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The End of the Line, by Suzette Richards 2023 – Image generated (Charles Dickens era)


I used an unconventional metre for this alexandrine, but the two hexaverse are equal in design: [*/**//…*/**// ]


 

The memories don’t keep, thus loneliness you’ll reap.

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Date: 11/6/2023 3:50:00 PM
Wow, a Very powerful warning in your Alexandrine. Few words, big warning! A great message for a fortune cookie I would think! Perfect!
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Date: 11/6/2023 7:07:00 PM
:)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things