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09.09.2025

Poem of the Day 11.09.2025

My Dream Within A Dream

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My Dream Within A Dream

 ~ In the back of my mind, in a filing cabinet, I hold my dreams...
                                     sealed until my death ~ quote by poet


  Dreams are as golden seeds
  a source of reflection
      It is incredibly
      liberating to escape
      from the reality
  Fly with your imagination
  stimulate human growth
     in a safe atmosphere

  A fragrance of a dream
    even in a waking state
  I plant dream seeds for joy
          as far as possible
  The ability to daydream
  My previous life story
  with different approaches
        deep or superficial
  with roots in life situation

  The future of the past
    with airy butterfly wings
  I'm protecting my dreams
  they can disappear in a flash
        My dream is still alive
    deeply rooted in the heart
        Locked in my diary
           you will never find the key
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Date: 9/16/2025 10:40:00 AM
Hi my only Sunshine, what a perfect interpretation of a dream within a dream, I love it and am so proud to be you friend , you are such an incredible poet, a true friend and you blossom with even more talent, with each new poem you post. CONGRATULATIONS ON POTD - MUCH DESERVED. Hugs and love Jennifer.
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Date: 9/16/2025 2:01:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD Sunshine for your beautifully written poem! Debx
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Date: 9/13/2025 9:55:00 AM
ohh my, belated congrats on your POTD win, anne...remarkable work which captures the multi- dimensional magic of dreams!
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Date: 9/13/2025 6:12:00 AM
Love this Anne-Lise. Belated Congratulations on POTD honors. Hugs// Charlie
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Date: 9/12/2025 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, Anne-Lise! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. I love your dream cloud picture above, :-) Bill
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Date: 9/11/2025 10:25:00 PM
A dream with in a dream, a of thought and hope at times. Enjoyed reading my friend, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/11/2025 7:18:00 PM
Beautifully reflective—your words celebrate the delicate power of dreams and the safe, secret world they create.
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Date: 9/11/2025 6:40:00 PM
Dearest Anne-Lise, I just LOVE the image you've chosen to go with your words. I find myself floating from cloud to cloud each day. The view is breathtaking, indeed. :) As far as dreams go, yours are safely tucked inside your heart. So wonderful, my sweet friend. They're always with you. :) Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs and blessings, Brandy
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Date: 9/11/2025 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Anne-Lise, on your honour of POTD. With this poem you step into a land of enchantment - which is your heart, and where dreams are made of, to be locked away from others. Deep and reflective - your poem is sublime!
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Date: 9/11/2025 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "My Dream Within A Dream" write with a great quote and great last line. Hugs... Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
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Date: 9/11/2025 11:10:00 AM
To dream, perchance to fly. Light beams enhance the eye, but, where was I? Lost in a dream, entranced and romanced by the sky!
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Date: 9/11/2025 8:33:00 AM
Some dreams are not to be shared. Lovely writing Anne-Lise. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/11/2025 7:54:00 AM
Anne-Lise Congratulations on poem of the day! A dreamy liberation indeed! Fav lines too many. "plant dream seeds for joyas far as possible" "Fly with your imagination" Beautiful lines! Enjoy your day. xXHugs
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Date: 9/11/2025 5:29:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, Congrats on POTD! It’s so haunting and beautiful, like something Plath might have written. I love how you treat dreams not just as escape, but as seeds! I think there’s something so tender in the way you protect them even as they flutter with butterfly wings. We all carry these fragile, pieces of ourselves, hoping they’ll survive the noise of the world. Blessings, Anne-Lise, Daniel
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Date: 9/11/2025 4:45:00 AM
Sublime thoughts, Anne-Lise. The seeds of love planted will surely sprout in time, spreading an enriching divine fragrance. Warmest congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/11/2025 4:30:00 AM
delighted this enchanting and dreamy poem was selected as POTD. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/11/2025 3:29:00 AM
Anne-Lise, a beautiful poem. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/11/2025 2:08:00 AM
I'm delighted to see your dream poem recognized of poem of the day. Hugs and congratulations, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 9/11/2025 12:42:00 AM
Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, here’s hoping all your dreams become reality. Congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 9/11/2025 12:31:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Anne-Lise on today's POTD honour. Tom
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Date: 9/10/2025 10:38:00 AM
It is a blessing to achieve your goals, no matter where you are on the spectrum of consciousness. We can stay under the radar in this enchanted land—beautifully depicted. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/10/2025 6:54:00 AM
"My dream is still alive deeply rooted in the heart" -- Beautiful write. You share whether you know it or not...poetry has no "Candle' light kept under bushels."
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Date: 9/10/2025 2:56:00 AM
Ahhh!! I like this one. If it is for the contest, I believe it is a good contender. Way to go. I enjoyed reading about your dream/s hidden away. Sara K
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Date: 9/9/2025 11:30:00 PM
You did really well with the challenge, Anne-Lise. Excellent poetry
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Date: 9/9/2025 9:03:00 PM
To be able to dwell in a world of dreams, whether sleeping or awake is indeed a boon. To such a dream world, we can slip unnoticed. Well composed. All the best dear Anne. Hugs....
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