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5/6/2010 11:43:56 AM
Beach Combing Fenced off with a comb
New age sand crab’s beachfront home
Cup of styrofoam

A Haiku By Robb A. Kopp
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edited by masterartisan on 5/6/2010
edited by masterartisan on 5/10/2010
5/10/2010 7:01:01 AM
A Crystalline titled:Scrambled Scrambled
Family breakfast I love the most
Cheese scrambled eggs and jellied toast

By Robb A. Kopp
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5/10/2010 8:14:59 AM
Beach Combing Charles wrote:
The middle line is short one syllable. Count should be 7. Also Haiku is NOT supposed to rhyme. I understand some of the new age writers are not paying attention to syllable count as once were but I have not read anything about moving toward rhyme. lol Charles

Thanks....Something looked wrong
However Haikus are evolving as are the languages that write it.
edited by masterartisan on 5/10/2010
edited by masterartisan on 5/10/2010
5/12/2010 8:24:57 AM
Poll Question: Featured Poetic Forms... Yes, that sounds cool
edited by masterartisan on 5/12/2010
5/13/2010 9:44:44 AM
OVERSOUL MISUNDERSTOOD Ignore them all....just keep putting out those master works...So far I love them.
5/13/2010 9:47:56 AM
Pet Peeve Even off the forum critiques are welcome though I may ignore them
5/13/2010 9:48:39 AM
Pet Peeve oops furgot some commas
6/30/2010 10:06:58 PM
New member Lisa, I'm a visual artist by nature. So, this comes from that world: It is rumored That Vincent Van Gogh only officially sold one painting in his entire life…yet now very few museums allow his paintings to be viewed in the public air.
I don’t place much store on the rating systems on the soup…If you like your work that’s great.
If it evokes an emotion from within your readers it’s art.
Welcome to PS
6/30/2010 11:04:41 PM
What a waste I don't usually frequent the "IDK" stack.However, you free verse titled to my wife is beautiful.
9/24/2010 5:58:47 AM
Sensual, erotic poems are "sexually explicit?" Just write whats in your heart.Like my friend and poet Montey Reynolds used to say:"what the gonna do, slap your hand and tell you no,no?"
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