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Apple Pickin Time

Walking through the many ripe apple tress ,holding secrets I pick a bushel thinking of my love through the misty breeze Apple pickin time in the Valley called Naples, awaits a meeting For my love will arrive by the Valley in red that meets the sun falling At my laced boot some fine wine, a love note tied through my hair The secret love not shared would be tragic in heart and mind. following the paths through the many trees in line , apple pickin time all embraced, the colors of Fall enhances my only dream .. It is apple pickin time in the passion of leaves love enlightened I pick my apples with pride knowing soon , my love at my side It has been a long neglected dream, a fear follows desire held in secret no longer able to fight this burning fire, a risk taken , all ethics aside Walking through the many ripe apple trees , holding secrets I pick a bushel thinking of my love through the misty breeze Apple pickin time in the Valley called Naples , awaits a meeting For my love will arrive by the Valley in red that meets the sun falling

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Date: 11/12/2013 5:50:00 PM
Way to go..Congrats on your winning work.Sara
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:22:00 PM
Thank-you my kind friend and poetess! You are full of encouragement , and loving others !! I love that about you Sara , for you are truly a writer. SR.
Date: 11/9/2013 5:26:00 PM
Shanity, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:23:00 PM
Skat ..Thank-you ! If I have not said it , I love your pro pic, you are beautiful~ Inside and outside . SR.
Date: 11/9/2013 12:02:00 PM
I enjoyed the mystique and anticipation of meeting the love by the Valley in red. Well done. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/9/2013 12:59:00 PM
oh yes , isn't that a Kodak moment ! We all wish we could stay there for a while;)
Date: 11/9/2013 4:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win , Shanity
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Date: 11/9/2013 12:58:00 PM
Thank-you Dr :)
Date: 10/15/2013 6:01:00 PM
ahhh, you did a romantic one!! Very nice.
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:38:00 AM
You are adorable !!
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:09:00 AM
Thank-you ..having to dig deep ;)
Date: 10/12/2013 1:01:00 PM
Sounds like a delicious undertaking. Well expressed and a bit naughty!
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Date: 10/14/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thank-you , and finally edited !
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Date: 10/13/2013 12:15:00 PM
Thank-you Richard , I was trying to do that..my writings can be a bit sad !
Date: 10/12/2013 7:01:00 AM
A marvelous crispy appley poem so enchanting and gorgeous! Enjoyd each crunchy line. Pls do review my latest too.:)
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Date: 10/13/2013 12:14:00 PM
I definitely will , you are an amazing Poet ! Thank-you , every comment means the World to me . I wish I had 1 month , just to read and write ! What a life that would be , on the Soup !
Date: 10/11/2013 2:55:00 PM
such a beautiful write
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Date: 10/11/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thank-you my very sweet friend !
Date: 10/11/2013 10:34:00 AM
you bring magical romance to apple pickin' time, shanity... nature's way of showing her abundance and generosity...this is simply smashin'.. :) huggs
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Date: 10/11/2013 5:36:00 PM
Thank-you my beautiful poetess , I love all you say , with such poetic beauty !

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