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Surreal Nature Haibu

the scent of rain and leaves the trees colors vibrant orange red yellow greens swirled in mist of gold the pumpkins and corn the Earth has fed us harvested to follow a unknown path with a chill in the air riding on a hayride by night bon fire light sipping a spicy apple cider , a full October moons magical smile only with your first young love embraced and warmed as the air is touched with a cold cinnamon apples breath stirs your senses and brings out the desire of a long held kiss "Autumns Breath "

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 9:09:00 AM

Yvette K, congrats!!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Scenery.... hugs *LINDA

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/14/2013 10:41:00 AM

Thank-you Linda ~ I have been inspired by the new contest , trying to get my book done , tougher then one realizes ! I love this site ~ Yvette

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/13/2013 6:10:00 AM

Yvette so lovely good write congrats Shadow x smile

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/13/2013 6:24:00 AM

Thanks Shadow , and the same to you ..I have been writing and editing a book , it will be out by Christmas .. I just noted if I took " THE " out of 1st two lines , it can be read interesting , the 1st word , starting at end , backswords .This site is helping me grow ! Much Love !! Yvette

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:30:00 AM

A lovely winning poem Yvette ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/12/2013 4:14:00 PM

Thank-you my beautiful Poet friend ~ Yvette

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/11/2013 7:50:00 PM

Im jealous you are keeping all autumns there! one day Im gonna experience autumn and winter. . . . Congrats on your win. Morgan

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/11/2013 8:49:00 PM

Oh , I hope you do , you must live in a very Hot climate ? Hold a ice cube , and close your eyes , and imagine a forest of colorful leaves with a brisk scent in the air of Pumpkin, Love , Yvette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2013 1:24:00 PM

Cinnamon Apple Kiss..Uniquely creative winning work..Enjoyed readding ..Congrats on your win..Sara

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/11/2013 1:42:00 PM

editing never ends ... your win to !

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/11/2013 1:41:00 PM

Thank-you Sara , and your to ! Have a most deserving long held Fall ~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/11/2013 10:12:00 AM

Wonderful, I cant wait to doo all those thingsw. congrats. BG

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/11/2013 1:43:00 PM

Thank-you , I know you will , and may it be memorable, a cherished moment ~

Donna Jones

Date: 9/10/2013 6:22:00 PM

Beautiful...congratulations

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/11/2013 7:25:00 AM

Thanks ! with love and warm , safe thoughts of you And all your family today , Love , yvette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2013 12:23:00 PM

- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Yvette. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/10/2013 1:24:00 PM

Thank-you my beautiful friend from Norway ~ I love your poems , and if you did not reply to my win , I would not know I won !! I adore you ~ We must have coffee & chocolate someday ! Yvette

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/25/2013 4:59:00 PM

It is like being there! A vivid image that one may say nature pales in comparison! Great work! Thank you!

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/29/2013 6:40:00 AM

Thank-you ..I am sorry I did not see this earlier , I am wishing you this Fall , like written , but even better coming! love , Yvette

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/25/2013 3:57:00 PM

drawing words beautiful really lovely piece

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/25/2013 4:23:00 PM

well now, my Irish Poet ! what a compliment , Thank-you .

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/25/2013 8:13:00 AM

Wow, Yvette a vivd picture here you paint with your words. Look like someone can't wait for fall, and neither can I being in a dry parched land. Nice poem! MC

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/25/2013 12:49:00 PM

Thank-you ! My Well spoken friend MC ~