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~ The voice of loneliness - is barely audible ~ Quote by poet Terribly curved loneliness embraced her The clouds hovered darkly over the valley Grief, pain and tear drops got mixed and circulate through each vein in her trembling body as lightning from angry clouds She had never felt more alone as pushed down into a bottomless pit Thoughts was constantly changing her grief in the loneliness could not fade Finally in the newborn rhythm of spring and the color splendor of silence two people meet Sweet music arose one romantic ballad The sunlight enveloped the earth they walked on as under foreign skies Her messenger and most marvelous deed, had angel wings Wisdom unites the lost and the sad Together they felt the harmony of life in contingent release 13.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - 'L' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 5/12/2023 9:52:00 AM

This is lovely Anne Lise. The sadness of loneliness but with happiness to come. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 2:56:00 PM

Sunshine, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! I love the image !

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/21/2023 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise! Your have brought us from abject darkness into sparkling light! So effectively done with dark images that meld into pictures of lightness on "angel wings!" Wonderfully crafted! Blessings and hugs!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/20/2023 5:00:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win with your well penned emotive poem, sad and beautiful!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/17/2023 10:53:00 AM

Lonely vs. Lovely. You feature both - well-done, Sunshine. Definitely first place material, so romantic, so real. Thanks for sharing your heart.

Ann Peck

Date: 3/17/2023 10:16:00 AM

Your poem is beautiful, Sunshine. Sad, with an uplifting ending. I love your quote! A perfect depiction of loneliness. Congratulations on First Place!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/17/2023 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations, Dear Poet, on your win with this stunning poem - the despair, the sadness - and finally the release of hope and harmony! Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2023 7:17:00 AM

A great picture of loneliness and release. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2023 8:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations on my poem, Alex :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/17/2023 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2023 8:46:00 AM

- Many thanks D.D., for congratulations on my poem :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/17/2023 7:06:00 AM

Sweet write Anne-Lise! Well-deserved win! Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2023 8:46:00 AM

- Many thanks Linda, for visiting and congratulations on my poem :) - hugs

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/17/2023 7:02:00 AM

And congrats!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2023 8:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations on my poem, Margarita :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/16/2023 12:02:00 PM

Two souls come together with a need for love and togetherness - 'Wisdom unites the lost the sad, together they felt the harmony of life' - eloquent, such meaning and beauty in your words. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2023 8:44:00 AM

- Thank you very much, dear Jenny... glad you enjoyed this poem :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/14/2023 10:48:00 PM

From despair to love and hope, wonderful, Sunshine:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2023 2:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/14/2023 8:04:00 AM

An apotheosis of a poem, my dearest Anne-Lise. So artfully crafted. Congratulations. Hugs and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 8:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment ... I really appreciate it, Demetrios :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/14/2023 6:13:00 AM

That same part Vijay mentioned, jumped out at me too. Very nice writing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 6:45:00 AM

- Thank you so much, Heidi :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2023 5:47:00 AM

Finally in the newborn rhythm of spring and the color splendor of silence-- two people meet--splendid write, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 6:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/14/2023 4:06:00 AM

She eternal beauty cannot be described only felt. and you have succeeded in making me feel the pulse of the poem, thank you Sunshine, for sharing your talent, and ray !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:49:00 AM

- Glad it had a pulse and you felt it, Vie Rose ... many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2023 2:04:00 AM

Brilliant poem. Best for a win. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/13/2023 8:15:00 PM

From a bleak dusk, she has emerged into the bright sunshine of the dawn.... ! Here after she is not alone, but in sweet company ! Lovely penning, Smile. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:46:00 AM

- Lonely is sad and dark, Valsa ... I gave her a friend :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/13/2023 6:58:00 PM

WOW! Absolutely stunning!! I fave it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:44:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment and your valuable fave... really appreciate it, Fin :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/13/2023 6:42:00 PM

beautiful sentiments shared, so touching penning have a nice day yann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:42:00 AM

- Many thanks, yann ... new day (Tuesday) ... enjoy it :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/13/2023 4:17:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful and touching. I made it a favorite before I began this comment. A sparkling poem from a talented Poet. I dont think you will need luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Cheers Wen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:40:00 AM

- No "win" in advance ... but glad you like it and I really appreciate your comment and your "fave" - Many thanks, Wendy :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/13/2023 4:13:00 PM

Moving, as stunning moonbeams.. Pangie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:38:00 AM

- Thank you so much, Pangie :) - hugs

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/13/2023 2:56:00 PM

Interesting how dark pit loneliness got transposed into a spring rhapsody in contingent release! Well versed, indeed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 4:37:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Margarita ... I wanted "a little light in the tunnel" :) - hugs