Unordered Poems | Examples


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Entangled Mind and Soul

I am not normal no one is .. 
   Far inside the feeling exists 
       Round and round I go over it 
          Where is it ? 
          It ceiced to be ..  no bell ring 

Engraved set thoughts to be 
implicated into eachother 
  As they continue no matter 
  Links are made and i batter 
  Which arr the myths which are the truths ..
  How bitter ... i may feel if I declare a myth from a glare 

Acquire wits 
        
Accelerated emotions .. 
 Bewildered if not listened 
 Obvious is already known 
 Feel so deep I hate to repeat .. 
 Perception is quick 
 Subconscious level is real .. 
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Converse and express 
  The emotions deflection.. 
    With enthusiastic rhythm of convention..
Expecting returned mutual appreciation.. 


No recess
  Just distress

 thoughts are making 
  me feel lovely but also unordered.  .. uterly groundless and bounded ..  

My heart entangles 
   

My thoughts hurt me , and its like subconcious bullets.. running through my neutral paths... 

At last ... its hard maybe its better if you love your simple life , i am not like that ..
 If you are me ,then you're welcome to engage and feel the words I now set free ..

Premium Member Black Eyed Murder In the Field

A seamless sky, black eyed murder in the field
A sudden raptor flight, the murder yields

A scape of snow on vast hills afar
A bracing hold on life still and stark

The big fields crawl then climb up the hills
Snow-capped forever greens feel the chills

The window captures its own moving art
A picture frame of real life, of living art

A sudden stop! An ancient post
An iron fence above the moat

A brick formed mansion, dark windows loom
Shadows stare right back through snowy gloom

Roof slate amiss shows unordered line
Snow flakes gently fall to ease the eyes

Jolt, screech, in motion again
The mansion speaks to me; don't come back again!

The view from front to back I see from my seat
I rub my eyes again and stare indeed

For as the train moves faster past the house
I see the shadows follow my stare through the house

I look away but then I have to look back
A faceless old lady waves, she's dressed all in black.

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