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Blog Posted:11/8/2013 1:11:00 PM




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Grimm


the rabid blutbad


By;

Shanity Rain ~






It was not your usual October night, Monroe was next to his GF (Rosalie) she notices his nervous behavior.  They are getting ready to watch a movie. BREAKING NEWS Channel 8,





NEWSCASTER’ (a body has been discovered by the Local police, the victim is female at this point we will keep you updated as any more information comes in, the identity of this female is not available until Family is contacted. the police have said she may be a victim of foul play and was found earlier today by 2 people walking their dogs at Johns Landing by the Willamette River.)



Rose gets up to make a special blend of tea for Blutbads.



He started changing his appearance to her when she cut a finger putting a tea leave back in the container. He is staring at the red blood with almost a thirst .Then feeling embarrassed by even the idea.


Monroe   (Honey, are you ok?) 



Rosalie smiles, being supportive says to Monroe (It’s Ok, you know I know what is in your head right now.)


MONROE (You Do?)


GF (Yes Honey, when was the last time you went to a meeting?)


Monroe (Baby, you know I don't need that anymore.) Arrogantly then says            (I think Nick can attest to me being just fine, hey you are worrying to much)



GF Rose


(I just saw you change, you are having cravings! Now, if you don't want to admit it to me. Admit it to yourself, I don't care,


I want you in a Meeting! It has been 3 months now, and I know you are very important to Nick and I. I'm so proud of who you are,  who we are together ..and that is why I want you to go to The Candlelight meeting at 10pm tonight.


I've been with you long enough now to know when you are vulnerable , Fall always brings on the Cravings , the air is crisp, The Moon is Harvest , The scent alone can make you Relapse ! )  




Monroe looking down at the meeting schedule she handed him says (you really think I need this? That I can't get by with doing some platies and a little Cello? Come on...) Monroe In denial"



NICK pulls up in car.


Nick interrupts by door knock. Nick (Hey what’s up Nick?) as he opens the door with the red blood eyes of a true Blutbad, Nick steps back startled. (Whoa!! Hey. have I caught you at a bad time ? Do I need to be worried here? )


MONROE (No Man, It is Just the Season)


Rosalie     (Yes, you do) telling Nick (Come In, I was just making a special herbal tea for Blutbads.


Nick (Do you have one for a Grimm?)Laughing,


Rosalie (actually you will find this to calm your nerves as well, it has tons of my special herbs right from Portland)


MONROE;   (come in Nick, Maybe you can help us out here, Rose thinks I need a meeting!  )


Rose (That’s Right I do!  And so will Nick If that is what it takes)


"NICK (Wait. What? What are you talking about? Would one of you clue me in here?)


ROSE (I am sorry Nick, I should have talked to you in private, It’s the change of Seasons  ...In every one of us Blutbads , all of us have the cravings and Fall makes us really silly " I am just worried That Monroe is going to relapse ...)


Monroe (Relapse?   Now I need a drink!)


  He gets his beer out, opens and guzzles. He sits down.


Nick still confused but the situation defused says (what can I do?)


Monroe (sit down Nick, it’s true, she’s right it is the fall, always brings out the worst in us Blutbads. Ok, Ok I’ll do it.)


Rose (Yes! See I knew you would see it my way) she jumps on him and gives a Kiss


Nick (wait a minute  ...Talk to me about what you are doing?)


Monroe , ( well Nick it’s Kind of Like AA,  as he grabs another Beer out of Fridge , We , I mean Blutbads like myself and some other species get together when we start feeling most…. vulnerable , and have a meeting , just like an Alcoholic needs a Meeting.  As do we....sometimes.  }

  drinking his beer ( Ya know I just thought That was over for me with my strict regimen of "Exercise " and great diet Since Rosalie is feeding me ! ' She is Right the Fall can bring out cravings in us, so if it will make you happy then, I will go to the 10 pm meeting tonight "as Monroe Looks at Nick and GF for approval,


They look directly at each other. Nick & Rosalie


And say (YES) at the same time


Monroe "well I got about Hr. before, so I should get going, walk with me Buddy "to Nick.


Nick says to Rose (It’s always nice seeing you) 


Rose (you to Nick) smiles


As he and Monroe walk out the door, Monroe grabs a jacket, they leave. Nick (I can give you a ride)


MONROE (No, It’s better you Don’t  ...you may send shock waves through the meeting group, we like to stand outside before it starts  .You know ,have a cig, talk  ...And ah ,I don't think a Grimm would make these Guys and Gals feel comfortable, ya know what I mean? It’s officially a Church Meeting that we put together)


(Hey? Why did you come over? You need my help instead? I can always get out of the meeting and go with you, that sounds much more inviting so What’s Up?)




Nick ( well actually I do want to talk to you, There’s been a couple of murders here, were not certain but Russell and I think it’s the same guy, and he is a sick one.. he likes displaying the bodies of the victims in a gruesome way " we also think he visits the crime scene so we are staking out the last body found of a young OSHU student found by the river )

Monroe ( yeah I heard on the news , Let me help  Nick ,}




NICK (Not so fast, remember  ... You don't want to relapse around me pal!) "Monroe ( OH yeah, .You had to remind me  ...I hate these meetings, as they say go until you want to keep going and all that bullshit stuff " both laugh .. Monroe "Hey, I'll catch up with you tomorrow say 11am for lunch?)


NICK   (good deal, see ya.) then as he walks to his car gets in smiles, window down. (You sure you don't want that ride?)

MONROE" (Only if you want to scare the hell out of the meeting! Then I won't have one to go to)




The two have no idea what is about to come their way , as Monroe is walking he looks at his hand that changes and up at the moon. Keeps walking towards the meeting at St. Francis church up the street ...Something is just not right. He can smell it in the Fresh Air.


There Is a Rabid Blutbad in the same town; he is ready for another Kill.


He knows the police are looking for someone; he is not going to get caught, so he heard about a meeting, a safe place where Blutbads can go for a while. He wants to blend in with everyone. He likes his Kill fresh and his choice of prey is young girls, in College. Portland is perfect for him; it has become his new Territory.


He has been at this for a long time now. Those Girls belong to him! How dare the police touch what belongs to him! As is walking, he sees the Church ahead he was told about. He is so hungry. But he will wait.


He will wait until it is the right time to kill. He can wait. He always does, for he is one that has been killing a very long time. He waits ..patiently, looking at the group surrounded outside the Church approaching. He notices a brunette , very shapely, young ..he is hungry, maybe this will be more interesting then a place to hide.



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Date: 11/8/2013 5:54:00 PM
awesome .... congrats.... love that show
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:52:00 AM
1st AD ! There is a difference , but it was huge, I am so proud of him , and when I see his name in credits , not every show , but many .. I can not stop smiling !
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:50:00 AM
Thank-you ! I do too. My Son has worked from the start in the BG , however in the 1st season , you can see him as a policeman , full shot in the " The organ donor " He has been asked to act , yet loves the BG, he wants too Direct and Produce ! He was 1st Director on "the House of last things " at 23 yrs old ! This was filmed 2 yrs.' ago . Finally , it went to Paris, and Russia and will be here! his name " Jesse Bellis "
Date: 11/8/2013 4:37:00 PM
Wow you got a script accepted how cool is that!
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:55:00 AM
The fact you like it :) is enough for me ..I am still a starving artist, yet ..not in spirit .
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:44:00 AM
1st Thank-you for reading ! In honesty ..it was given to the writers, because I respect my Son whom has worked extremely hard in this series, as BG, wrangler , He told me "Mom , It's good , you need to have edited " now, being his Mom 1st not a fan , I really don't know if something was done with it ~ The fact "they liked it " was a nobility !
Date: 11/8/2013 3:55:00 PM
your amazing Shanity.... a gripping write. I wish my fiance would post his short stories. .. luv. ..Linda
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:41:00 AM
edited ~~ You are very talented .
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:39:00 AM
Linda~ being new still since August , I just found these replies , or would have replied sooner ! You are Amazing ! I would love to see your Husbands stories , maybe you could publish them in soft cover , and call it The Story my Husband does not want you to read! Oooh, I can see the cash flow! You very talented and have inspired me to write, I thank-you !
Date: 11/8/2013 2:02:00 PM
I am writing my 2nd book , this one is Fiction~ The 1st book , My truth and pain "Legalized Kidnapping " by Shanity Rain, has just been published . I honor Poetrysoup.com , in my 1st book as being a wonderful place for a writer to be. At the back of my Truth , are poems inspired by pain , happiness and life ~ Please note , the comments above , I am talking about my Son being in the Series GRIMM, I meant to say "Mom 1st , Fan 2nd ! " I love The show Grimm~ this was written and stored on my Computer 2 years ago.
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