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To whoever may be listening: At exactly 6:33am today government radar detected twenty-seven incoming nuclear warheads from Eurasia and Eastasia. As a result, Oceana has deployed all existing nuclear weapons to both continents in retaliation. This fake war has suddenly become all too real. My friends and colleagues, the end of all things is upon us. There are rumors suggesting our inner party members quickly assembled inside the Ministry of Truth and committed mass suicide. We have no leaders to guide us, no savior to rescue us. It is now 7:02 and for the first time in my life I feel something other than fear - resignation. INGSOC is dead, and in a few short moments we will join Big Brother as well as millions of innocent proletariats in the bleak realm of everlasting oblivion. May whatever god that exists have mercy on our souls. We are the dead. Perhaps we never existed at all. Time's up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One year later Deep in the African jungle on a continent once thought devoid of human life, two small children emerge from a cave and enter into the light. The boy's name is Adam. Neither had ever heard of Big Brother... * Contest sample

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Date: 4/21/2025 11:25:00 AM
The radioactive "pestilence" that will rain down upon both land and sea destroying most if not all life forms and eventually, carried also to arctic regions, eliminates creatures made in His image; Earth poisoned by: Plutonium-239 Half-life: ~24,100 years ~ Uranium-238 Half-life: ~4.5 billion years ~ Thorium- Half-life: ~14 billion years ~ Radium- Half-life: ~1,600 years. ~~~ When the angel in Revelations warned mankind that Satan has come down to earth, this, specifically, is that prophecy fulfilled.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/21/2025 12:41:00 PM
The war in heaven occurred in 1914. Satan's wrath was expressed via WWI and ever since
Date: 4/17/2025 1:25:00 PM
Tom… I am in awe. This felt like the final breath of humanity written with trembling hands--resigned, hollowed, and brutally honest. The despair in that first half is chilling. But that ending--Adam and the girl stepping into the light--it gave me hope. Like a flicker of divinity rising from the fallout. No memory of Big Brother. No chains. Just a new beginning waiting in the trees. Poetic, devastating, and strangely beautiful. Brilliant work, my friend. --Alesia
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/17/2025 1:47:00 PM
I'm so happy you enjoyed my contest sample Alesia
Date: 4/4/2025 7:36:00 PM
Oh… hope after all! Cool narrative, Tom. “ We are the dead. Perhaps we never existed at all.” that’s chilling! Always, Laura
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/4/2025 8:08:00 PM
Newspeak. Thx Laura
Date: 4/4/2025 2:51:00 PM
This is a captivating story, though with sad insights, considering the shape of the world today. Thank you for sharing this gem.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/4/2025 8:07:00 PM
Yes ma'am and thank you
Date: 4/3/2025 1:32:00 AM
Dear Tomsz This is thought provoking and has a very deep message, with all that thats goin around in the world it sure does feel like the end is almost here , and all that we breathe and see are mere illusions and whats really real is waiting to unfold! The ending is brilliant and i must also be from a cave as i dont know what big brother stands for! Creative storytelling as always you do it very well, effortlessly! Best wishes judging your contest. Hope you are doing well! Sending you light
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Ink Empress
Date: 4/3/2025 6:27:00 AM
Its a hammock lol but silent one says i look like star trek in that. Lol well.. maybe i should change it soon hah
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/3/2025 6:01:00 AM
Haha. Isn't your avatar set in a cave? Anyway, you'd have to be familiar with the book to get this. Thx
Date: 3/27/2025 6:56:00 PM
Tom: This outcome has become more and more feasible -sad to say. I ‘ll have to put my hope and change hat on to think of an optimistic story.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/28/2025 5:34:00 AM
Well hello there nice to see you stop by
Date: 3/25/2025 11:52:00 PM
Thank you for the sample! You’re very creative!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/26/2025 5:28:00 AM
Daddy tries:)
Date: 3/24/2025 12:54:00 AM
Very creative and great example of the contest dearp poet friend Tom. Thanks a lot. Blessings.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2025 5:35:00 AM
Muchos gracias amigo
Date: 3/23/2025 10:29:00 PM
Thought provoking write Tom. Love the ending part you gave us hope through Adam. I have a funny feeling your words will become reality in the not so distant future my friend. Great imagination you have Tom, thank you for sharing. God bless you my friend... and all you love...
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2025 5:36:00 AM
It's fiction but yeah, a divine reboot is on the way
Date: 3/23/2025 7:23:00 AM
Tom, food for thought. You have a wry way of framing your views that's very refreshing. I think you're right things end and things begin. Not often though that there's no connection between, but it could happen!! Man, I remember reading 1984....that was really something!! Smiles!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2025 5:35:00 AM
Yes I read it and saw the movie with Richard Burton. Thx
Date: 3/22/2025 8:56:00 PM
Wars and rumors of war. People are seeing through their manipulative devices to control the masses. So what measures will they take? The brilliant thing about this life is, it's temporary. I love the way that you don't waste words!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/23/2025 5:40:00 AM
Thx so much GS!
Date: 3/21/2025 9:29:00 PM
After a dismal opening of ominous things to happen, you have ended your great narration with a hint of hope.... the birth of Adam in the African jungle. Hope God won't allow a cataclysmic end for life on earth.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/22/2025 4:50:00 AM
Yes, always a glimmer of hope. Thx Valsa
Date: 3/21/2025 5:58:00 PM
the hideous shape of things to.come, tom. I like how you ended this with hope-- adam...great work for easter celeb!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2025 6:04:00 PM
Sweet of you to stop by
Date: 3/21/2025 3:21:00 AM
A great allegory. The birth of Adam will lead to another big brother. Yet in the end God will win.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2025 5:38:00 AM
Thx Vic
Date: 3/19/2025 7:52:00 PM
Many like ( the big brother ) are doing the works of the devil, but God is still in control. I rejoice knowing that truth. The ending makes sense, indeed. Hugs, Brandy
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2025 5:32:00 AM
It's just fiction but there are some parallels. Thx for stop
Date: 3/19/2025 1:26:00 PM
So interesting! The media feeds our minds, longs to direct our steps. This should not be so. Oh to exist in a free world devoid of nonsense!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 1:28:00 PM
Oh Kimmie. I sooooo agree. It's coming - Revelation 21:4
Date: 3/19/2025 11:47:00 AM
Interesting work and contest. I don't know if it is a new contest or if it has already been judged. The end is coming but I don't know when. Thanks for sharing this with us. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 12:56:00 PM
Sure but this is total fiction. Contest is avtive
Date: 3/19/2025 10:53:00 AM
So imaginative... bleak but with a spark of light at the end. Very nice Tom! Xo
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 10:55:00 AM
Just a quickie for my contest but muchos gracias
Date: 3/19/2025 7:30:00 AM
Your brain must be in Jesus's hands! A quick write? Awesome example. I just hope I can pick up the pace.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 9:24:00 AM
I know you'll come up with something quirky and cool
Date: 3/19/2025 5:33:00 AM
Hello Tom, O' how your words are a chilling and powerful continuation of "1984" that just sends shivers down the spine. I think I liked the way you've captured the essence of the dystopian world and then shattered it with the reality of nuclear war. Also, your stark contrast between the controlled fear of Oceania and the genuine terror of impending doom is palpable. The twist ending at least is a glimmer of hope and rebirth, I think suggesting that humanity might yet have a chance to start anew, free from the shadows of totalitarianism?? Excellent! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 5:38:00 AM
Thx so much Daniel. Yes, a glimmer of hope. Let's pray history doesn't repeat
Date: 3/19/2025 5:17:00 AM
Dear Tommy,well, well Master Storyteller that you are, that escalated quickly! A full-on dystopian doomsday with a twist of hope at the end which incidently i love—definitely gives you something to think about. I feel like Orwell would either be proud or deeply concerned. So well written...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 5:37:00 AM
I wrote this quickly as a sample idea for my contest since the theme is somewhat heady. Of course I'd like to expand on it. Thx Maria
Date: 3/18/2025 10:34:00 PM
Hmmmm. Well I did love that ending!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 5:36:00 AM
That's a plus ;)
Date: 3/18/2025 6:26:00 PM
Fascinating poem, Tom. Among certain tyrants, the world may have proved nothing more than a fantasy, as hinted at in the ending, that challenges the essence of our existence.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2025 5:36:00 AM
Thank you for your interest and commentary
Date: 3/18/2025 3:55:00 PM
Interesting scenario; nations sure do have the power, now, for such destruction. Though I do not believe that the Aliens, living deep within the earth, in Antarctica would allow such a thing:)) Thought provoking write, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/18/2025 4:56:00 PM
Snow dogs and yetis? Possibly. Thx Joe
Date: 3/18/2025 1:15:00 PM
Evocative indeed. How come after circa 6000 years of civilized history, African tribes still live in grass huts and have no shoes or running water or sanitation? Compare the Congo to Manhattan Island.
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Arlo Parker
Date: 3/20/2025 7:03:00 PM
And then there's "Ring around the Rosie..." tra la la.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/18/2025 1:21:00 PM
So many whys. On the other hand, culture plays a big part.
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