I'm happy enjoyed the poem. She'll be sporting her Easter Bonnet very soon. Thanks for reading. Blessing ~ Debra Reply
Date: 1/12/2022 12:50:00 AM
This is very cute.... ! Debra, through this amusing tale you have also imparted a moral- one with a heart of stone is never good for a lasting relationship. Such a person will be left to himself !
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Date: 1/12/2022 1:12:00 PM
Valsa, you're so sweet. I enjoyed your comment about "having a heart of stone." You're right, someone like that would never last in a relationship. Blessings~ Debra
Date: 1/12/2022 12:05:00 AM
Poor Mis Pitter Patter. I'm sure she has a heart of gold inside. Lovely poem.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/12/2022 12:58:00 PM
Thanks, Victor, for your kind and sweet comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 1/11/2022 9:40:00 PM
Hi Debra…..that is sweet cute lovely poem indeed! Debx
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Date: 1/12/2022 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Deb, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 1/11/2022 7:02:00 PM
So cute!! 'Miss Pitty Patter' is such an endearing title. And whoa to whomever challenges her wardrobe's fashion statement. Enjoyed! Thanks, Debra. Rouge and Mascara, Gershon
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/12/2022 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Gershon. I enjoyed your comment, happy you enjoyed the poem. Miss Pitty is a true fashionista. LoL, it's always a pleasure. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 1/11/2022 4:00:00 PM
This reminds me of the dove statue I have in my rosebed. One afternoon I looked out of the window to see a Robin sitting in front of it, looking at it like it was waiting for the doves to do something. Animals are so funny; beautiful penning.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/11/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. The same thing happened to me a few years ago. I had a Cardinal statue, and another Cardinal was constantly flying around. He became disinterested after a few days. I never saw him after that. Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 1/11/2022 3:48:00 PM
Awww! The poor goose thought she was real. He flew away feeling rejected. This is so cute Debra. It belongs in a children's book. God Bless, JB
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/11/2022 5:39:00 PM
Judy, Thank you for your kind words. I enjoyed writing this poem. I dress Miss Pitty Patter up all the time. In July, I put her in a yellow polka-dot bikini and pink sunglasses. The neighbors always smile at that. Hugs and Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 1/11/2022 3:33:00 PM
O my, she stopped smiling - just for a tad. Well composed Sis Debra. Shalom shalom
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/11/2022 5:43:00 PM
Hi Anil, So nice to talk to you again. Thank you you kind words. Prayers and Blessing ~ Sister Debra
Date: 1/11/2022 1:48:00 PM
A cute tale! So sad for Miss Pity Patter!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/11/2022 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Kim, for the comment. Blessings ~ Debra