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Hélène, by Gustave Moreau


 

I wonder: would you make me your mistress lost in a world of poetry under your wings I’ll celebrate heaven's gift; more to me a tortured love wretched wishes: life's greatest anguish our heaven's in sight, you see my eyes voyeur, I see you looking at me don't try to love me if you can’t, I will not break the day will come I can resist you taking a chance, there is beauty; life’s symphony gentle murmurs – the scent of your soul indulgent love, you tempt me – hold on to me to bloom in red flame amidst the fallen petals if you wonder how do I love thee I'm here because words spoken by you you touch me with your words from your heart’s caverns your maze of words blazing across your sky speak my language; the coupling of our souls I have seen those lips, that smile you said there's more to life what you want life is short; kiss away my pain there is a place beyond perceptions from a distance, I love to watch you fly fireflies or fairies: the difference between you and me out of the wilderness I thirst for an angel way back when the day we met it was easy my need for love; a place to lay my head in tenderness of night touch me like you mean it in the moment the journey of your lips my lover's words a melody divine glitter on my skin, serenading the senses stream of memories; you listen to me they ask me why I love you through the mist you keep me grounded – must it be black and white you are my spring; you are my sanity; my muse I always believed wishes are for fools’ judgement if I were stronger the essence of love the reward nearby a dream within reality, a chasing after the wind if I could hold back the dawn: serenity and peace I used to write for you; just let the poet be your words pale, were I to know you too will go don’t tell my heart; let me write; don’t censor me the day you gently let me go, my love endures once love has died spare a few kinds words for me remembered echoes put on hold; I'll die in peace when velvet turns to stone, let my tombstone read: the scent of poems past never to be erased Poems by Eileen Manassian: A collage of titles spanning a period from 2012 – 2021, WITH PERMISSION. NB Every single word of this poem, including the title ('You are' & 'My Muse') was derived verbatim from 112 titles -- list on request (out of possibly near 1,700 titles) of Ms Manassian’s poems, hence I did not put the poem in quotation marks. Poetic form:CENTO.

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Date: 6/29/2021 5:04:00 PM
Oh! I'm thrilled with your win, my dear. Thank you once again for this lovely honor. I'm so glad Richard found it deserving of a first place win. Congrats and thank you!!!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/29/2021 10:46:00 PM
You are welcome. Thank you, Eileen, for allowing me to use the titles in this contest. Your poetry is truly inspiring!
Date: 6/29/2021 10:45:00 AM
Suzette, congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest with this beautiful tribute to Eileen, love and serenity _ Constance
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/29/2021 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Constance :))
Date: 6/29/2021 10:17:00 AM
Wonderful job crafting Eileen's titles into a winning poem Suzette. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sam :))
Date: 6/29/2021 8:49:00 AM
Wow, great job compiling so many titles!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/29/2021 10:48:00 PM
Thanks, Juliet :)) Eileen's poetry is truly inspirational.
Date: 6/29/2021 2:10:00 AM
Wonderful work. Congratulations!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/29/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thank you :))
Date: 6/29/2021 1:15:00 AM
Brilliant honour to an amazing poetess, Suzette, congratulations :)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/29/2021 1:27:00 AM
Thanks, Jo :))
Date: 6/28/2021 7:50:00 PM
Suzette, great use of the titles to have inspired you to form your verse, a great tribute to a lovely lady. Congratulations on your win in Richard's Title Wave contest. Hugs Eve
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/28/2021 9:05:00 PM
Many thanks for the compliment, Eve.
Date: 6/28/2021 1:21:00 PM
Congrats on your first place finish. I am especially fond of Eileen and really enjoyed how you stitched together her titles. Bravo and thanks for entering my contest.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/28/2021 9:04:00 PM
Thank you for the honour, Rick.
Date: 6/10/2021 6:58:00 AM
Oh dear, kind, and generous Suzette. I'm beyond honored that you used my poems for this. I had such a surreal moment going through the lines...sensing the familiarity of the words, yet taking in a whole new poem with words interconnected that shows the soul of the one who put it together! How is that even possible? You did it. I'm honored...and grateful. This will always be a treasure. Thank you!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/13/2021 6:05:00 AM
Like with any poem, the greatest challenge was to know when to stop :))
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/10/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. I'm honoured by your praise. Blessings, Su xxx

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