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13.02.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Our unnoticed actions, condemned love The hallucinatory countryside, complicated Strong petals, a song of freedom Born to poverty without blame for their fate Accept me as I am, don't judge Captures hope, in deep undertones of colorful vegetation Among tall trees towering as gates Walks in beauty and truthful love

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/18/2025 8:21:00 AM

You weave a beautiful picture in words dear pal, always a pleasure reading your word's

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/16/2025 12:21:00 PM

A poem to dream about. Great writing.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/15/2025 6:31:00 PM

Amazing poem… the beginning line so intriguing, “ Our unnoticed actions” — great work! Always, Laura

Karen Jones

Date: 2/15/2025 4:50:00 PM

I agree with Andrea this is awesome! Best wishes in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2025 3:49:00 PM

Great job. People did so well with this challenge. How will the sponsor ever choose winners?

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/15/2025 10:30:00 AM

Haunting and beautiful, Anne-Lise! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings!

Mohamed Omar

Date: 2/15/2025 9:04:00 AM

Wow! Nailed it

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/15/2025 4:39:00 AM

Very nice wording! Love: hallucinatory countryside… Captures hope, in deep undertones of colorful vegetation

Paige Hind

Date: 2/14/2025 4:56:00 PM

I love the beginning! "Our unnoticed actions, condemned love The hallucinatory countryside, complicated" wow <3

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/14/2025 1:31:00 PM

He was free with his colors and figures...in a sense, painted loose a captured canvas, expecting the work to continue developing an innate liberty of its own. As is your lovely living poetry. Wonderful write!

Jay Narain

Date: 2/14/2025 10:46:00 AM

Nice poem seeking the mystery of the painting.

John Read

Date: 2/14/2025 10:31:00 AM

Your poem and picture compliment each other perfectly, good luck in the contest Anne. xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 10:19:00 AM

Anne-Lise, it's insightful to view Van Gogh's picture as hallucinatory. He certainly had something going on, and you capture it well in your interpretation. The alignment of the trunks and waving flowers make it all quite dreamy. Your poem covers a lot of territory. Smiles!

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/14/2025 6:51:00 AM

great and inspiring poem, best wishes

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/13/2025 10:22:00 PM

Love your interpretation of the picture Anne-Lise. Happy Valentines day to you. Tom

Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2025 8:20:00 PM

Lovely interpretation of Van Gogh's painting. Spot on on Valentine's day ! All the Best, dear Anne! Love and hugs!

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/13/2025 4:46:00 PM

Inspiring dear poet, emotionally connected to the painting...walks in beauty and truthful love

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/13/2025 3:00:00 PM

I enjoyed your interpretation of the Van Gogh, the line " a song of freedom" hit hard. Anne-Lise, GL in the contest! xo

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/13/2025 2:56:00 PM

This is beautiful and inspirational for all , love it <3

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/13/2025 2:24:00 PM

Anne-Lise, your interpretation of Van Gogh's masterpiece is beautifully expressed. Your words draw the reader into the mysterious world of the scarcely seen couple. Best wishes for the contest.This is a fine contender! :)