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Poetry has been my passion since my retirement from an accountancy based career a dozen years ago. I currently live in South Africa and this rainbow nation has inspired many of my poems. I also have British nationality and embrace their grammar and spelling, but I read widely and am not fazed by strict grammar rules: A pavement/sidewalk; glasses/eyeglasses; judgement/judgment, et cetera; they are one and the same to me when I read poetry. To date, I have self-published a number of books, including the poetry anthology by international poets, © Time, 2014 ISBN 978-0-620-60578-6, and have been cited in many international publications, both poetry journals, as well as in scholarly handbooks. Some of my short stories have been published in international electronic publications, and one of my novellas had been short-listed for an Afrikaans SA publication.

I serve on the Board of Advisers, of Taleemi Baithak. (See my blog, Words of Wisdom, 29 September 2023.)

I have a number of poetic forms to my credit, notably, Suzette Prime (listed here on PoetrySoup), as well as Suzette sonnet.

My most recent books which include examples of my poetry as well as notes regarding poetry - available directly from me:

  1. © The Eutony of Words, 2018 ISBN 978-0-6399382-0-2
  2. © Docendo discimus, 2021 (Revised 2023) ISBN 978-0-620-95432-7
  3. © Flight of Thoughts, 2023 ISBN 978-0-6397-8880-7
  4. © Downtown - Poetic Devices, 2023 ISBN 978-0-7961-1968-1
  5.  © Rocking Poetry, 2033 ISBN 978-0-7961-2824-9

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Having Fun with Rhymes

Blog Posted:3/22/2024 12:50:00 PM

If you are like me, rhymes don’t often feature in the design of your poetry. I have a working knowledge of some common types of rhymes, but it is not at the top of my list when I have an idea or inspiration for a poem. Besides the more common RhymeZone, I have found the following a great help; especially with uncommon words I wished to rhyme.

rhymebrain.com

In the decasyllabic (approx 10 syllables per line) sonnet, Autumn, I posted earlier today, I had a field day with various types of rhymes. I used the rhyme scheme: abababab cdcdcd

Autumn (poetrysoup.com)

IN THE OCTASTICH (8 LINES)

Perfect/exact/strong Single Rhyme: A rhyme in which the stress is on the final syllable of the words, and the preceding consonants differ (snow, below). Identical Rhyme: The stressed vowel sound is the same—they do not satisfy the second: that the preceding consonant be different. As stated above, in a perfect rhyme the last stressed vowel and all following sounds are identical in both words (blows – when read out loud, one would not pronounce the ‘s’; the reason why a strong rhyme is important*). Trailing Rhyme: It is where a single stressed syllable word is sometimes softened by using trailing rhyme, i.e. in which one or two words trail an additional unstressed syllable behind it (lowing).

Perfect/exact Dactylic Rhyme: A rhyme in which the stress is on the antepenultimate (third from last) syllable of the words, as well as the succeeding syllables rhyme, but the preceding consonants differ. (pluvial, exuvial, induvial, fluvial)

IN THE SESTET (6 LINES)

Perfect/exact Double Rhyme: A rhyme in which the stress is on the penultimate (second from last) syllable of the words, as well as the succeeding syllables rhyme. It conforms to the definition of perfect rhyme insofar as the onset consonants are different. (fated, mated, berated)

Syllabic Rhyme: A rhyme in which the final, unstressed syllables in the words rhyme, and the stress (usually) falls on the penultimate syllable in each of the words, and where these do not rhyme. (somewhere, nowhere, elsewhere)

 

It is an advantage to differentiate between the types of rhymes as it will help the poet to avoid the pitfall of forced/slant rhyme, which is often frowned upon; e.g. trying to rhyme ‘sting’ and ‘sitting’. For an overview of some types of rhymes:

Rhyme - Wikipedia

[Edit 8 April 2024]

Whether considering using rhyme, perfect or otherwise, the topic will lend itself to a particular style or genre. Even the metre dictated for a particular poetic form would almost automatically exclude certain types of rhymes, e.g. a dactylic rhyme would not suit an iambic verse. The snowflakes aside, not all topics are suitable to be the subject of a poem. Well, not in the mainstream where a poet might meet with some resistance. Therefore, know your audience. I penned the following 'tanka' as an example—even a rhyme would not have saved this from the disaster it is.

huge albatross

it ate a mouse

fastidious

sushi platter

plastic chopsticks

Background: House mice that were introduced to Gough Island in the South Atlantic are attacking and killing both adult and baby albatross. Previously, scientists on the British island captured video showing the mice attacking and devouring Tristan albatross chicks, but this is the first evidence of the mice harming the adult birds.

Happy quills!

Suzette

Also see my updated article from March 2023 (edit dd 8 April 2024):

Square Pegs in Round Holes - Rhymes That Are Frowned Upon | PoetrySoup.com

*Where you need to adjust the syllable count or grammar, you may use an apostrophe to take the place of the discarded word/part of a word (As we’ve become accustomed t’ crime). When read aloud, this is not pronounced. 



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Date: 3/23/2024 6:41:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, especially first two lines and especially the last line. Thank you for sharing another rhyming website. Happy quills back at ya!
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Date: 3/23/2024 7:02:00 AM
You are welcome, Kim. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 3/23/2024 6:11:00 AM
I enjoyed this blog Suzette, really helpful and interesting. I gravitate to free verse but sometimes rhyme and sometimes throw caution to the wind and let an unusual or haphazard rhyme scheme remain. This shows there's more than one way to do it.
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Date: 3/23/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, DD. I love your free spirited poetry :)
Date: 3/22/2024 8:07:00 PM
Thank you for this post. I prefer slant rhyme, also called off rhyme. So often true rhyme seems forced by awkward juxtapositions making the poem not smoothly read. I do dabble in true rhyme, but it is always challenging.
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Date: 3/22/2024 11:13:00 PM
You are welcome, Chetta. As I said to Mala, a poem could actually be spoiled by being too exact in rhymes. I will relax my quest for that perfect rhyme and concentrate on the flow and rhythm of the poem.
Date: 3/22/2024 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Suzette, for this post about rhymes. I am much more comfortable in free verse - same like you, I don't think of a particular format when I think of a new idea. Sometimes I have surprised myself by writing a good rhyming poem, but I will definitely explore the sites you have mentioned. Thanks again. Warm wishes ~
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Date: 3/22/2024 11:09:00 PM
You are welcome. Thinking of words to rhyme as examples in the poem. Autumn, brought it home to me that a poem could actually be spoiled by the rhyme.

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