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With crisp snow under the blades, vertiginous exulting. In the frame of conifers sundogs wink at me.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2022 2:56:00 PM

I like this one which is very creative. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my blog. Sara

Suzette Richards
Date: 9/5/2022 1:10:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. Keep well :3

Len Gasun

Date: 8/9/2022 1:19:00 AM

Delightful and inspiring dodoitsu my dear friend Zette. I love this one a lot too. For me, this type of poem is tough, so never tried it yet, but you did it wonderfully. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. Blessings love, hugs.

Suzette Richards
Date: 8/9/2022 7:35:00 AM

I deviated from the folksong format that this form requires, but it works for me as well. Thanks for your kind comments, Len.