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Legends of tribes roam across the plains Bold spirits guarding their own mighty land They dance and offer songs asking for rain To nourish grains when omens rise on, Encircling a bonfire with shaman’s praise. The whisper of the winds gives them strength An Indian terrain, they protect Oh, hear drumbeats pound a mighty roar As chieftain gathers the arrow’s quest For the call of blood, for freedom’s dreams. Legends passed from generations Grandpas holding peace pipes, tales unfold When full moon speaks of native wisdom To recount strides in brave moccasins
Marking prints from whisper of the winds.
Native American People Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/29/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Enjoyed this a lot Nette, I see a lot of thought went into this write, pleased i checked this out Joe..)

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:24:00 PM
    This is amazing ..I am reading through these poems again . They all could be published , and that is an idea! thank-you for this gift of yours not to be forgotten. a Fav

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 9:29:00 PM
    nette, nice win...LINDA

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 10:43:00 AM
    very nicely written Nette

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 8:38:00 PM
    The last line is stunning the way it connects them seamlessly to nature. Good luck in the Contest. Hugs, SuZ

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 7:06:00 AM
    This is beautifully written nette...a winning entry for sure...:-) ..have a great weekend

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Nette..Ow sweet Nettie..this is an excellent piece.Jts like being there amongst those native americans dancing and singing to the rain.If I was judging the contest this would be amongst the winners..Bravo.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:35:00 PM
    this is gorgeous Nette...I have always loved the native American Indians and their way of life fascinated me as a child... love your poem...good luck In the contest! hugs :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:33:00 PM
    You have a great insight into the Native American People my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous write this evening! What an astounding poem, such a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Reads like winning material for the Native American contest..Great poetic quality work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Nette, you have capture the beauty and essence of the native American people! WOW! A real masterpiece. I applaud you. You will do well......I guarantee it! :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 2:20:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 1:57:00 PM
    A wonderful tribute. The howling, the dancing , the living--- powerfully woven & written..I have nothing but positive vibes about your elegant poetry!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 1:00:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem telling the story of a proud culture that was suppressed and nearly eliminated.A heritage of a work whispering in the winds!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:14:00 PM
    - Stories followed with the wind ... told over and over again ... stories that must never be forgotten .... for freedom and dreams.   - Well done Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:40:00 AM
    Your spirituality & perspective shines strongly in these lines. Tribes would be so proud of this poem. Wonderful job!