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Unloveable me

Hidden in weeds heart vavle on squeeze Watch me not bleed Even if it cuts deep Keeps you away from My boredom pale bule face Made you see, me The unloveable me On a big screen undressing this soul A human floating above Spirts weak from night terror screams. Dark heart beating weak You stared right though my core. As my reflection hides and retreats . Shadows knows you will be bored . Not fooling me. Once you see all the stains I dont succeed . The odds that were against me. The unloveable me. No way you will feel the same Once you finally see Our last kiss, was from the night before And nothing makes u miss me Will it be my last Don't make it yours Unloveable me Hidden in weeds Smoke and more When I was slowly drifting away Into space. saying no more You left my hand Sitting lonely When you were on your own course, I wanna land In my forgotten land , Of the Unloveable me . Thinking of the things we had In a middle of sinkhole As earth swallow, us whole Searching for another dark tower that holds the key You were the one to save me

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Date: 5/29/2025 8:22:00 PM
' When I was slowly drifting away into space, you were the one to save me. ' Sometimes that's what it takes to reconnect. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. Welcome to Poetry Soup, John. ~ Brandy
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John Diket
Date: 5/30/2025 10:55:00 AM
Thanks alot , I really haven't share my work with anyone until I join P.S. So when you quoted me it was definitely appreciated!
Date: 5/18/2025 12:03:00 PM
Hey welcome to PS big J
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John Diket
Date: 5/19/2025 4:39:00 AM
Thanks, Actually I never shared my work with anyone until I joined P.S. THANK YOU for reading!!
Date: 5/2/2025 5:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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