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08.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Etheree Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

1st place in the contest

My broken heart you left. Powerless hands confused - stupefied. Fleeting muffled music no cotton gloves wipe my tears. Scribbling on the sky the message; You are the precious star I gaze at. Swirling lone in agony and sorrow. Pay for driving in the wrong direction, loaded with stinging nettles and weeds Naked beneath the open sky Bless the fool, speak not in tongues On unscrupulous feet no fire of passion or soft feathers. Be careful with my heart

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/14/2023 7:48:00 AM

Such a beautiful and well-crafted double etheree from your golden pen my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. I love it a lot and enjoyed. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/12/2023 1:39:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:49:00 AM

Sweetness Anne-Lise. Just like you write with such care. Congratulations! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/11/2023 1:07:00 PM

a very well written double etheree, with the ending looping back nicely to the beginning - congrats on your win in the contest :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2023 12:26:00 PM

Oh my dear friend this wrings my heart and devastates my heart cords. Congratulations on a first class win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/11/2023 11:30:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your well deserved win Anne. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:25:00 AM

What a beautiful picture to go with your very poignant and soul stirring etheree. I love double etherees, and especially one that flows with not just exquisite wordplay, and imagery but also such deep emotions that can make any reader feel the depth of your feelings! “Bless the fool speak not in tongues” love that line and also the opening that truly touched my heart! Your syllables are on point! And i felt this poem strongly! Thank you for writing: congratulations on winning! Well deserved

Valsa George

Date: 10/9/2023 8:32:00 PM

Heart is brittle as glass. Unless handled with care, it will break. Your musing on the deserted heart is so very touching ! Great entry for the contest. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2023 1:20:00 AM

- Many thanks for your reading and comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/8/2023 4:03:00 PM

Your delicate poem is both strong and sensitive, winning wishes Anne this is well done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 2:22:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments Vie Rose, many thanks :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/8/2023 3:33:00 PM

so delicate poem, hope he will find the way of your heart, take care, yann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 2:22:00 AM

- Many thanks for your reading and comment, Yann :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2023 1:38:00 PM

you did so well with this double etheree. I bet it scores high.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 2:21:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 10/8/2023 12:14:00 PM

Sad and moving poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2023 12:26:00 PM

- Many thanks for your reading and comment, Jay :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/8/2023 10:20:00 AM

Unrequited love. Take care to whom you bestow your affection. Lovely Etheree. Hugs and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2023 11:57:00 AM

- Love is fragile ... - A bleeding heart - Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/8/2023 10:14:00 AM

Anne-Lise this is a truly remarkable Etheree, a work of art that captivates even with its melancholic undertones. Your words possess a piercing quality, effortlessly piercing through the barriers of the heart.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2023 11:54:00 AM

- A heart is like glass ... can easily be broken, Las - Thank you for your lovely comment - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/8/2023 8:08:00 AM

something dies within us when we're abandoned and your poem richly addresses that. The picture is the perfect illustration. We are best served in being careful with one another's hearts. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2023 11:52:00 AM

- A broken heart will always have scars, Sara - Thanks for the lovely comment - hugs :)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/8/2023 6:49:00 AM

as light from your star fades, abandoned and alone. I look forward to your continuaton, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2023 11:49:00 AM

- Thank you Lin, welcome back :) - hugs

Karen Jones

Date: 10/8/2023 6:11:00 AM

So sad and deep!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2023 11:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your reading and comment, Karen :) - hugs