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Ashes - Edvard Munch

Inspired by Edvard Munch's oil on canvas painting - Ashes (1894) The fire of passion between us has burned itself out, These woods taunt us with their vibrant whispers, I am tired of listening to the leaves laughing and the trees teasing us, Oh! What have we done? My whole life has come undone! Shame squeezes my soul, Despair clings tenaciously to my being, Frustration at having fallen into this hopeless pit! Look at me and answer - Is there any redemption left? Any way to go back to life as it were before? Why has Fate tempted us thus? My heart aches for all that is lost between us... How have we succumbed to the lust of the flesh! Beyond repair, beyond rectification! My wild hair is testament to how I feel! I stare blankly at my bleak future (if there's any left!) You hide your face now! Why didn't you think of the consequences before doing the deed? Why did you lure me into your lustful trap? Ah, Me! I know I am equally to blame! What I thought was 'love' completely blinded me! Now I am left to mourn... No! now WE are left to mourn this 'blazing' passion that has burned us, this 'fire' that has consumed us, this useless heap of 'ashes' left behind!

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Date: 8/9/2023 10:30:00 AM
Wow Jo this is one of your best yet. A worthy winner and another fave from me.
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Date: 7/26/2023 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Jo. A thought-provoking interpretation of the painting. It resonated with my own life experience, such a waste lust is ... the death of potential Love. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/20/2023 10:00:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win. You have captured the frenzied hopelessness and despair in this painting! Your imagery is really stunning - "useless heap of 'ashes' left behind," "shame squeezes my soul." So poignant with a visceral kick! I was so happy to see DD's comment that she had placed it first. All the best. Blessings to you!
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Date: 7/15/2023 4:24:00 AM
Wonderful writing. So thoughtful and thought provoking - amazing thoughts. God bless you and congrats on the top winner, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/14/2023 8:33:00 PM
Great last 4 verses! Congratulations, Joanna!
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Date: 7/14/2023 7:40:00 PM
Oh, I almost threw in the towel after I read this the other day ... It is a great interpretation, Jo (both of the painting itself and the brief). Congratulations! FAVing it :)
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Date: 7/14/2023 6:28:00 PM
"I am tired of listening to the leaves laughing and the trees teasing us" - Indeed, excellent and beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2023 2:25:00 PM
Joanna, what a poignant display of regret and despair! Once it’s done, you can’t go back. Congratulations on your placement in Dilly Dally’s contest.
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Date: 7/14/2023 11:19:00 AM
This was 1st place but page glitched on saving - wonderful poem Jo x
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Date: 6/14/2023 6:30:00 AM
This exquisitely crafted poem effectively portrays a poignant image of a deteriorating love. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 6/14/2023 5:12:00 AM
This paints a desperate picture of a love that has gone bad. Something so many of us know about in our own lives, especially so from our youthful years. A fav... God bless, exceptional poetry..
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Date: 6/14/2023 12:20:00 AM
Your personification is so well conveyed. I love this emotional poem.
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