Untidy Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Upstairs

The glasses are empty the wine has been drunk
A table left untidied, with plates undone
The young shoots are patterning the apple trunk
Life appears for the favour of young
The old branches cut and piled on the ground
The old shades now vanished away
The TV controls wait somewhere to be found
Time stands still as if on delay
I hear your voice, feel it shifts through the air
The breeze of this morning flies by
You say I can’t see you here, are you upstairs?
I probably am, I reply…

On Being Untidy

The more I let go of
these tiresome soul struggles,
the should haves,
the should bes, 
the more it is possible,
to be messy and
alive.

Premium Member Untidy Pluto Demerit

Pluto made a dwarf
not for being far too small
precinct too cluttered


Untidy House

UNTIDY HOUSE 

Untidy house!
Round and round
Racing ‘round like headless fowl
Cleaning, cleaning frenzy is the go,
Guests are arriving nearing so
House of daily living though
Is not what they want to see?
All spic-n-span is not of daily grind.
So your visiting folk
Are introduced into a world
Of a falsehood here
But for them all they want to see
Is You!
The person of the house,
The rellie,
Or the one they call friend
And the one they’ve come to know.

Untidy house!
Tis equally same
As some wearing tattoo,
Ring nose piercing,
Being wheel chair bound mobility,
Speaking with a lisp,
Walking with aide of stick,
For those same souls
Maybe disfigurement 
And if it’s that
Then over time
Magically a disappearing act
Therefore all the world to see
The real person in the skin within.

Untidy house no more......

Francis Cooper - Mac © 22-Jun-20

Untidy Desparation

Let me love or die
Sometimes it comes first; sometimes
afterwards
believe me, you shall be in that
like mad;
Try once, for you, for me
oh please -
let me love or die.

Untidy

Untidy
I’m battered down below
And unkempt up top
A mess
Simply disheveled
Unstable in my mind
Unsteady in my stance
Straighten me out
Like only you can


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