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Love with your head

Many fall in love without
presence of mind.
They repeat the mod cliché
    that love is blind...

But sensible matchmaking
chooses more feasible soulmates.
Kids need adult  supervision
in the matter of dates.

Love is a very special emotion
that causes much commotion
in the heart and soul,
where it has a big role.
Love's possible anytime, anywhere,
and many are caught by it unawares.

But don't let love be just a stupor
from which you wake up in horror.
Don't let love be a one night stand drink
from which you get a hangover.
Committed Love shouldn't be a fad or spell
from which you just get over...

When young minds play their own cupid
To many that has brought heartache and sorrow.
Underage kids dating is even more stupid
They usually regret on the morrow.

Reason doesn't work in a fit of passion.
So its best to love with
your mind and consultation.
Having love affairs without deliberation
is harmful fashion.
Head over heels
without discussion,
with well-wishers
may cause concussion
headache
of so-called lovers...

Use your head before your heart
Not every spark 
    should start a fire....

Copyright © S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri | Year Posted 2026

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Date: 9/22/2026 9:06:00 AM

oh, love is a mystery all its own, some do think with their head and yes some think with their heart. Unfortunately, I think with the heart and also feel a lot of heartache!
Date: 9/17/2026 10:27:00 AM

Zaynab, a very interesting poem indeed. I was just talking to a neighbor about his daughter having a friend who was being incredibly possessive and jealous. Certainly, before one starts dating, we hope those involved feel good about themselves and are not looking to latch onto someone else's happiness and sense of worth. Hopefully and as you say, kids can discuss key aspects of their dating lives with their parents or at least think things over with a degree of sense. Unfortunately, we have an epidemic of low self esteem and a potential for a lot of bad in relationships.
Date: 9/17/2026 8:24:00 AM

Belated congratulations S.Zaynab on your well deserved POTD honour. Greetings from 🇮🇹. Tom
Date: 9/12/2026 11:30:00 AM

Zaynab, congratulation on receiving the POTD honor with your poem ⭐
Date: 9/11/2026 10:28:00 AM

Hello S. Zaynab, i agree with every word you put into this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/10/2026 4:07:00 PM

Sparks are fine, flying, fireworks, weak knees, however a lifetime without true love is a disaster so one must think with their head. Great!
Date: 9/10/2026 1:02:00 PM

I was off the computer... Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Love with your head" write. Oh yes, love is blind with very special emotions Some how I think the heart will always rule. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Date: 9/10/2026 9:54:00 AM

I’m a little late to the party. Congratulations on getting POTD Zaynab. Reading through this I can sense and detect a lyrical rapping quality to your words. Cheers - Gary
Date: 9/9/2026 7:38:00 PM

' Use your head before your heart. ' Wise words my dear friend. Emotions linger and create many thoughts, while true thoughts linger and makes complete sense. Congratulations S.Zaynab, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 9/9/2026 6:00:00 PM

congrats on POTD, Zaynab :)
Date: 9/9/2026 2:23:00 PM

Good write ✍️ congratulations on your well deserved POTD 👏 great advice
Date: 9/9/2026 12:28:00 PM

- A lot of truth in your lines... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
Date: 9/9/2026 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your beautifully executed poem being featured as POTD, Zaynab. Good advice and an interesting read,
Date: 9/9/2026 7:25:00 AM

Back with 🎊 Congratulations Zaynab! A well deserved potd on how one navigates complex first loves & matchmaking missions in hopes that the young couple retain a voice in choosing their spouse~ love is blind💘
Date: 9/9/2026 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD!! "Use your head,before your heart"...It's so true Mind takes the right decision than heart... Well done👍.
Date: 9/9/2026 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your interesting well written POTD Zaynab! Debx
Date: 9/9/2026 5:54:00 AM

Hi Zaynab, back to your poem with Congratulations on your POTD
Date: 9/9/2026 5:53:00 AM

A thoughtful, cautionary poem that blends free verse with firm rhyme to reinforce its central message: love needs both feeling and clear-minded judgement. The recurring imagery of blindness, stupor, hangovers, sparks, and fire gives the piece a memorable progression, while the shifting line lengths and indented phrases add visual emphasis to the emotional “head over heels” idea. The ending lands especially well—concise, proverbial, and resonant. Congratulations on POTD
Date: 9/9/2026 5:25:00 AM

S.Zaynab, nicely penned and good advice. Congratulations on POTD. Welcome to PS.
Date: 9/9/2026 4:43:00 AM

Hello S.Zaynab, Congrats on POTD; the advice is brutally practical and funny in how bluntly it lays out the dangers of letting romance run wild. Comparing an impulsive romance to a hangover or a concussion is such a funny way to look at bad dating decisions, and yes, kids definitely need supervision before playing matchmaker; it's just peak straight-talking wisdom. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 9/9/2026 2:19:00 AM

Enjoyed the read S.Zaynab. Some fall in love by chance, hopefully leading to a lifetime of romance. Congratulations on having received the honour for Poem of the Day… Beryl
Date: 9/9/2026 1:30:00 AM

Too much head these days, with prenup agreements being commonplace. A contemplative poem, Zaynab, lust is not love and we do have a mind too, so a balance is probably best. Warmest congratulations on POTD.
Date: 9/9/2026 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your smart potd!
Date: 9/9/2026 12:13:00 AM

I mentioned first line in poem l wrote called love also on here if yoi can find like the rhymin verse very true love is blind but takes on many a form xx
Date: 9/8/2026 11:34:00 PM

"Reason doesn't work in a fit of passion. So its best to love with your mind and consultation." You are absolutely right dear Zaynab. Many fall in love in a fit of passion, never considering if the person chosen is compatible or suitable for a long standing relationship. Such brash acts of falling in love on the basis of external beauty or some other considerations may not end up well. So love should be allowed to conquer one with the concurrence of the head and heart. Well written.
Date: 9/8/2026 4:44:00 PM

I believe in cosmic meetings, especially of twin flames, etc. If this, both will love and not cross any line that will devastate. I do respect matchmaking, if they want one another. I'm American, lol Love, P
Date: 9/8/2026 2:56:00 PM

S.Zaynab, such an immense respect for matchmaking & the matchmaker of course. We must think with our heads y e s., as well matchmaking may become a concern...not all at peace..🕊️... Wise words & a good message, but there is more, I'm sure.... hoping you are well. Liking & faving! 🌹
Date: 9/8/2026 2:56:00 PM

Zaynab, wonderfully penned, I fell in love fast when I was younger, now, is a different story as your poem instructs us to be careful with our heart ❤️
Date: 9/8/2026 1:53:00 PM

Hmm. Nice philosophizing on courtship! I partly agree here. I started dating at 14. Nothing can stop a boy crazy girl from that! But I was raised with good morals, and kissing was fun practice for other things on my horizon. So I think it depends on one's culture, morality standards and maturity level. I have always been strong at not letting my heart rule over my head. I am glad I got to know many types of guys by dating them before I married. Too bad people today take things so lightly.

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