Unloveable me

Hidden in weeds
 heart vavle on squeeze 
Watch me not bleed
Even if it cuts deep
Keeps you away from 
My  boredom  pale bule face
Made you see, me
The unloveable me
 On a big 
  screen 
undressing this soul
A human floating above
Spirts weak 
from night terror screams.
Dark heart beating weak

You stared  right though my core.
As my reflection hides and retreats .
Shadows knows you will be bored .
Not fooling me.
Once you see all the stains 
 I dont succeed .
The odds that were against me.
 The unloveable me.
No way you will  feel the same 
Once you finally see 
Our
last kiss, 
was  from the night before
And nothing makes u miss me
Will it be my last
Don't make it yours
Unloveable me
Hidden in weeds 
Smoke and more
When I was slowly drifting away
Into space.
 saying no more
You left my hand
Sitting lonely 
When you were on your own course, 
I wanna land  
In my forgotten  land ,
Of the Unloveable me .
Thinking of the things we had 
In a middle of sinkhole
As earth swallow, 
 us whole 
Searching for another dark tower 
 that holds the key
You were the one to save me

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Date: 6/1/2025 7:51:00 PM
Hello, Unlovable me. I love you as what Jesus Christ or Father Christ would say. I love all people even my enimies bcoz they just don't understand why it's like that but I still love them even the unloveable u, I'm imitating the Divine Lord. I invite you to check some of my craft and people say it's a learning tool, you can read or comment if u want. Thanks in advance ~Jac
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John Diket
Date: 6/4/2025 3:10:00 AM
I'm the same way , love everyone also we can learn from the worst of your enemies
Date: 5/29/2025 8:22:00 PM
' When I was slowly drifting away into space, you were the one to save me. ' Sometimes that's what it takes to reconnect. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. Welcome to Poetry Soup, John. ~ Brandy
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John Diket
Date: 5/30/2025 10:55:00 AM
Thanks alot , I really haven't share my work with anyone until I join P.S. So when you quoted me it was definitely appreciated!
Date: 5/18/2025 12:03:00 PM
Hey welcome to PS big J
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John Diket
Date: 5/19/2025 4:39:00 AM
Thanks, Actually I never shared my work with anyone until I joined P.S. THANK YOU for reading!!
Date: 5/2/2025 5:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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