Whirls Poems | Examples


Premium MemberPirouettes and Whirls

    Spellbound, she thrills 
      to pirouettes and whirls 

    Leaves her seat to dance in the aisle
      the precocious young child

    Shushed to sit down
      her bright eyes droop

    O, but for want of a mentor 
      with a rainbow sherbet scoop
Categories: whirls, dance, girl, sweet, teacher,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberAs the Spinning Wheel Whirls

In it’s magnificent cloak of colors.
Hypnotizing me from my deck.
Reminding me, to trust in God!
That no matter what people think, 
His created world, is not a wreck!

Children are born, people do work!
But news paints the world as “ugly.”
We forget there is one leader here.
Invisible, and whose laws to follow.
News, tells us, lies galore and false
truths to follow.

The world will end when God decides
Tis so and not one second before.
Not by fear mongers, crawling all news 
and websites.
So please do create beauty with your 
pen, at sunset and at dawn.


Nor slam a door in a friendly poet’s 
face.
Do not ignore old poet friends,if so~
What are you, in a comment race?
When we use our fellow poets as 
make-believe friends.
Tis we, not countries, who are the true,
dark disgrace.
Arrogant,phony oligarchs with pens, 
Who write of love, but cannot be true,
to love a poet to the very end!




                     3-30-2022
Categories: whirls, how i feel, poetry,
Form: Rhyme


Peachy Whirls

Oh, such amorous flamenco
A bailaora who whirls  fervidly
Nascent paltriness, a winged coo
Unruffled yet sways seamlessly

To grasp is to grin and bear it
To ace is quite an arduous drill
To master is to act with grit 
And delectate the peachy whirl

One oblique pennant of breath
Suchlike to humane multitude
Defiance from old  shibboleth
A vagueness of life’s certitude

09.23.17
Categories: whirls, art, color, dance, life,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberWhirls

"Do not feel Lonely the entire Universe is inside you." Rumi

With endless microcosom's curl 
both inside and out of man's swirl 
of atoms and world's spins
each as lovely as a pearl.
For God's has formed, so many worlds
each in a perfect whorl.

Attach, connect, be playful, free
open arms and hearts by His decree
bless the large and the small
with grace and camaraderie 
together birthed in harmony
harken all to His call.
Categories: whirls, introspection, mystery, universe,
Form: Rhyme

"life Whirls On By"

Life whirls on by with
One million intentions,
One million locations 
To end up at
With one million new thoughts,
And I’m caught up in the jet stream…

Spinning, whirling, whirring,
Thinking, laughing, talking,
Loving, hurting;
Doing all the things
I’m meant to do 
From day to day,
Without really caring.

Tiny little pressure 
Points of pain and reassurance,
Needs of life
And needs of thought and
Love, and still the same
Old speed bumps,
Getting stuck, and climbing over…

Finding reasons, losing them
Then finding them again
A little bruised and worse-for-wear
But dust them off 
And use their fragile little bodies,
Hold their hand and
Walk so close you almost
Trust them and believe

Standing still and watch
The traffics tails,
Legs still march but 
Still, I’m standing still.
Watch the things that morph
And swirl around me,
Morph and change and run off
Over the horizon
Leaving me behind
Lost
Confused 
Slipping…
Categories: whirls, confusion, life
Form: I do not know?


Winged Whirls

shoo, grasshopper green
       glide to verdant vales unseen
              let this young grass preen

              and

whiz by, dragonfly
       balmy afternoons, goodbye
              summer gone, winds sigh

              but

hush, hush, cicada
       hide your rain memoranda
             secret agenda
Categories: whirls, animals, nature, seasons,
Form: Rhyme
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