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How Wounded Thunder Earned His Name

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How Wounded Thunder Earned His Name

               You stand on "Wounded Thunder's” hallowed ground.

                He boomed such boastful tales  that fearless chief!

                There was no brave as clever to be found

                until he met the source of all his grief.

                There came a one who all his tricks would tell,

                and this is where he made his greatest blunder.

                The minx so bold who knew him all too well

                he married, . . . . and her name was "Stealing Thunder."

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Loved your funny poem. Congrats on your win. Sorry for late. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:40:00 PM
    This one made me chuckle. Nicely done. Look I have gotten to Nov. on your poems.. I am so behind on reading and commenting. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 12:31:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:40:00 PM
    Thank-you for entering and gifting me with a favorite, I just realizing who wrote it ! If I would have known ..I may have moved you up a notch , sometimes , in fact, all is just good not to know, in contest . Like the others , it is amazing.

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    Date: 11/26/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope you know ..I thought it was a winner to !
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:22:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:34:00 AM
    Well Andrea, I KNEW this had to place somewhere in the contest...You said you wrote another one about this? Fixin to go find it...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Well Andrea, I guess you made the list after all. This one put a smile on my face. I have no idea why she did this? She, refuse to remove my poem. But found it easy to place all left over poems, 11-15. Yeah... You made the list, you are right above my poem.. I am happy I made the list after all....luv~ Linda

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:01:00 AM
    I'm glad that I came back to read this. I loved it. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:28:00 AM
    love this fun write too, my friend. Did she have thunder thighs? LOL (we say that for big legs)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:50:00 AM
    Creative and such fun to read!

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 3:37:00 PM
    I like this one because it is about Native Americans. There is a native American fair in Brooklyn and I always go to it. There is dancing. crafts, and a healing circle. At the last one I joined in the dance. I believe that you have invented an interesting character here. Great nave! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:17:00 PM
    Love these poems. How many in this saga. You have such wonderful wit.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:13:00 AM
    A very wonderful and so entertaining to read this amazing tale/poem of yours my very dear friend Andrea. So much delighted to read it this afternoon;)))) Two thumbs up! I miss to read your poems already. so glad to stop by here this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing! By the way, belated thanks ( a lot) also for the nice comments on my blog and everything! Have a wonderful day always! love much and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:45:00 AM
    It was nice to read this creative poem sweet lady. Now im going to read the one which follows.Ynks for getting my attention re the plural thing.When in my mind I try to translate a thought from maltese to english..That s what happens : )I fixed it now.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:25:00 PM
    This poem was a wonderful read Andrea, and made me smile, well done my friend...peter

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:22:00 PM
    a delight and beautifully penned

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Beautiful humorous poem enjoyed. You have chosen the right girl for right boy. Wonderful picture of their family. You have created the fact nicely, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:45:00 AM
    Me, if it's my acct. it's me I hate when the judge asked for the poets name, so when the mood strikes me I use pen names ;) Glad you like it. Dauphne Rising means Victory Rising! aahhhh HA shooosh don't tell anyone!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 9:51:00 AM
    love the humorous ending of this piece... this was a fun read...nicely crafted poem andrea :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 9:27:00 AM
    She had to wound him to steal him, right? Duh. This is clever, dear Andrea. Me call you Tiger Eye. Love, daver