To Be

to be considered a poetess ~ to be told by so many talented people here This is a beautiful write , keep writing I love the way you gracefully put the words together To be the Mother of three amazing children For my Daughter to tell me she is proud of me for she thinks I write beautifully ~ To be loved infinitely ..and for me to love in return I was asked for my Autograph 3 times in a year I will not lie ...that was amazing ! To be told " has anyone ever told you you're beautiful ? Well ..I didn't want you to forget ." to be called Yvetteishka ~ to be entered in ~The best compliment Contest ~

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2013 11:35:00 AM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/13/2013 12:10:00 PM

Thank-you again , Love you so much and your inspiration Sara !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/10/2013 6:37:00 AM

Congrats for the win in the contest, Shanity

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/10/2013 3:22:00 PM

Thank-you ! You are so faithful by reading others and commenting , this says so much about your Character !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2013 10:42:00 AM

Shanity, your poem is awesome. Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/9/2013 11:34:00 AM

Thank-you my muse and beautiful friend ! I actually was worried it may sound Vain , yet my Mom died when I was very young , said 'you must be able to take a compliment gracefully "

Donna Jones

Date: 10/7/2013 10:57:00 PM

Lovely....much congratulations

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/8/2013 12:13:00 AM

Thank-you Donna , these contest are so inspiring ..

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/7/2013 11:52:00 AM

well done and A well deserved compliment ...Seren

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/7/2013 5:39:00 PM

Thank-you ! I work and periodically come to the site when I can , This is a wonderful win and compliment !

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 9/20/2013 8:37:00 AM

Another nice poem Yvette! Good Luck in the upcoming contest...Can I have your autograph too? I've never been asked for my autograph outside of uniform LOL! That's so cool! MC

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/20/2013 9:03:00 AM

Thank-you MC ! This happened 15 years ago in Monterey Bay , 2 people thought ' Goldie Hawn ' then " Meg Ryan " The 3rd ..I just signed because this sweet Family from Mexico , I speak a little Spanish , and still could not understand whom they thought I was , so I said Gracias ! Mi amour , my Initials ! The children were happy & for a minute ..it was a compliment ! your Yvette ~

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/19/2013 7:35:00 PM

Well, Yvetteishka...That is a beautiful name. :o) I'd like to thank you for your kind words on my song I wrote. And to tell you this is a sweet poem.<3

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/20/2013 9:05:00 AM

Thank-you ~~ your song is excellent , I can only imagine how beautiful it sounds. I have been reading poems as much as I can during the day , I really like yours . yvette

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 9/19/2013 5:25:00 PM

To be... or not to be! That is the question. A poet chooses to be...

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/19/2013 5:29:00 PM

This is try in so many aspects ! Shakespeare. Still wandering his true identity , if in fact he was a Royal Man whom secretly wrote all beautifully .

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/19/2013 4:41:00 PM

PENNED AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL I TIP MY HAT AND SMILE

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/19/2013 5:30:00 PM

Well I Tip mine back to you ! I smile back ;)