Many poems are spoiled by saying too much. The reader must be allowed to participate, fill in spaces with his or her own feelings, or the experience becomes a lecture...and I have hated those since childhood
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I'm not a contest person. Don't want to make my life a competition -- wanting suggestions to come from myself, wanting little as possible for my works to be the prompted themes of others -- not a feed the hungry person, preferring to fish with my brothers and sisters. I believe each God given life is a miracle divine, a bottomless spiritual well of personal creativity, to be drawn from and explored to the fullest unhindered by writing laziness --
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"Sometimes there are No feelings, just words that talk very loud."
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A bee is as important as any living thing, hurt a bee and feel the sting.
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What we deeply feel...vividly feel, will become a reality. Dwell on the negative...and that is what you will attract, manifest. Dwell on the positive...and Light has a fighting chance.
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"I feel writers paint with our words. Painters use their paints. Both paint and words come from the artist."
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"I feel paint or words both come from the artist."
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I don't trust the mirror, till I've had a second cup of coffee. Then I squint when I shave, helps with reflection. Actually, a shave for me is just a trim, never letting the mirror truthfully in.
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Emotions are real,
but truth isn't always
how we feel.
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One can feel pain without it being revealing, no one can tell how a heart is feeling.
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p.s. keep going especially when it feels like you're losing your grip...
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What the eye can’t see the heart can feel.
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Love is where my heart feels most comfortable. When nearest you.
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"...what I feel now becomes, the kick me sticker in the back of my mind, the undone zipper of my heart"~ Fandom of the Opera
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Love is like the sky; blue and calm, making us feel soft and singingly all day long.
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Your kiss is what I miss, it felt so bliss on my lips.
Your kiss made me feel special down to my hips.
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My feet are bleeding
on this rocky path
I have chosen for myself,
so my lips are curled upwards.
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Health is wealth; making us feel happy and smiley.
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My love, my king, now you can sing; making me feel excited to hear you in my dreams.
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Love is like coffee; hot, warm, awakening.
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Like an ocean breeze, love takes us into our dreams. Riding on the waves, we feel relaxed and calm with each wave.
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Love is like a feeling; it keeps blooming and makes you feel happy all day long.
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Beware of what the eyes can see, what the flesh can feel. March 2026.
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I don't want her kiss, don't need to hold her hand, nor feel her arms around me. All of that has evolved into her most constant presence in my heart.
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I am not the slave of feelings, nor the instrument of pain: Divinity plays all my stops and strings with melodies heard everywhere I go.
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If you want to call yourself a Poet, don’t let anyone speak on your behalf - speak in own poetic voice. Don’t let anybody else speak about your abuse, expériences or healing. You not only give away your poetic license, you give away your power to feel completely. Any trauma will be diluted in this way & your cycles of repressed emotion will remain repressed in fragments. Worse, it will be coloured by someone else calling themselves collaborators. This is a sophisticated form of power usurping.
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Don’t cover up any of your scars, make people uncomfortable, and own your life experiences; it feels amazing to take back your life.
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"The human heart is needed to write for it has feelings."
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I’m so excited to come back to sharing my writing and excited for feedback and criticism to not get better. Poetry has always been so important to me. Please follow or take a look at my old published work on her under Briyanna Lawes from 2010 ( my old account I follow) I was grateful and overjoyed by the support on here and hope to bring that back into my life! Can’t wait to share my work to you all emotionally brliantpeo with you art of poetry!
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Love is the breath that makes us feel home.
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