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Prime Crime - Bt

The rhyme I write is of crime that kills Life in prime, in a strife his throat slit by knife had fear writ large on him and it made me swim in sweat in dream grim. 9-Dec-2020 Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina In the the format requested in the contest O. a. O. O O. O. a. O O. b. O. a O. O. b. O O. c. O. b O. O. c. O O. d. O. c

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Date: 7/30/2021 11:19:00 PM
Hi Sathya, I am not familiar with this poetic form, but you have inspired me to try my hand at it. It looks deceptively easy, but the internal rhyme scheme that cross rhymes with the end word is very effective. FAVing it. Regards, Suzette
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:50:00 PM
Well done, Sathya. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:45:00 AM
You did this well for the Bauk-Than contest. God bless ~ Ani
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