Whirling Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Whirling Leaves Of Life


    Hurl the spear of grief
    against the flayed sky
    The depth of every betrayal
    roots have taken hold in the mattress
                                          - a clichéd fact
    Too much pain and too much conflicts
    strong emotional currents

    The treadmills invisible source 
    filters through a stone wall
    nauseating stench, putrefaction
                                - chlorophyll-deficient status
    Humans sniveling complaints


    Neither dusk nor dawn can delude me
    Your mode of denial, determines my fate
    brooding does not happen on its own
    Absence of response is also an answer
    but action eliminates doubt
    Let the wind draw its final breath
                                    - pack up your trash

Premium Member A twirling swirling whirling Wind




                                                   across the land westerly wind swirling
                                                maelstrom hits the town wild wind whirling
                                                       roughened sea wind still twirling

Premium Member whirling ideas

whirling ideas
swirling in the air
free for the plucking

daring me to grab them up
and write them down


Whirling In Love

There was a big giant burst
In my heart it was the first
Time it really stirred up feelings
That sent me into a reeling
Spin of emotions that won't stop
I've been twirling like a top
Whirling all around near you
Round and round, what do I do
Spun into a love that I
Can not fight, I wont deny
I like the dizziness you cause
Keep me spinning, do not pause
Any of the love you give
Every moment we both live
Will be a topsy turvy one
Full of happy crazy fun

Premium Member The Galaxy In Your Heart

The revolution of stars in the galaxy
Resembles the whirling of dreams in your heart
The unknown part of the galaxy
Symbolizes the unachievable dreams in your heart
The galaxy is the future base of mankind
And your dreams are your future life goals
The galaxy in the dark is to be conquered one day
And your dreams in the unpredictable futue are to be fulfilled one day
The galaxy is created by God
And your dreams are planned by you
Bright the galaxy bright the dreams
The galaxy fills the space with twinkling stars
And the dreams  will fill your life with thrilling hopes 
Maybe you'll not be alone in this life struggle
As the galaxy gifted by god
Resembling man's hopes and dreams
Is always above your head
And the dreams in your heart 
Will always shine 
Like the galaxy above your head

Premium Member Whirling Dervish

The bedlam lifts if only for a while;
a brief but needed calm falls on the house
when she departs for school aboard the bus.
Though trying hard to suppress overt smiles,
I grin in the direction of my spouse,
for any more would be superfluous.

But storms can interrupt our best laid plans
and so it seems our calm was but an eye;
no sooner had we contemplated peace,
than fires gave way to cast iron frying pans:
a chance that funnel clouds could fill the sky
and pressures here at home might soon increase.

Who is this damned administrative fool
who brought it on himself to close the school?

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Premium Member Whirling Fairies Rondine

Whirling fairies on your fingertips glide,
cajoling imagination awake;
The touch of a flower right at daybreak
electric, there’s no place magic can hide;
Everything’s vivid your mind feels tie dyed;
Lit by a current green eyes turn opaque;
Whirling fairies;
If you believe? You’ll never be confined;
Nature’s surroundings you quickly uptake;
They tend to reside outside by the lake,
 your initial vision magnified;
Whirling fairies.

Premium Member Whirling Colors of the Cosmos

whirling colors of the cosmos
a new window opens up
azure porthole promising a new world
I gasp at her surrounding oranges
my favorite colors

Premium Member Whirling Watermelon Ride

I woke up one gray and melancholy morning
munching oatmeal and buttered toast, alone
same as yesterday, last week and maybe tomorrow 
when I saw a whirling wonder flying down the road. 

It whirled outside my windowpane
it whirled from head to toe
it whirled with neon pinks and greens
it whirled and twirled and flowed! 

I saw a bicycle with watermelon wonder wheels 
as it rode in tumbling tandem down the road 
and on it sat a generous, plump lady ballerina 
wearing bright red lipstick, holding a bright red rose. 

She waved at me and smiled, as I gawked at her, alone
her hair flew wildly behind her, as she pedaled down the road
the clouds suddenly parted, and as the morning sun shone
joy filled my eyes, to see that watermelon wheel rider
whirling down the road.

Whirling

wish to sleep
not to die;
wish to fly
not to cry

root to vertex
not any text;
the breath’s whip
in life’s fax

feast of end
implanting trend;
in whining gyre
swiveling blood gland


© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
09/09/2021

Whirling Wind

a funnel-shaped cloud 
progresses in a narrow 
path with tornado.

Premium Member Whirling Leaves

 
the north wind is strong this Autumn day
and leaves from trees are fluttering down
twirling in a whirling dance . . . 
like weeping tears of red, orange and gold
they lay decaying on the still green grass below
and then, spin away in a wild breeze to distant places
and the bare branches groan and moan their sadness

__________________________
October 18, 2020


Poetry/Verse/whirling leaves
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1296-091-18
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(29)
sponsor, Brian Strand, NA

Premium Member Whirling Dervish Gone Mad

dancing 
prancing
twirling
whirling
dervish loving lake’s mirror reflection
dancing, prancing, whirling inspection

Whirling Wail

A man knotted at tail of misery,
Dragged around till by a Moses set free.
Now with his lip manage his society.

Josh Berry. Ancestral Pen. Ancestral Form. Whirling Wail

Premium Member Twirling Whirling Swirling Into Myself

Twirling, whirling, swirling into myself
I listen to my ready soul
I take blank canvas off a shelf

Twirling, whirling, swirling into myself
My muse becomes my happy elf.
As I begin, I feel whole


Twirling, whirling, swirling into myself
I listen to my ready soul

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