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Premium MemberWhy You Wasten Time Praise God-Praise Jesus

Why you taking all that energy and time
Being ungrateful pouty wasting all of your life
You hourly daily time disgusting unredeemable on making up lost time
Complaining sustaining in your sorrow in your brief lapses of unbelief
Miss spoken unspoken silently and loud you're disbelief
A wise man once said you may kill time but one day time's going to kill you
Revelations part sometimes hard but yet so true
Lord I ma stop mine confession find the right now confessing I'm praising I am in worship with you in my mind in my heart continually so second by second by minute by minute by hour by hour audibly and intangibly in my mind now that I praise you been made free, in Jesus Name always 
Amen



9/15/22
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2022©
Categories: unredeemable, anxiety, change, cheer up,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Premium MemberEarth Momma Blues

Momma
don't help me
grow up to love CowBoys,

The ones
who can buy you
or sell you at will,
or tell you
they don't care
whether healthy or ill,

The ones who know good ole' boys
were born
unredeemable pills

Smoking up weeds
or stoking up stills,

Klanish threats
to the cattle
without sufficient
commitment
to armed forcing kill will.

Momma don't help me
grow up to hate CowBoys,

Grown tired of their noise
their boys will be boys
armed violating toys
dark win/lose ploys
most trust in just goys
red true white blue
patriotic employs

Momma
don't buy me
another white cowboy,
they just don't work out
they leave with a pout
I just wanna shout,
What's it all about
when your Alpha's a cowboy?

Who has no clue
what he's to do,
which side to chew
in red,
white,
and true blue
blues.
Categories: unredeemable, blue, boy, earth, health,
Form: Lyric


Premium MemberDisarray

To Dis a Ray

Tim felt prismatic and took off his polychrome Ray Bans

He had to revisit his novella and needed undistorted vision

To sort out gems from false gold and writer’s confusion


Had he really been so blinded with bands full of colour

Why were so few synonyms for variegations of rainbows

Was he too cheerful or flippant as an unredeemable scribe


The paper oozed with pots of gold and layers of colour

Chakras went up and down spines of meditation and joy

Jesters wore crowns and purple attire to rise from below


Clouds were made for the twilight of tranquil surrender

As he had to write all Peace in pastels on the fabric of hope

Was he really a utopian fantasist who shines through my pages


Repetitive maybe but the mist mixed with sunshine above

Droplets of kindness painted a picture of perfection’s illusion

He had to tweak it because even climbing roses had thorns 


So many words in the canon and chorus of dreams and delight

Revising a story amounts will not hinder narration and license

Maybe he will just dis one ray from his tale and see how it goes


17th November 2019
Categories: unredeemable, devotion,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberIndependence Days

Silvers strands line her hair like salt in an aquamarine ocean

Wrinkles shine in ripples on the quiet foreshore of hindsight

	She dyed her hair blue today because she can

The engine still roars when she puts her walking stick aside

Mounts the quad bike and sails through the isles in the shop

	A keeper of memories she sounds out her youth

Joints crackle the tune while she dances in rhythm and rhyme

Sings aloud from a mind set alight to a chorus of an angel

	She never consulted for divine intervention

Close to the checkout the tattoo on her belly wriggles and chimes

A lip ring as long as a tear drop from heaven tickles her fancy

	Firmly lodged in faith compassion and love

At the exit a watchman guards safe passage and kindness

And wonders what pills she is on to proceed with such joy

	An unredeemable survivor of a rebellious soul

They call her a basket case but her crazy insanity keeps her together

Purple mascara and face paint are waiting for a final farewell

	Just for today she will colour the shadows of her rainbow


04th June 2019 

A Contest of Ageing

Sponsor Emile Pinet
Categories: unredeemable, age,
Form: Free verse

Perfect Brainstorm

Inside my brain resides
A deadly combination
Of my mother's maniacal heritage
And my father's drunken rages.
A perfect storm, if you will,
Leaving behind dreams
Destroyed by doubt
And hopes undone by fear.
Leaving darkness and chaos,
Echoes of what was
Or what could have been.
Broken bones scattered
In the recesses
Blown by winds of despair;
The worst of nature and nurture.
Yet a small flame still burns
Ever so dim, ever so constant,
Waiting for a gentle breath
Of compassion to fuel its light,
Waiting for love and understanding
To shield and protect it;
Compassion, love and understanding
That must come from within
And flow from my heart.

As I grow in strength, I strive
To overcome anger and hate
And desire for revenge.
I work to cultivate forgiveness
And let go of ill will;
Loving what has been deemed
Unloveable
And esteeming what has been deemed
Unredeemable.
I release the captives residing in prisons
Awaiting my judgment;
For they are not mine to judge.

Inside my brain resides a perfect storm
Twisted and turned;
Tempered and tamed
By clouds of compassion.


10/18/2018
Categories: unredeemable, courage, forgiveness, love, mental
Form: Free verse


Forgotten and Unredeemable

I'm forgotten...
and the thing is I never knew how 
forgotten I really was until I was 
reminded by your failure to
love me. 

Now I'm sinking in 
a reverie of loneliness, 
and just can't seem to
find the barren shore.

I’m unredeemable…
and the thing is I never knew how 
unredeemable I really was until I was
reminded by your incurable soul. 

Now I am left irrelevant;
irreparable and wounded
without a mending suture-
for life is irrevocably unfixable,
and I am disregarded and
remain hopeless. 
Despondent and desperate,
                    I will be remembered as unredeemable. 


October 27, 2017
Categories: unredeemable, loneliness,
Form: Free verse

To Your Ears

TO YOUR EARS

To your ears I whisper words of love
You hear of how much deep I have drown
Unredeemable from the oceans of your heart
To your ears, I confess the secrets of my thoughts
I say the truths that only you will ever know
I make promises that you know I will keep
I say the words that you want to hear
I have said it all; now, you have heard it all.

To your ears I whisper words of hate
You hear of how much hatred I have for you
I have forgiven you so many times that time can’t remember
Forgiveness far spent; I have no other forgiveness to give you
To your ears, I confess the secrets of my thoughts
I make threats that you know I will keep
I say out the words you never expected to hear
I have said it all; now, you have heard it all.



									Lordvip
									D’ Poetic Beast
									07068097126
Categories: unredeemable, life, world,
Form: Light Verse
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