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Miss Pitty Patter

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      Her name is Miss Pitty Patter.
      She's the concrete goose outside. 
      She's quite a fashion statement.
      as she adorn the stoop with pride

      Although she doesn't say anything,
      She greets you with a smile.
      She's quite the talk of the neighborhood.
      as she sports the latest styles.

      The other day, a flock of geese flew by.
      One dropped into say hello
      He honked and fluffed his feathers,
      "Howdy there! little lady, My name is Joe."
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      "Honk"--"Shall we go for a walk?"
      "Honk"-- "I really like your style."
       Miss Pitty, Let's sit down and we'll talk.
       He did a little dance, and she gave him a smile.

      Miss Pitty, "You are quite a handsome looker,
      But your heart is made of stone. "
      "I believe this relationship is over,"
      as he flew off all alone.

       Miss Pitty Patter frowned.



      
                      Written  11-10-21

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Lindsay Laurie February 19, 2022 at 4:08 PM Hello Debra ... I guess you could say the gander was well and truly goosed. An enjoyable and light hearted poem from your pen Debra - Lindsay Debra L Brown February 19, 2022 at 7:19 PM Ha Ha! Your comment was a delight. I'm happy enjoyed the poem. She'll be sporting her Easter Bonnet very soon. Thanks for reading. Blessing ~ Debra Reply

Valsa George January 12, 2022 at 12:50 AM This is very cute.... ! Debra, through this amusing tale you have also imparted a moral- one with a heart of stone is never good for a lasting relationship. Such a person will be left to himself ! Debra L Brown January 12, 2022 at 1:12 PM Valsa, you're so sweet. I enjoyed your comment about "having a heart of stone." You're right, someone like that would never last in a relationship. Blessings~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar January 12, 2022 at 12:05 AM Poor Mis Pitter Patter. I'm sure she has a heart of gold inside. Lovely poem. Debra L Brown January 12, 2022 at 12:58 PM Thanks, Victor, for your kind and sweet comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Deb M January 11, 2022 at 9:40 PM Hi Debra…..that is sweet cute lovely poem indeed! Debx Debra L Brown January 12, 2022 at 12:55 PM Thanks Deb, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf January 11, 2022 at 7:02 PM So cute!! 'Miss Pitty Patter' is such an endearing title. And whoa to whomever challenges her wardrobe's fashion statement. Enjoyed! Thanks, Debra. Rouge and Mascara, Gershon Debra L Brown January 12, 2022 at 12:53 PM Thanks Gershon. I enjoyed your comment, happy you enjoyed the poem. Miss Pitty is a true fashionista. LoL, it's always a pleasure. Blessings ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser January 11, 2022 at 4:00 PM This reminds me of the dove statue I have in my rosebed. One afternoon I looked out of the window to see a Robin sitting in front of it, looking at it like it was waiting for the doves to do something. Animals are so funny; beautiful penning. Debra L Brown January 11, 2022 at 5:28 PM Thank you for your comment. The same thing happened to me a few years ago. I had a Cardinal statue, and another Cardinal was constantly flying around. He became disinterested after a few days. I never saw him after that. Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Judy Ball January 11, 2022 at 3:48 PM Awww! The poor goose thought she was real. He flew away feeling rejected. This is so cute Debra. It belongs in a children's book. God Bless, JB Debra L Brown January 11, 2022 at 5:39 PM Judy, Thank you for your kind words. I enjoyed writing this poem. I dress Miss Pitty Patter up all the time. In July, I put her in a yellow polka-dot bikini and pink sunglasses. The neighbors always smile at that. Hugs and Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo January 11, 2022 at 3:33 PM O my, she stopped smiling - just for a tad. Well composed Sis Debra. Shalom shalom Debra L Brown January 11, 2022 at 5:43 PM Hi Anil, So nice to talk to you again. Thank you you kind words. Prayers and Blessing ~ Sister Debra

Kim Rodrigues January 11, 2022 at 1:48 PM A cute tale! So sad for Miss Pity Patter! Debra L Brown January 11, 2022 at 2:00 PM Thanks Kim, for the comment. Blessings ~ Debra