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Rain,You Come Often For, I Would Live Sane

For walking, by early morning sharp 6, Parking my cycle by children’s park, Started I, round the park. Breeze severe, drizzle slow. Rushing to shelter I see rain, no welcome face in park. happy inside I showed aversion my surprise! Flowers smile, butterflies dance, bloody some flies too joined the dance. passion in me got triggered . I wanted to dance with flies try catching butterflies and flies . I fear for, all in the shelter may laugh, my dignity my respect I bother much. envying the butterflies and flowers Lucky fellows gifted to dance and smooch! I saw a boy near me in my spirit. tried sweet talk to make him dance in rain. too smart this fellow, he wanted me to dance first. I cursed the younger generation for not loving nature I told him, “In our days we would dance the whole day”! fellow said, “you country fellow, I have a date today”. I cursed him “go hell. Dance with evil spirits”. I became very nostalgic of my childhood days! By school days ,I try all eccentric things . Believe me,I even lay flat on the ground and look at rain in all angles. Even research on reflection of light on rain drops. Today I could never imagine for that in all rain probably I have to take a picnic for that. But for sure, the sense of rain always makes me nostalgic, a great cure for many of my untold pains. rain,you come often for, I would live sane…… 15-11-2013. by Jenish Soosai anthony for "Fragrance of rain" contest by nette onclaud.

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Date: 11/26/2013 2:59:00 PM
Thank-you for your contest sponsored , I came her to Thank-you ..and found this amazing piece of poetry ! I have been blessed many times today. Shanity Rain.
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Date: 11/26/2013 3:00:00 PM
here ~ typo :)
Date: 11/19/2013 12:54:00 PM
this so beautifully descriptive...you paint a most vivid, child-like picture of rain, jenish... since i was caught up in the beauty of this wonderful write, i cited you in my blog... a winner in my heart!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/16/2013 4:35:00 AM
profound write of many layers Jenish good pen. TY for visiting my work . These days our royals have no real power they can only influence Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/15/2013 9:37:00 PM
as a child I loved the rain...running through it, dancing in it can all be fun but now I don't like being caught in it...enjoyed your poem...good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:35:00 PM
a very interesting take on this topic, Jenish. It's good to know that you relish the rain so much!!
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