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masterartisan
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5/6/2010 11:43:56 AM
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Beach Combing
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Fenced off with a comb New age sand crab’s beachfront home Cup of styrofoam
A Haiku By Robb A. Kopp All Rights Reserved © MMX edited by masterartisan on 5/6/2010 edited by masterartisan on 5/10/2010
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5/10/2010 7:01:01 AM
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A Crystalline titled:Scrambled
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Scrambled Family breakfast I love the most Cheese scrambled eggs and jellied toast
By Robb A. Kopp All Rights Reserved © MMX
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5/10/2010 8:14:59 AM
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Beach Combing
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Charles wrote:
The middle line is short one syllable. Count should be 7. Also Haiku is NOT supposed to rhyme. I understand some of the new age writers are not paying attention to syllable count as once were but I have not read anything about moving toward rhyme. lol Charles
Thanks....Something looked wrong However Haikus are evolving as are the languages that write it. edited by masterartisan on 5/10/2010 edited by masterartisan on 5/10/2010
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5/12/2010 8:24:57 AM
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Poll Question: Featured Poetic Forms...
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Yes, that sounds cool edited by masterartisan on 5/12/2010
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5/13/2010 9:44:44 AM
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OVERSOUL MISUNDERSTOOD
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Ignore them all....just keep putting out those master works...So far I love them.
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5/13/2010 9:47:56 AM
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Pet Peeve
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Even off the forum critiques are welcome though I may ignore them
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5/13/2010 9:48:39 AM
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Pet Peeve
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oops furgot some commas
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6/30/2010 10:06:58 PM
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New member
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Lisa, I'm a visual artist by nature. So, this comes from that world: It is rumored That Vincent Van Gogh only officially sold one painting in his entire life…yet now very few museums allow his paintings to be viewed in the public air. I don’t place much store on the rating systems on the soup…If you like your work that’s great. If it evokes an emotion from within your readers it’s art. Welcome to PS
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6/30/2010 11:04:41 PM
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What a waste
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I don't usually frequent the "IDK" stack.However, you free verse titled to my wife is beautiful.
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9/24/2010 5:58:47 AM
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Sensual, erotic poems are "sexually explicit?"
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Just write whats in your heart.Like my friend and poet Montey Reynolds used to say:"what the gonna do, slap your hand and tell you no,no?"
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