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Mission statement: I don’t use AI to generate or even tweak my poetry, because I am a better poet than it.

Poetry has been my passion since my retirement from an accountancy based career a dozen years ago. I currently live in South Africa and this rainbow nation has inspired many of my poems. I also have British nationality and embrace their grammar and spelling, but I read widely and am not fazed by strict grammar rules: A pavement/sidewalk; glasses/eyeglasses; judgement/judgment, et cetera; they are one and the same to me when I read poetry. To date, I have self-published a number of books, including the poetry anthology by international poets, © Time, 2014 ISBN 978-0-620-60578-6, and have been cited in many international publications, both poetry journals, as well as in scholarly handbooks. Some of my short stories have been published in international electronic publications, and one of my novellas had been short-listed for an Afrikaans SA publication.

I serve on the Board of Advisers, of Taleemi Baithak.

I have a number of poetic forms to my credit, notably, Suzette Prime (listed here on PoetrySoup), as well as Suzette sonnet.

My most recent books which include examples of my poetry as well as notes regarding poetry - available directly from me:

  1. © The Eutony of Words, 2018 ISBN 978-0-6399382-0-2
  2. © Docendo discimus, 2021 (Revised 2023) ISBN 978-0-620-95432-7
  3. © Flight of Thoughts, 2023 ISBN 978-0-6397-8880-7
  4. © Downtown - Poetic Devices, 2023 ISBN 978-0-7961-1968-1
  5.  © Rocking Poetry, 2033 ISBN 978-0-7961-2824-9
  6. NEW: moonwake - Suzette Prime poetry, ISBN 978-1-0370-1836-7(PDF). It is a collection of 61 Suzette Prime poetry spanning from 2012 (when I designed the poetic form), up till now.

Memento on the Moon

Blog Posted:4/9/2025 12:26:00 AM

See my latest premiere contest where I am inviting poets to write a Notional Ekphrasis poem titled Memento on the Moon. See the contest page for full details.

How to Write a Notional Ekphrasis

  1. In your poem, imagine some form of art as if it were real and bring it to life by painting pictures with your words. Don’t explain—i.e. show, don’t tell.
  2. Use your imagination to show how this imagined artwork expresses your dreams, thoughts, or feelings. For example, my philosophical statement in the concluding couplet of my poem, Memento on the Moon.*

Art Defined

There are certain mediums that are definitively considered art—paintings, sculptures, drawings, and sketches. Then there are other creations that can also fall under the art category, such as films, plays, novels, interior design, music, and architecture.

Muzika, by Heris Gendvilaa

Let the Light In

‘Letting the light in between the lines’ is a poetic metaphor often used to describe the art of creating space for interpretation, emotion, and subtlety within a poem. It means allowing the reader to discover their own meanings, impressions, and connections in the gaps between explicit statements. Instead of spelling everything out, the poet might use suggestive language, imagery, or rhythm to evoke feelings and ideas indirectly.

This technique aligns closely with the idea of ‘show, don't tell’. By leaving some things unsaid, the poem gains resonance, inviting the reader to engage actively and fill in those spaces with their imagination. It's also tied to concepts like translucence and elegance in poetry, where what's unspoken can be as powerful as what's written.

LEFT UNSPOKEN

between the words, silence spills, refracts

while a shadow trace the void you left

roots-entwined earth – too sacred to disturb

as arum lilies recall your grace

© Suzette Richards 8/4/2025

 

Recommended Literary Devices

Literary/poetic devices like metaphor, symbolism, and imagery, are ideally suited for this challenge. (See the Dictionary here at PoetySoup if you are unfamiliar with the terminology used.)

Juxtaposing* elements enriches a poem, eg my poem † reflects an acute awareness of humanity’s duality—its capacity for creation and destruction.

The Inspiration behind this Contest

On 20 April 1972, Apollo 16 astronaut Charles Duke took his first steps on the Moon. He left behind a plastic encased photo of his family on the moon—see a copy of the original photo above. The back of the photo was thumb printed and signed by the family, and included the message: ‘This is the family of astronaut Charlie Duke from planet Earth who landed on the moon on April 20, 1972.’‡

Q & A

Please use this blog to pose questions relevant to the contest, and not on my poem(s). Thank you.

Happy Quills!

Su

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*Glossary of Some Common Poetic Devices | PoetrySoup.com

Memento on the Moon (poetrysoup.com)

There's a Hidden Message Written on The Back of This Family Portrait Left on The Moon : ScienceAlert



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Date: 4/9/2025 6:18:00 AM
Who would imagine, garbage on the moon , this gave me chills, and is stirring ideas! Thank you for this most fascinating blog, Suzette. Q: the only image required is our imagination, a painting not necessary to post?
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/9/2025 10:43:00 AM
That's what I thought, you can't see it, like you I can't resist :D your AI creation fabulous!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/9/2025 9:52:00 AM
The art must be a figment of your imagination to qualify being a Notional Emphasis. I just couldn't resist creating the "painting" to go with my poem (my trusty AI image generator as indicated top right on my poem). I can't see the artwork in the contest entries and it is the ideal time to "paint with words".
Date: 4/9/2025 4:41:00 AM
Irrelevant to your contest, but I don't think anything should have been left on the moon. "Too sacred to disturb," a line in 'Left Unspoken.'
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/9/2025 6:23:00 AM
Kinda ruins her allure, but you’re right~ poets still see her as a symbol of romance.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/9/2025 5:51:00 AM
Not relevant to the contest, but us humans have left 200 tons of garbage on the moon to date. Looking at to the moon is not the romantic passtime it used to be. Looking at the stars is spoiled by Starlink ... We as Poets can fortunately live in our imagination :)

My Past Blog Posts

 
Free Verse – How Free is It?
Date Posted: 4/26/2025 11:37:00 PM
Gender Influences on Contests
Date Posted: 4/20/2025 2:54:00 AM
Memento on the Moon
Date Posted: 4/9/2025 12:26:00 AM
Tariffs on Penguins Limerick
Date Posted: 4/4/2025 7:02:00 AM
Light or Shadows
Date Posted: 3/25/2025 1:55:00 PM
Blood Moon Eclipse - Light or Shadows
Date Posted: 3/11/2025 12:46:00 AM
A Timely Intervention
Date Posted: 3/2/2025 12:42:00 PM
On a more serious note
Date Posted: 2/23/2025 5:40:00 AM
Weekend Wacky Limericks
Date Posted: 2/22/2025 3:34:00 AM
Saints and poets maybe – The Bride Trilogy challenge
Date Posted: 2/14/2025 12:37:00 AM
Saints and poets maybe
Date Posted: 2/9/2025 4:24:00 AM
According to the poem’s meter is stressed
Date Posted: 1/25/2025 9:53:00 PM
Poison - an analogy
Date Posted: 1/12/2025 11:08:00 PM
Be Happy and Merry
Date Posted: 12/21/2024 9:45:00 PM
Which is worse - AI or Plagiarism?
Date Posted: 12/8/2024 11:13:00 PM
Bring in the Clowns
Date Posted: 12/2/2024 12:04:00 AM
Cyber bullying
Date Posted: 11/29/2024 1:22:00 AM
Future Trends in Poetry
Date Posted: 11/26/2024 11:15:00 PM
Jack and Jill
Date Posted: 11/22/2024 9:52:00 PM
Counterintuitive versus Juxtaposition
Date Posted: 11/8/2024 10:11:00 PM
Sunday Simile Smile
Date Posted: 11/3/2024 1:39:00 AM
The Philosophy of Meliorism
Date Posted: 11/2/2024 12:26:00 AM
Illuminating Poetry
Date Posted: 10/26/2024 1:35:00 AM
When Words are not Enough
Date Posted: 10/19/2024 10:22:00 PM
Gratitude blog
Date Posted: 10/17/2024 4:20:00 AM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
4/27/2025 Cultural Mores Mirror Free verseintrospection,
4/26/2025 An Ode to Daisies Odeflower,introspection,
4/23/2025 Oenomel Free verseanalogy,childhood,mother,
4/17/2025 Left Unspoken Quatrainmom,
3/24/2025 Memento on the Moon Alexandrineanalogy,introspection,
3/11/2025 In a Pickle Free verseanalogy,satire,
3/10/2025 Light and Shadows Suzette Primeanalogy,philosophy,
3/9/2025 Thinking about Aladdin Sane Free verseanalogy,
3/6/2025 raven Haikunature,symbolism,
3/1/2025 Kiss the Ring Free versesatire,
2/26/2025 Giving a Cat a Pill Limerickcat,humorous,
2/22/2025 A Fly on the Wall Free versepolitical,satire,
2/21/2025 A Vine in Winter Free verseanalogy,winter,
2/21/2025 broken blood moon Haikuanalogy,moon,nature,
2/16/2025 Cyril Ramaphosa Clerihewafrica,humorous,
2/16/2025 The Soldier’s Covenant Prose Poetrybaby,war,
2/13/2025 Undergrowth with Two Figures - Van Gogh Free verseanalogy,
2/11/2025 A Blues Sonnet for Jan Sonnetafrica,conflict,endurance
2/7/2025 The Bride's Dreams Prose Poetrydream,love,
2/7/2025 The Bride Prose Poetryfeelings,flower,sunset,
1/22/2025 The Reluctant Bride Prose Poetrylost love,
1/10/2025 humanity Suzette Primephilosophy,science,
12/22/2024 A Woman's Longing Otherlonging,love,water,woman,
12/19/2024 Where Tides once Gossiped Sonnetemotions,imagery,inspirat
12/14/2024 Dandelion Suns to Moons Sonnetflower,life,metaphor,natu
12/2/2024 Aging rocks Crystallineage,
11/27/2024 Divine Madness Sonnetreligion,
11/26/2024 fierce sun Tankaintrospection,nature,summ
11/15/2024 The Event Horizon Verselife,memory,
11/11/2024 Less is More Crystallinephilosophy,
11/9/2024 Jolted by Twilight Suzette Primenature,
11/5/2024 as long as - Monokunature,
10/31/2024 Burning Love Letters Free verselost love,nostalgia,
10/23/2024 yellow light Haikuanimal,spring,
10/21/2024 twilight silence Tankanature,
10/20/2024 Swans Pleiadesbird,
10/18/2024 wAlls In dAlI Ekphrasisart,philosophy,
10/15/2024 Here we go again Limericksatire,
10/15/2024 Haunted Cemetery Rhymehalloween,humorous,
10/12/2024 My Truths Verseliterature,myth,relations
10/10/2024 BALLAD OF ELEANOR RIGBY Balladmusic,
10/8/2024 Life is a garden Suzette Primeanalogy,birth,death,flowe
10/2/2024 Avarice Enclosed Rhymeanalogy,
9/28/2024 Stranded in Peace Quatrainnature,
9/26/2024 Insidious AI Concreteintegrity,poems,poetry,po
9/13/2024 Pie-in-the-sky Versesatire,
9/3/2024 The Scent of Words in the Air Shapeinspiration,poetry,
8/15/2024 The Co-dependent Pantoumaddiction,
7/25/2024 a loveliness Senryulanguage,nature,
7/10/2024 Mother said --- Versehumorous,mother,
7/8/2024 The Earth from a Distance Sonnetnostalgia,
7/5/2024 Lingering Dusk Free verseallegory,analogy,flower,n
6/14/2024 A Child of Light Otherdaughter,
6/5/2024 Cave canem Suzette Primefear,
5/31/2024 Layers of Life Enclosed Rhymelife,remember,
5/13/2024 Love Lauded in Song Free verseromance,
5/13/2024 The Truth in Time Sonnethorse,mythology,
5/9/2024 Silence of the Sea Otherpeace,
5/6/2024 Love Sonnetlove,pain,
4/6/2024 From Purgatory to Paradise Haibunafrica,nature,
2/23/2024 The Last Leaf Tankaautumn,feelings,friend,im
2/20/2024 To everything there is a season Otherlife,nature,seasons,
1/29/2024 On a Thesaurus Diet Suzette Primeanalogy,nature,philosophy
1/23/2024 The Wind Teased Sijoloss,
11/3/2023 Moonwake Suzette Primemetaphor,nature,philosoph
10/16/2023 The Rocking Chair of Memories Suzette Primeanalogy,memory,metaphor,p
9/10/2023 The Dilatory Thought Verseintrospection,
8/25/2023 Through the Keyhole Iambic Pentameterdream,fantasy,
8/8/2023 View From Basement Flat Dramatic Verserelationship,
7/27/2023 When Doves Cry Terzanelleeulogy,
7/26/2023 You Shall Reap What You Sow Ekphrasisart,
7/8/2023 Graceful Lily Sonnetpoetess,
6/21/2023 Thalassophile Alexandrinesea,
6/14/2023 Recombobulating Chaos Free versenature,
5/25/2023 The Seeds of Time Quatrainanalogy,introspection,met
5/24/2023 The Moon By Day Sonnetromance,
5/8/2023 Discord and Peace Ekphrasisanalogy,anger,angst,child
4/22/2023 If a Tree Should Fall Suzette Primedream,philosophy,
4/19/2023 Like Burnt-Out Logs Heroic Coupletemotions,simile,
4/18/2023 An Attenuated Tree Branch Personificationimagery,metaphor,nature,
4/12/2023 Verismo Suzette Primeanalogy,introspection,met
4/6/2023 A Tree Tankaanalogy,image,nature,
4/5/2023 The Welkin - and - the Influences Juejuanalogy,nature,
3/19/2023 Alone Suzette Primeanalogy,inspiration,metap
3/9/2023 A Waste of Space Proseculture,introspection,lit
2/15/2023 Passion - Metaphorical Realism Suzette Primeart,extended metaphor,pas
1/30/2023 Dare To Take a Stand - Zettie's Sonnet Sonnetmetaphor,
1/30/2023 I Dance With Shadows - Yclept Sonnet Sonnetanalogy,city,dream,metaph
1/29/2023 An Evanescent Life - Xaxa Sonnet Sonnetdeath,extended metaphor,l
1/25/2023 Dusk At the Beach Sonnetbeach,friendship,
12/9/2022 By the Silvery Light of a Moon Sonnetmythology,romance,
11/12/2022 Either Way Sonnetanalogy,nature,parody,sat
10/6/2022 Redamancy Lament Suzette Primeafrica,analogy,grief,lost
9/23/2022 You Are the Music Sonnetlove,poetry,
9/9/2022 Thank You Ma'Am - In Memoriam Queen Elizabeth Ii Sonnetdeath,funeral,grief,in me
7/20/2022 Ignorance Is Bliss Quatrainwisdom,
7/16/2022 The Cup of Life Rubaiyatdeath,life,philosophy,
6/12/2022 The Original Mistake Villanellephilosophy,
3/4/2022 Blinded By War Kimoconflict,war,
1/15/2022 The Perfidy of Memoirs Free verseinspiration,memory,

My Photos


Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
I To Poisonous Honey Free verselife,
O April Free verseappreciation,april,beauty
The Usurper King Dramatic Monologueidentity,satire,
Summer Peak Haikusummer,
O Charming Rhymehumorous,valentines day,
Prime Crime - Bt Than-Baukdream,horror,
The Grey Suzette Primeintrospection,
Unsure the Shore Sonnet8th grade,beach,bereaveme
Earth Prayer Verseprayer,
Hall Pass Sonnetlove,
Fiery Events Haikufire,love,
Best In Show Dodoitsuwinter,
The Wait Rhymebody,devotion,truth,
Love In Love With Love Sonnetlove,spiritual,
When the Chemistry Is Gone the History Does Not Matter Free verselove,
Lit By Love Quatrainloss,love,strength,
Telegraph Pole Potd Imagismimagery,
Floating Shards of Dream Free verseanalogy,lost love,pain,
Blemished - a Coin Poem Otherpain,
Courtney Mae Or Courting May Sonnetmay,
Rebirth Me Prose Poetryhope,mental illness,
Pulchritudinous Rhymeart,
Poet's Honeymoon Collaboration With Joanna Daniels Rhymefantasy,imagination,
Ashes - Edvard Munch Ekphrasisart,inspiration,
I Died Sonnetallusion,anger,angst,
Bantu Free versepoetry,
Salvations Rests Behind True Faith's Gold Door Sonnetappreciation,art,bible,ch
A woman called house Free versehome,
The Forming of Thoughts Rhymeangst,
The Cold Embrace of Death Ekphrasisart,
Debacle Rhymeconfusion,evil,history,
Pearl-Prayer Sijoemotions,heaven,life,long
apologies for the truth Suzette Primephilosophy,senses,
Vanishing Point Free verseangst,anxiety,heartbreak,
Love Hurts - Bound by Love, Broken by Fate - POTD Balladfate,lost love,rainbow,ro
The Narcissist Who Saved Himself - Cynthia Howard - collaboration with Ink Empress Ekphrasisart,
thoughts drift to sirens Free verseart,
To Whom Does This Come Haibunanalogy,deep,i am,
Amberina Ballerina, Whatever Verseintrospection,
Les peupliers bleus - Andre Brasilier Ekphrasisart,
No Longer Quatrainbetrayal,recovery from,
Roots and Dandelion Dreams: A Mother's Heart Ekphrasisheart,love,mothers day,na
Clover's In the Bottom Right-Hand Corner Doing the Best with What Circumstance Brought Her Ekphrasisart,extended metaphor,
Misty Blues Quatrainlost love,solitude,
Domenico Gatti - Purita Ekphrasisart,
Not for Contest - Impact of AI on poets Rhymeart,
Humanity Rhymehumanity,perspective,scie
Sea Shore Night Sijonature,sea,
Undergrowth with Two Figures Ekphrasisart,love,nature,paradise,
Reason I Believe Free versehow i feel,
Yesterday's Wishes Free verseanxiety,

Fav Poets

PoetCountry 
James Marshall Goff United States Flag United States Read
Richard Lamoureux Canada Flag Canada Read
Susan Woodrow Fiji Flag Fiji Read
Robert Lindley United States Flag United States Read
Brian Strand United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Susan Ashley United States Flag United States Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Eileen Manassian _Not Listed Flag _Not Listed Read
Christuraj Alex India Flag India Read
Quoth Theraven United States Flag United States Read
Runa Pradhan India Flag India Read
Christopher Flaherty United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Sara Kendrick United States Flag United States Read
Hilo Poet United States Flag United States Read
Judy Reeves United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Mark Frank South Africa Flag South Africa Read
Gordon Mcconnell United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Joanna Daniel India Flag India Read
Di11y Da11y United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Frederic Parker United States Flag United States Read
Mark Massey United States Flag United States Read
Timothy Ray United States Flag United States Read
Charlotte Puddifoot United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Christina Bowring United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Arlo Parker United States Flag United States Read
A Yorkshire Poet United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Thomas Lee Rhymes United States Flag United States Read
Sam Kauffman United States Flag United States Read
Linda Alice Fowler United States Flag United States Read
David Crandall United States Flag United States Read
Maria Williams Australia Flag Australia Read

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