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Cherry Bomb

Cherry Bomb

all gross and red
deflowering natures way
cherry blossom pop  

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:35:00 AM

    Nice poem...... Highly Enjoyable.....
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:22:00 PM

    A short precise haiku. Nicely done. love phyl
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:25:00 PM

    SKAT, we have cherry blossoms(as in the tree) blowing everywhere at the moment, what a mess!!!Thanks so much for my placement in your contest, I am very honoured, constance
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:40:00 AM

    And straight to the point... Jack
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 6:06:00 AM

    Short and sweet. :)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 PM

    nice...:)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 9:26:00 PM

    Well said in only a few words.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:06:00 PM

    Interesting work..Was it for a contest?..Creative and unique work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are uplifting.."Reflections Of You" was written about me reflecting on my husband but it had really more to it than just that..Sara
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 1:56:00 PM

    one of the best I have seen in a long time. Elaine
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Ah a delectable haiku! Enjoyd. Hope u enjoy mine newest too.
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 10:12:00 AM

    Lovely read. Congrats on your membership renewal!
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 4:36:00 AM

    Hi S.K.A.T thanks for placing me in your contest...you make me happy..Have a nice day! Love, Maria
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Good dearie, quite enjoyed that... thanks for your comment on my poem.
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Thanks for the warm welcome SKAT. Nice poem here, I personally read something sexual into it, though that may not have been your intention.
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:17:00 AM

    hi SKAT thank you for your comment. it helps me a lot! i have haiku entitled, THE STARS and the other one is INNOCENT LIE. hope for your comment or suggestion there!
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 11:29:00 PM

    Hello skat i thing this little write is cool..' there are a lot of possibiltys in this write.. i hope things are well with you.. Joe..)
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:51:00 PM

    Thank you for the warm welcome Skat. Lovely lovely poem, xx
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 12:03:00 AM

    Hello, skat, thanks again for getting the kitty contest judged!! Sometimes so much time goes by and a contest just goes unjudged forever and forgotten but I am glad to see one that is revived!
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 3:13:00 PM

    enjoying this one again, Skat : )
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:44:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, leaves one to ponder, when you can do that in such a short verse youve done a geat job, blessings Carl
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 11:32:00 AM

    "If we could switch shoes" is my current favorite of my works. It is very deep to my heart, I think you would enjoy it.
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 11:17:00 PM

    Anticipation of spring in blossom! Beautiful!
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:28:00 PM

    KQQL
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:44:00 PM

    When he's putting in work.... This is good! Almost gotta a Senryu twist to it. Crafty!
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:51:00 PM

    love it. so pretty and simple, and yet complexity hides behind your words.
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:54:00 AM

    Having a relook to see deflowering in flowering. wonderful concept. thanks for your congrats, luv:) Jag
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:42:00 PM

    I'll take your advice anytime. Great and nasty poem.
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:29:00 AM

    ...................... ‡ Ps., Hey Girl! ˜ Your Beauty, Deserves To Stand Atop The Features Board With, 'Your Beautiful, Sweet Cherry Bombs!' ~ My Love, Always, Rachel *
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:56:00 AM

    Awesome. Congrats on your win. Rick
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 12:15:00 AM

    you are a good poet i like your writing very fresh perspective i am going to read more
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