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Surreality Of Girlish Dreams

The girl and her smile straddle the rainbow
neon hair the fluid cascades of northern lights
seafoam cloak the ripples outgrown by the shore
she adores the breeze adorned with gems
emeralds fly from silk strings in the wind
kites made of ruby and sapphire and pearl
sit on the checkerboard in jealous grass
betting on play-dates with zephyrs
—dice cubes roll beady eyes at their folly

she chases books as they sail from trees 
fingers stretch to net helter-skelter hummingbirds
she leafs through slices of fruitcake
each nutty page a silver frame of insane;
crows croon Crosby tunes
two baby paisley-print owls drive a car
the car does a hop-scotch down bourbon street
field mouse flowers meow 
the moon jumps over the cow
and the world needs more bumblebees!
a two-masted schooner scries water for its soul
the palm of a leaf offers a diamond ring
palm trees pull up anchor and hover the sunset 

nuns ride upside-down the roller-coaster rim
dreamcatchers sticky and tricky as spiderwebs
virgins lose the reins of sugar-cookie horses
tilling confetti rain and puppet gardens 
where wild-child wombs and peacock plumes bloom

Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 4/29/2024 6:01:00 PM

What a wonderful whimsical write with lots of fun imagination imagery that kept me engaged! Good luck in the contest!
Date: 4/29/2024 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations... WOW!!! What a wonderful/creative write. Love It... Have a fun day writing away.....................
Date: 4/28/2024 12:52:00 PM

I am thrilled you entered my humble little contest, yet not surprised you would place high. I wouldn't have guessed this gem was yours as it's not really your style so much, which makes it all the more pleasant. So fanciful and dreamy. Is there anything you can't write? Nicely done Suze
Date: 4/27/2024 1:48:00 PM

Susan…..what an amazing poem of magic and enchantment …..vivid wonderful imagery! You are one gifted lady! Debx
Date: 4/27/2024 1:39:00 PM

your take on surrealism is whimsical, stunning, and filled with positive descriptions and images. Glad to read something that isn't so 'dark.' I loved this line and the visual you created: kites made of ruby and sapphire and pearl. I also liked 'tilling confetti rain and puppet gardens where wild-child wombs and peacock plumes bloom A delightful and enchanting poem. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 4/27/2024 12:03:00 PM

Dearest Susan, you crafted a magical poem centered on a girl's exploration of her environment, which is filled with artistic and surreal themes, and which praises creativity, whimsy, and the beauty of nature. Your use of colorful metaphors and detailed words transports the reader to a fantastical realm. The use of the words "neon," "northern lights," "emeralds," "ruby," and "sapphire" conjures up images of fairytale magic. When inanimate things are personified, such in "crows croon" and "palm trees pull up anchor," they become alive. "The world needs more bumblebees" and "the moon jumps over the cow" are a couple of absurd and witty lines that add to the poem's whimsical tone.
Date: 4/27/2024 11:54:00 AM

i think i may've just read the top winning poem! your writing never ceases to amaze me, and this is such an enjoyable (and trippy!) tour de force, all leading to that last line with its stellar internal rhyme :)

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