Whirls

"Do not feel Lonely the entire Universe is inside you." Rumi

With endless microcosom's curl 
both inside and out of man's swirl 
of atoms and world's spins
each as lovely as a pearl.
For God's has formed, so many worlds
each in a perfect whorl.

Attach, connect, be playful, free
open arms and hearts by His decree
bless the large and the small
with grace and camaraderie 
together birthed in harmony
harken all to His call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 10, 2012 at 7:08 PM
To my favs.
Poet Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 7:06 PM
A profound write from you Debi.Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Good one...Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Grisetti Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Brown Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Congrats on your win Debbie !! well done !! love ya deb...
Richards Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 9:14 AM
There are so many ways we can interpret such wise words, and make them connect to so many facets of our lives. Beautifully said! Congratulations, Debbie!
Williams Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Deb, congrats on your win..David
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May 10, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations once again on your winning piece Debbie xx
Onclaud Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 2:03 AM
and to be part of your universe is just grand, debbie.. congrats on your wonderful win in m contest!...:) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 11:36 AM
debbie, thanks for this nice piece... did you mean"attach, connect(,)be playful, free... just a comma i know but makes a lot of difference...:) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 11:36 AM
darn, TPS removed the picture!
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Aha, so this is a rime couee. One I have yet to try! At first I was thinking this could fit the midnight pearl category. Very nice entry, Debs and I enjoyed the quote at the bottom.
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April 24, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Wow, I sure would love to go star gazing with you, Deb. You have such a unique interpretation of the sights to be found throughout te universe. Awesome poem and I love the quote by Rumi. (Needed to hear that now.) Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 12:54 AM
Very uplifting write.Enjoyed.
Guzzi Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Thanks hon you know for me God has no sex ;)
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 11:44 AM
A double Rime couee.....even better!! another gem!
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