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Sometimes you wake up with a poem in your head... It started as a short one..  Hope you enjoy my Sunday musing..

tired from crawling no desire to walk - bless me with wings to fly in the midst of melancholic melodies of rain through monotonous tones of charcoal clouds take me to a place where eagles soar free me from those who preach in shrouds ascending above snow drenched Himalayan cliffs far from cultural vultures preying on my mind take me to a place where eagles soar before sleeping volcanoes, veiling lava unwind through soundless valleys of wasted emotions where grave yards have become soulless meadows take me to a place where eagles soar to tune in with music - bubbling springs compose away from seagulls too far from the shore gliding through Iguazu waterfalls of regret take me to a place where eagles soar before my feathers become too wet flowing from the Nile towards the Black sea surfing over ripples of wanderlust waves take me to a place where eagles soar carrying me to a province our heart craves against storms where adversity engraves wounds towards the light where rays of sunshine reflect in golden hues take me to a place where eagles soar where poetry meets the alchemy of its muse among coral lanterns floating in lilac skies beyond the serene silence of the moon take me to a place where eagles soar before a skyline of stars are gone too soon towards the aroma of my beloved's garden where my enlightened dahlia still delight take me to a place where eagles soar where angels recite poetic rhymes to kiss you goodnight resting upon ancient trees full of verdant leaves recalling childhood dreams and that forgotten playground take me to a place where eagles soar creating a nest in an abode we can call our hometown and if I could fly.... would you soar with me?

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Date: 7/11/2025 8:51:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 7/11/2025 7:32:00 AM
A very heartfelt plea this is woven in such a rhythmic manner, brilliant rhymes and refrain stands out too, youv expressed the need to soar and be free from the chains of mundane and ignorance that we all see around us, which can be exhausting and draining! I love the subtle use of alliterations as well as your imagery and the lyrical nature of your soulful poem. Innocent dreams and restful spaces before sleeping volcanoes, veiling lava unwind! Your use of metaphors and thought provoking and easy to resonate with for readers, as so many live wishing and praying to be in a place away from the reality that isnt so easy. I see why this received all the accolades along with potd! Congratulations! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light
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Date: 7/9/2025 12:03:00 PM
Hello SO, there’s something so gentle and yearning in your words, like you’re reaching out for freedom, for beauty, for a place where your spirit can finally rest and soar. I love how you take us on a journey over Himalayan cliffs, through valleys of emotion, past waterfalls of regret and rivers of wanderlust. I almost forgot I was reading and not flying alongside you. Keep reaching for the light, for music, for love, for the alchemy of poetry itself. Congrats on POTD. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/9/2025 2:51:00 AM
Just beautiful S.O….Congrats on POTD! Debx
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Date: 7/8/2025 11:38:00 PM
Lovely. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 7/8/2025 9:13:00 PM
belated cheers on your potd win and birthday celeb, dear S...you grace me with this brilliant work bitingly honest and absorbing! ohh the last line just drips of vulnerabilty after having expressed that sense of soaring mightily, alone. .i miss your aura...stay well!
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Date: 7/8/2025 3:36:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your fine POTD, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! You certainly deserve it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/8/2025 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I'm stricken with admiration for this excellent poem.
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Date: 7/8/2025 1:59:00 PM
SO, so beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/8/2025 12:45:00 PM
Dear Silent One, to answer your question, yes I'll soar with you. There's something magical about the clouds, being in the wind. Your thoughts take me there my sweet friend. I love this thought- ' take me to a place where eagles soar, before my feathers become too wet. ' Exactly ! I'm one that enjoys drifting instead of drowning. Spread your wings and fly, and just enjoy the view. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/8/2025 12:06:00 PM
Silent One, such beauty resides within not only your lines of grace and grandeur but in yourprofound plea for love! Congratulations on your POTD honors !!!
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Date: 7/8/2025 11:09:00 AM
Greetings SO! The beauty of life soars through every image, every color, as you spread your wings to "soar" through every part of life's journey - the ups and the challenges. How blessed are we to have your words as a guide to spreading our wings and flying above "storms," "waterfalls of regret (great image)" and "grave yards...soulless meadows" to land in "forgotten playgrounds" where children dream! Congratulations on your POTD! We miss you when you are away. Blessings, my friend.
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Date: 7/8/2025 11:08:00 AM
Lovely poem- so worthy of POTD! Just wanted to congratulate you! :)
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Date: 7/8/2025 9:15:00 AM
I adore the innocence of last line, will she fly with you? Soaring together, such romance is worthy of the wait. Bittersweet where parting with the world shall illuminate sorrow. A refrain of strident chant and many cinamatic pleasures such as "among coral lanterns floating in lilac skies beyond the serene silence of the moon" beautiful images. Congratulations Silent One on the honor! I'm compelled to print this one out ~
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Date: 7/8/2025 8:56:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your wonderful POTD win. What a creative/wonderful write. Love the ending. I would love to soar like an eagle to far off places and "among coral lanterns floating in lilac skies." Have a blessed day with your wonderful win..................
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Date: 7/8/2025 7:50:00 AM
Another masterpiece! Congratulations on your potd honor!
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Date: 7/8/2025 5:23:00 AM
Dear S1, so glad this beautiful poem got POTD. A big Congratulations ..Hugs
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Date: 7/8/2025 4:37:00 AM
- I was with you all the way, S.O. ... congratulations on your p.o.d.t. ... beautifully written as always :) - hugs
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Date: 7/8/2025 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, dear friend ! I'm so happy that you got POTD.... enjoy your special day :)
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Date: 7/8/2025 12:33:00 AM
Back with congratulations Silent One, on you having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 7/7/2025 5:31:00 PM
Dear S O, your poem is wonderfully written! Your longing for freedom and your writing style is soaring... it's masterfully written. The poetic beauty of this poem is something very unique. Best, Anne
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Date: 7/7/2025 10:12:00 AM
Very nice read! Wonderful poem! A favorite.
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Date: 7/7/2025 4:35:00 AM
Dear Silent One, your poems never go untouched. They create emotions of sorrow and grieving. May your longing for freedom and an escape from the world of melancholic melodies and charcoal clouds to a world 'of light where rays of sunshine reflect in golden hues' be granted to you. The refrain - 'take me to a place where eagles soar' sounds like an ardent plea and a heartfelt prayer. Your Sunday musing is not just a simple musing but a true versification of great poetic beauty.
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Date: 7/6/2025 11:26:00 PM
Dear S1,this poem of yours really hit me. It’s one of those poems that wraps around you and pulls you into its rhythm—melancholic, hopeful, and deeply reflective. The imagery is stunning, but it’s that quiet yearning for freedom, for meaning, that lingers most. “Take me to a place where eagles soar” felt like both a prayer and a promise. Truly beautiful work, and a fave of course...Hugs
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Date: 7/6/2025 8:05:00 PM
I’m certain the affirmation refrains will manifest your heart’s calling, Silent One. Enjoyed your Sunday musings, God bless
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