the barefoot bard Poet Rhyme

A twirling swirling whirling Wind

                                                   across the land westerly wind swirling
                                                maelstrom hits the town wild wind whirling
                                                       roughened sea wind still twirling

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Kevin M Davis May 25, 2026 at 8:36 AM Douglas, we have dust devils in Arizona, but your poem invokes Australia. Thanks. Kevin the barefoot bard May 25, 2026 at 4:16 PM Good day Kevin Big Nor Westerlies with low humidity in the summer in Southern Australia are associated with intense wildfires Blessings Douglas

Judy Ball May 25, 2026 at 6:35 AM I live in Alberta and love to watch the dust devils play across the fields. Nice one here. God Bless, JB the barefoot bard May 25, 2026 at 4:13 PM good day Judy dust devils is a new term for me Blessings Douglas

Terry Griffiths May 24, 2026 at 5:44 AM "Swirl" & "twirl" are terrific words the barefoot bard May 26, 2026 at 2:35 AM good day Terry I don't think its just the wind that swirls and twirls. Todays society the brains of many swirls twirls AND whirls thank you for checking in Best Wishes Douglas