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- The reality perspectives from nothing to nothing sentenced to disappear - Night sister goes with light steps silent religious hymns from a bird's dry throat Drinking cherry liqueur with "Mr. Mighty" Welcome to the kingdom of the devil - In bed lay a dead man with a blank stare and bat's wings - The fastest way home Through the corridors of the genus: run the Milky Way The rattling of the key chain between flowering tombstones Steps become distant The bells ringing in the last hour to achieve peace in the realm of the dead - Ghosts were shadows in the night spirits she thought had gone to rest - 21.02.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Writing Challenge - G Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 2nd place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2023 12:01:00 AM

Sunshine, wonderful and creative writing and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I like the image used also, blessings, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2023 9:54:00 AM

haunting images! Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/25/2023 8:41:00 PM

Great job with eeriness, very descriptive, Anne-Lise. Janice

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/24/2023 7:38:00 PM

Picturesque illustration of ghosts. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/24/2023 3:55:00 PM

This creates a great image for me Anne-Lise. Captivating! Congratulations on your win! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/24/2023 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write/picture. Love It. Hugs. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................

Valsa George

Date: 2/22/2023 8:09:00 PM

Such a spooky effect you have created with few lines. On reading this I felt as if left in a haunted house surrounded by ghosts. All the best, dear Smile!

Ann Peck

Date: 2/22/2023 4:10:00 PM

I love your ghost poem, Sunshine, especially, "ghosts were shadows in the night, spirits she thought had gone to rest." that's lovely (and spoooky)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/22/2023 7:34:00 AM

A poem that gives us a glimpse of a ghost. Well done Anne Lise. Best for a win. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:58:00 AM

- Thanks for reading my ghost poem, Victor :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/22/2023 5:37:00 AM

Wow! Spectacular representation of the astral, a spirit realm, that surrounds the near earth. There things come and go, interact with unresolved earth existence, are trapped and lifted eventually, elevated in consciousness through higher spiritual development. Fabulous write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for a meaningful comment, Joe :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2023 3:35:00 AM

Haunting poem, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:55:00 AM

- Yes a haunting poem, Jo - Hope you enjoy it ... thanks :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2023 11:57:00 PM

Well written Anne, thought I was reading Poe. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:54:00 AM

:))) ... Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/21/2023 6:52:00 PM

I love this, I love gothic style poems!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:53:00 AM

- Glad you liked it, Aysha ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/21/2023 6:17:00 PM

A riveting poem of night, one that makes me have goosebumps, what an awesome entry Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:52:00 AM

- Goosebumps is great ... then I have done my job ... many thanks for your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/21/2023 4:04:00 PM

Staying inside tonight with lights on after this : ), great poem , with alot to learn from this, love it , hugs : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:50:00 AM

- No need to fear, my friend ... many thanks for your comment - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/21/2023 3:47:00 PM

Dead man--bat wings--the realm of the dead, as you say, Anne-Lise. You delivered expertly on the ghostly feeling throughout. Apt for the topic you chose for the contest. Best to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2023 7:49:00 AM

- Ghosts are an exciting topic, Vijay ... some believe ... others don't ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs