Moon Flower Poet Rhyme

Peachy Whirls

Oh, such amorous flamenco
A bailaora who whirls  fervidly
Nascent paltriness, a winged coo
Unruffled yet sways seamlessly

To grasp is to grin and bear it
To ace is quite an arduous drill
To master is to act with grit 
And delectate the peachy whirl

One oblique pennant of breath
Suchlike to humane multitude
Defiance from old  shibboleth
A vagueness of life’s certitude

09.23.17

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Susan Ashley September 26, 2017 at 3:20 PM Congratulations Moon Flower on your #1 placement with this great write! :) Moon Flower September 28, 2017 at 11:45 AM Thank you, Susan.

Heidi Sands September 26, 2017 at 2:58 PM Congratulations Moon Flower :) Moon Flower September 28, 2017 at 11:45 AM Thank you, Heidi.

Joseph May September 26, 2017 at 1:53 PM Congrats on your top win Moon Flower Moon Flower September 28, 2017 at 11:44 AM Thank you, Joseph.

Constance La France September 26, 2017 at 12:48 PM Moon, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement! Moon Flower September 28, 2017 at 11:43 AM Thank you, BW!

Charlie Smith September 26, 2017 at 9:31 AM Terrific write Moon Flower, a most deserving win, congratulations... Moon Flower September 26, 2017 at 11:51 AM Thank you, Charlie.

Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2017 at 7:54 AM Nice win! Congrats, Moon Flower! Moon Flower September 26, 2017 at 11:51 AM Thank you, Kim.

Robert Lindley September 26, 2017 at 7:37 AM Congrats on your win my friend. Closing stanza is especially striking to me. "A vagueness of life's certitude." Yes, I too have pondered this long and deep. Moon Flower September 26, 2017 at 11:52 AM Thank you, Robert.

Silent One September 26, 2017 at 7:03 AM A lovely title, fitting for the poem.. Great use of language and the poem is really beautiful, the last stanza my favourite.. Congratulations on first place in the contest.. Moon Flower September 26, 2017 at 11:53 AM I'm so honored...