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When the poets fall silent Man will not only lose his voice but also the notion of Life. ~Suzette Richards
Steeped in the pain of his slain countryman, surrounded by the turmoil of real fears which lay exposed on the stone-cold tarmac, a poet dipped his ink in the spilled tears. He had a name … He had a name … A mother’s son had stood up to be counted during a time when voices were made mute, indoctrinated to a point of stupor. A poet observes and remains resolute. He had a name? He had a name. No statue would be erected in his name as he was not the first man to be slain. At the next roll call of the civil unrest, the poet’s words ease some of the naked pain. He has a name! He has a name! 13/7/2001 ___________________________________________________ Challenge accepted at Jenna Logan’s blog, An Exercise in Poetic Camaraderie, dated 13 July 2021: cathartic, courage, calming. I used a combination of the poetic devices epistrophe and epizeuxis in this elegy.

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Date: 7/22/2021 8:42:00 AM
This piece is so aesthetic. Thanks for sharing...............peace!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/22/2021 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Ricky :))
Date: 7/21/2021 5:41:00 AM
A name, a life, with heart and soul; thank God heaven knows all. This one really got me in the heart. Well done. Excellent write!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/21/2021 6:09:00 AM
Thank you for reading and your comment. I wrote from the heart regarding the current civil unrest in our country and the senseless deaths.
Date: 7/14/2021 11:32:00 PM
Suzette, Yes, though the history books may all remain the same, never in vain, he hasn't lost it.., he has a name. -Richard
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/14/2021 11:39:00 PM
True. Thanks for reading and comment, Richard.
Date: 7/14/2021 5:02:00 AM
Challenge fulfilled, Suzette. Well done.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/14/2021 5:13:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna :))

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