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Crisp grasses reflect ghost-white; Ethereal shafts of moonlight. Tenebrous shifting shadows; Declivity of dolerite rows. A lonely spirit roams freely — A fresh headstone in the lee. POET'S NOTE When written in English, sijo may be written in six lines, with each line containing two syllable groupings instead of four. This arrangement was exploited by the modern sijo poet, Kim Unsong, who introduced end-rhymes to the couplets.
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dolerite: It is a hard stone akin to shale. It caps many low hills, which have a base of sandstone. This lends a flat top appearance to the hills. It is a common feature in the Great Karoo area of South Africa. Diabase is the preferred name in North America. tenebrous: dark

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Date: 10/16/2021 4:55:00 AM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2021 7:58:00 PM
Suzette, loving your instinctive motives that awaken our silent lives and broadening them beyond their tumultuous present, just for a peek! Bravo my friend, Aloha!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 10/14/2021 2:45:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment, William. Your contests usually bring out the best in everyone and we aspire to new heights.
Date: 4/7/2021 8:34:00 AM
When i first read this, i thought of 2 scenarios... someone staying in a graveyard following a burial or the ghost of the newly dead wandering the graveyard... after dolerite explanation, i see someone walking that countryside setting ... very nice! Didn’t know that about English Sijo but like how you rhymed the 6 lines :)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/7/2021 11:07:00 AM
I like to leave my poetry open to interpretation. Thank you for reading and the thoughtful comments. :))

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