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Whirling Leaves

the north wind is strong this Autumn day and leaves from trees are fluttering down twirling in a whirling dance . . . like weeping tears of red, orange and gold they lay decaying on the still green grass below and then, spin away in a wild breeze to distant places and the bare branches groan and moan their sadness __________________________ October 18, 2020 Poetry/Verse/whirling leaves Copyright Protected, ID 19-1296-091-18 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(29) sponsor, Brian Strand, NA

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Date: 10/20/2020 11:16:00 AM
A whirling dance to distant places...love your description!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/21/2020 7:20:00 AM
Lonna, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance
Date: 10/18/2020 1:29:00 PM
Lovely poem, like the lovely leaves that fall in the autumn, whispering caresses to the yearning heart. Love this Constance. Bless you
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Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2020 7:46:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the visit and great comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 10/18/2020 11:52:00 AM
Or the limbs could be dancing with joy at being free of their burdens? Aloha! Rico
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Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2020 7:48:00 AM
Rico, oh yes that is a possibility but soon they will wear a heavy clock of white, thanks for visiting and commenting _Constance
Date: 10/18/2020 11:15:00 AM
Nice penning Constance, lovely imagery and linking it to autumnal scenes.Blessings,Gordon
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Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2020 7:48:00 AM
Gordon, thanks for the visit and compliment _Constance
Date: 10/18/2020 10:38:00 AM
a beautiful depiction of autumn:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/18/2020 10:43:00 AM
Jan, thanks so much for visiting and the compliment and HUGS _Constance

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