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15.08.2024
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Autumn comes in countless ways Raindrops touch gently the last reddest rose into memories from a brighter time The summer of countless dreams will become distant silhouettes Embers from the autumn fires, colored by the blood of relatives Under words of sorrow The wind blows through the apple orchard feelings become porcelain fragile Sunset fades the night becomes long ... wrap yourself in love

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/30/2024 10:35:00 AM

Anne-Lise, the picture is lovely and the poem is brilliant. You do have a unique and very pleasant way to describe the coming of autumn. The second stanza surprised me with the way the passing of seasons relates to ourselves. It gave me pause. Many smiles from me to you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/24/2024 11:34:00 AM

Your "Twisted Emotions" is a wonderful write with a wonderful picture. Summer is ending so Autumn can come for a visit. Do not worry for Summer will be back next year. Hugs... Have a wonderful day..........

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 8/21/2024 2:51:00 PM

Beautifully written my dear Anne. Yes, the air smells Autumn for sure, even here that days are changing from hot to cool. Lovely to read you!y

Valsa George

Date: 8/19/2024 5:05:00 AM

"The summer of countless dreams will become distant silhouettes".. Yes, summer is a pleasant season when we weave dreams and spend most of our time out of doors. When summer departs, autumn comes with colors. In winter, sun sets early and night becomes long. You have touched upon the major changes, each season brings. Beautifully written poem, dear Anne. Love and hugs!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/16/2024 4:58:00 PM

I know. Life is so short. Often we are just finding out how to live, love, and its the 4th quarter already. " ... wrap yourself in love" -- indeed. The best advice.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/16/2024 4:39:00 PM

Very poignant. Most notable in autumn is the shorter days. Thanks for the warning of what is ahead.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 8/16/2024 11:31:00 AM

Anne-Lise, in this wonderful poem, i find summer ending, autumn coming & with it the wrapping for winter. These lines sent me a vast motion of images inc. temperature + touch,& sights … all so sensual concisely described with a love, surely, for this time. A lovely piece! Good to see U. Ive been away. Bless U!

Jay Narain

Date: 8/16/2024 11:04:00 AM

Nice poem.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/16/2024 3:36:00 AM

I do love the autumn, bearable temperatures and stunning colours. Hope you're keeping well Anne-Lise. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/16/2024 1:17:00 AM

Roses may end, but glorious autumn with its golden leaves and fresh breezes. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2024 8:24:00 PM

the last reddest rose… The summer of countless dreams will become distant silhouettes… colored by the blood of relatives… The wind blows through the apple orchard…emotive! Hugs ~ Kim

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/15/2024 3:44:00 PM

The ending of something becomes the beginning of something new something we can wrap around our love. Uplifts the soul, Anne-Lise!