Unloveable Poems | Examples

Unloveable me

Hidden in weeds
 heart vavle on squeeze 
Watch me not bleed
Even if it cuts deep
Keeps you away from 
My  boredom  pale bule face
Made you see, me
The unloveable me
 On a big 
  screen 
undressing this soul
A human floating above
Spirts weak 
from night terror screams.
Dark heart beating weak

You stared  right though my core.
As my reflection hides and retreats .
Shadows knows you will be bored .
Not fooling me.
Once you see all the stains 
 I dont succeed .
The odds that were against me.
 The unloveable me.
No way you will  feel the same 
Once you finally see 
Our
last kiss, 
was  from the night before
And nothing makes u miss me
Will it be my last
Don't make it yours
Unloveable me
Hidden in weeds 
Smoke and more
When I was slowly drifting away
Into space.
 saying no more
You left my hand
Sitting lonely 
When you were on your own course, 
I wanna land  
In my forgotten  land ,
Of the Unloveable me .
Thinking of the things we had 
In a middle of sinkhole
As earth swallow, 
 us whole 
Searching for another dark tower 
 that holds the key
You were the one to save me
Categories: unloveable, death, deep, depression, divorce,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberMind of the Heart

“feeling not thinking, soul with love linking ~

we attained God consciousness unblinking”

I've been told that I wear my heart on my sleeve
that I try too hard to love others
that I open my heart up to pain because I try
and try again to help others and to love those
that some people consider unloveable

But my question for those that criticize me is
"Why don't you?"
How can you see all the pain around you and do
nothing? or turn your back to what you see each day?
How can you not reach out?

Homelessness, addiction, cancer, food insecurity,
inflation rising so fast that many people can not keep up,
healthcare costs so high that sometimes the choice
is care or food?  How can I turn my back when
I have plenty, yet blanch at a $50 co-pay?

Love one another is a command that I hear often,
yet I don't see many people trying to do it
I do love others, and I try every day to show God's love
to those that feel unloved and when I find someone else trying, 
I can feel our souls link and my heart sighs
Categories: unloveable, community, love,
Form: Free verse


Unloveable

Unloveable
It’s my only vice —
don’t make me say it twice.

A master of none,
a better way to say:
I’m an expert at nothing,
but I do many things.

I pick and I pull
until they aren’t there,
leaving me with the scalpel
to make the repairs.
Categories: unloveable, deep, depression, emotions, feelings,
Form: Free verse

Because My Heart Desires

My whole life, I felt like something was missing, like   my heart's desire   was only half full. But, I was okay.

Then one day, 
 because  you liked me, 
 because  you wanted me,  because  you took me out on dates, 
 because  you made love to me, 
 because  you needed me and I needed you too, all that changed.

For the 1st time,   my heart's desire   was filling up, and it was finally full. Nothing was missing. 

But, then one day, 
 because  you still loved your ex, 
 because  you went back to her when she needed you,
 because  I couldn't go back to feeling like something was missing,
 because  I didnt know how to let go, and
 because  now, you even have a new girlfriend.

In hindsight, I let   my heart's desire   make me unloveable, and even though I'm not okay right now, I will be, 
  Because My Heart Desires.
Categories: unloveable, boyfriend, desire, feelings, girlfriend,
Form: Free verse

gentle

i tried so hard to be gentle for you, to be quiet for you

i tried to silence my anger so your adulation could be heard

in the end, you did make me quiet. but, my anger is still there, pulling at the strings keeping me together. she wants to get out.

i must keep her in, she hurts too many, she ruins too much, maybe that's not her, maybe that's me. maybe that's you.

your initials will always be engraved into my soul. my eraser broke, i'm stuck with this branding.

you called me pretty, but a pretty face is nothing when you have a vandalized soul. you made me unloveable.there is no longer room for anyone else's name.

you hated my anger, but she loved you. I think she still does.
Categories: unloveable, analogy, violence,
Form: Free verse


Inflicted

You've made me feel
weak
Pathetic
Small
You've made me feel
Inadequate
Shameful 
unloveable 
And raw
You halted my dance 
And forced me to crawl
You taught me true fear
I'll never trust anyone
Ever 
Not at all
You've fed me to the wolves
And left me to rot 
Berated my name
And proved im easily forgot 
You've made me feel
Jealous
Sad 
Enraged
You've made me feel
Vacant
Hungry
And caged
Even with walls already built
From deep within me 
you stole 
My hopes and my dreams 
My chance 
At ever being whole
left bewildered and broken
Sunken and cold
Questioning How to protect
What is left 
of my soul
Categories: unloveable, abuse, growing up,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberA Fight

All I am is me;
Broken heart worn on my sleeve;
Forever friend zoned, 
A fight with ‘unloveable’;
Yet, a hopeless romantic.
Categories: unloveable, emotions, longing, love,
Form: Tanka

Perfect Brainstorm

Inside my brain resides
A deadly combination
Of my mother's maniacal heritage
And my father's drunken rages.
A perfect storm, if you will,
Leaving behind dreams
Destroyed by doubt
And hopes undone by fear.
Leaving darkness and chaos,
Echoes of what was
Or what could have been.
Broken bones scattered
In the recesses
Blown by winds of despair;
The worst of nature and nurture.
Yet a small flame still burns
Ever so dim, ever so constant,
Waiting for a gentle breath
Of compassion to fuel its light,
Waiting for love and understanding
To shield and protect it;
Compassion, love and understanding
That must come from within
And flow from my heart.

As I grow in strength, I strive
To overcome anger and hate
And desire for revenge.
I work to cultivate forgiveness
And let go of ill will;
Loving what has been deemed
Unloveable
And esteeming what has been deemed
Unredeemable.
I release the captives residing in prisons
Awaiting my judgment;
For they are not mine to judge.

Inside my brain resides a perfect storm
Twisted and turned;
Tempered and tamed
By clouds of compassion.


10/18/2018
Categories: unloveable, courage, forgiveness, love, mental
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberShould Be

I tried to be the person that you thought I should be.
But I couldn't.
I wanted to give you the things that you needed from me.
But I didn't.
I thought I would try to live your life instead of my own.
Though I shouldn't.
You wanted me to feel that I was less than zero.
But I wouldn't.
You want me to fail out here on my own.
But I won't.
You said that I was unloveable, untouchable.
But I'm not.
You were going to bury me.
But, you can't.
Categories: unloveable, betrayal, lost love, perspective,
Form: Free verse

God

God

I have not seen God's face; but I know he's there.
I feel and see him all around me.
In my blindness, you are my vision.
From the birds in the sky; to answer to prayers. 

I may not hear God's voice, but he talks to me through his word.

God has raised me up in my time of trouble when no one else did. 
Love me when I was unloveable. 
Thank you, God, for hearing me, when I was lost.
For giving me hope, holding me in your arms in my moment of doubt
For showing me the way; through the darkness. 

I may not always understand your ways, 
but God I put my trust in you.
Each step I take, I will give you all of me.
Categories: unloveable, christian, faith, god, prayer,
Form: I do not know?

Premium MemberA Lookalike

Was told my dog Rover chased someone on a bike
Can't be true, he hasn't ridden a bike since he was a tike
People causing trouble
Makes em unloveable
Did you ever think it could be a Rover lookalike
Categories: unloveable, humor,
Form: Limerick

Courage

Real courage is something you find deep inside
When your down and almost beaten
When you rise against the odds
Against logic and reason and yet succeed
To cou rage is to rout it
To mercilessly dominate all of you fears
And plough forwards regardless
This is real courage
To hope in the hopeless
For dispair is hopes time to shine
To stay true in falsness
For falsenes is truths time of brightness
And love, what is love
To love the unloveable
To love in the face of hatred, this is true courage
To love in hope and faithfulness
So go and take from this more courage than you'll  ever need
Love without limits, hope anyway and stay true, love
Categories: unloveable, courage, love,
Form: Free verse

Backpacking

My body,
carries
the weight of the pack.
Walking,
and seeking to pray.
Vast space
opens,
my unlockable hope.
Silence,
keeps monsters at bay.

My breath,
eases
at the sight of the moon.
Echoing,
everything is okay.
Lupine flower
kisses,
my unloveable me.
Fields,
offer beds to lay.

My spirit,
strengthens
inside of my walls,
pushing,
them out of the way.
Snow bank
freezes,
my unstoppable terror.
Trees,
whisper I may.

My heart,
sits
on top of the mountain,
crowing,
to meet the new day.
Glacier stream
quenches,
my unrelenting longing.
Trails,
wear anxiety away.

My soul,
joins
along with the rest.
Melting,
to oneness anyway.
Nature God,
consumes
my insatiable loneliness.
Everything,
makes connection today
Categories: unloveable, abuse, beauty, hope, inspiration,
Form: Free verse

Calming Silence

Everything is still now
I feel that every second I lose a pound
The peace is so relaxing can't hear a sound
The time pass by like leaves in a breeze
The calming silence is unbearable  now
I have to make sounds this is terrible
My soul is unloveable and breakable
Still I feel this Calming Silence
Categories: unloveable, sad,
Form: I do not know?

Again

In the music, everything burns away
And I’m left in a soundless vacuum filled with faceless people
The emotions that were bubbling inside my soul
Spilling out into a great dark intangible space
Suddenly I realize
For the millionth time
That I am broken
Helpless but not hopeless
Disgusting but not repulsive
Unloveable but not unloved
That I don’t have it together
That I never will
Control was never in my hands
It’s in yours
Along with the whole world

I hurt 
Because I am sinful
I hurt
And you know I hurt and you’ve felt my pain
I hurt
But you love me and there’s nothing I can do to change that

Deep breath, give it all up, begin again.
There is always time to start over.
Categories: unloveable, faith, hope, music,
Form: Free verse

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