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Premium Member Mister Cue Ball Man

Just noticed for the very first time
My hairline is definitely receding
My crowning glory, my silvery dome
My time here is short I'm conceding

If I ever wind up as Mr. Cue Ball Man
It's my time to close up shop
Basically, it'll be over, over and done
No incentive with no silvery crop

May sound vain, a wee bit conceded
But with this mug that I possess
Really need these charming adornments
Need all the help I can get

To impress the ladies, my hair was it
Running fingers through my silvery locks
They murmured tender sweet love words
Offering me all that they've got

Dream on dear fellow, you sound delusional
It's the total package that's the thing
With or without your silvery locks
As long as you've still got that zing

Premium Member Florida Is Beckoning Again

Florida is beckoning once again 

The sun, the sand, those leisurely days

The total package, the change of scenery

The change of routine we all need and crave

There are many places on earth

Where this can be achieved

But this is MY paradise, MY wee bit of heaven

Everyone has their own favourite getaway

Florida has always been my second home

In particular, Siesta Key, just south of Sarasota

Those familiar with the area

Know when I refer to a white sandy beach

I'm not just whistling Dixie

Siesta Key is world famous

Think I'll head off to dreamland now

And pretend I'm there, in my own piece of paradise!



© Jack Ellison 2015

Gene In the Bottle

He is a leader, a great one!

Excessively funny! Yes… An incredible one!

He’s everything in this school, I should know.

That gene in the bottle is magically anew.

 

What else can you say about him?

Total package! Well, no one can beat his prim!

 He sometimes easily gets mad,

His magical stories from the bottle get me tad.

 

He is such a wit! So much obvious!

His smiles symbolize him for being so much curious.

Whenever he tells his feelings to the rest of us,

We ended up smirking like he brightens us.

 

He puts plenty of spice in our smallest world,

That gene in the bottle is a greatest story of so untold.

Things can’t be always the same without his presence,

Magical things are not possible because of his essence.


Premium Member Mister Cue Ball Man

Just noticed for the very first time
My hair line is definitely receding
My crowning glory, my silvery dome
My time here is short I'm conceding

If I ever wind up as Mr. Cue Ball Man
It'll be time to close up shop
Basically it'll be over, over and done
No incentive without my silvery crop

May sound vain, a wee bit conceded
But with this mug that I possess
Really need these charming adornments
Need all the help I can get

To impress the ladies, my hair was it
Running fingers through my silvery locks
They murmured tender sweet love words
Offering me all that they've got

Dream on dear fellow, you sound delusional
It's the total package that's the thing
With or without your silvery locks
As long as you've still got that zing

© Jack Ellison 2013

Premium Member Class a Number One

Not every day is Class A Number One
There are some that are not quite as good
Like today for instance, started off fine
Then people got misunderstood

In desire to help, they do certain things
That makes others feel inferior
Can be unintentional without any malice
Perception is what's going to linger

Please fear not there is always a solution
Treat everyone you know with respect
It creates a much better understanding
Sweet feelings of love it reflects

Not every one's a Class A Number One day
But most are usually above average
Maybe it's me with my positive outlook
That helps make the total package

© Jack Ellison 2013

Premium Member Hott

Heaven just walked through the door; I know because

O M G! His looks, his ways. . . He has no flaws!

The total package, but be wary; he might be

Temptation in an angel’s guise, “Hott” with a double “t.”


For the Captcha Contest of Judy Konos


Premium Member Knowledge Is Timeless

Knowledge is worth more than gold
Keep learning
Knowledge is worth more than rubies
Keep your mind active
Knowledge is worth more than currency
Keep your time fulfilled
Knowledge is worth more than in-kind trade
Keep your total package renewed
Knowledge is worth more than possessions
Keep your knowledge fresh, current, worthy
Keep your knowledge coming
Keep your knowledge error free
How you gift to you
Know

My Angel's My Son

THE YEAR WAS 2001 THE SECOND DAY OF NOVEMBER
MY ANGEL EMERGED WHAT A DAY 2 REMEMBER

9-LBS 6-OZ A TOTAL PACKAGE OF LOVE
ALL THANKS & APPRECIATION MUSTERED WAS SENT 2 THE MAN ABOVE

NEVER KNEW A LOVE LIKE THIS.
COULD EVER EXIST.
A LIFE OF COMMITMENT WAS SEALED WITH A KISS.

EVERY DEMON & EVIL SPIRIT HE THRUSTED FROM ME.
CLEANSED MY HEART & MY SOUL THEN TRUSTED IN ME.

2 LOVE HIM & STEER HIM FROM DANGER SO THAT'S WHAT IVE DONE.
SEE MY ANGEL IS UNIQUE MY ANGEL'S MY SON...

Letter To Cupid

Letter to Cupid
 
I got a few things to tell so just listen please
Cupid you hit all of your targets, so why you missing me
It’s like you can’t see me, so let me make myself visible
Casue without your presence my life has been miserable
Anticipating your arrow enough to where I’m ready to fight now
I feel I have the total package, Mr. Right looking for Mrs. Right, right now
Too much love inside to give to be living my life on my own
Even God put Eve here so Adam wouldn’t spend his nights alone
I always send you these love requests but all you do is decline
Like I’m better off alone, as if I don’t deserve a Valentine
I’m a good man but finding a good woman is just to hard
Be honest with me, is true love even In my deck of cards
My feeling is getting desperate, to the point where I live or die with it
Cupid I’m willing to take your arrow and commit suicide with it
All I need is one favor from you and I’ll be just fine
Just maybe you could shoot your arrow at me the next time
 
Stevie D/ Love Master
Dedicated to Soul mate searching

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